Satisfied With My Revisions

Imagination reminds me of things I dare not remember
No idea if they happened or not
Certainly not swirling in pinks and oranges
the way I wanted things to do, amid black and white stripes
I was a modern era woman who adores the mixing of dots and stipes

No one does that! Until they did, famous designers, shaking us up.
Showing us that absolute means nothing. I adore everything sixties.
Memory brings me things I know probably did not happen
But they are spruced up and more exciting now and enthusiasm sells.
I gloss them over, and use psychedelic paint, and play them in my mind.
Satisfied with them.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:48 PM
That's okay, Caren. Lots of us on here enjoy "everything sixties." I am learning that one can wear stripes and polka-dots together...well you might, but not me! LOL
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 9:27 PM
I can and I do and I did this week!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:21 PM
We do that! <3
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 9:27 PM
We really do!
Dietrich Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 3:15 PM
You were ahead of your time, my dear!! Keep up your artistic talents!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 9:27 PM
Thank you my friend.
Peck Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:21 AM
I like this poem a lot! Minis, A-lines and polka-dot bikinis. The 60s stirred up a lot! I look forward to your poems :)
Krutsinger Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 8:45 AM
I do love the sixties, when things turned into yellow, pink and orange and psychedelic!
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