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21st Century Imperialism

Your country has laws 
freedom and rights 
that lead to the courts 
who settle up fights 

You think it’s a given 
yet see it unfair 
determined and driven 
but going nowhere 

A victim of racism 
keeps you beneath 
prevented by sexism 
seeking relief 

being gay is illegal 
in the land of Qatar 
women ain’t equal 
put behind bars 

Issue ultimatum 
as if it’s our place 
try and persuade them 
it’s all in poor taste  

We used to invade them 
back in the day 
a land they’ve retaken 
to get their own way 

But now we are forcing 
the way of the west 
without our armed forces 
because we know best 

We had no right 
to rule over them 
this time we’re polite 
as we do it again 

It isn’t our place 
it never will be 
so as for poor taste 
how stupid are we

Virus's Identity

It springs like rain on mown grass
Winds murmur over quiet pines
No hoofbeats of horseman lost
No limpid water from deep springs
oasis lift from arid sand.
Barbarian rides past towers without watchman
Deep thunder in mountain thrown up
Footprints of the darkness
stone like starkness
Harrowing & unhalting.
Grand inquisitor, earth's jailhouser
coverned deep and iron ringed
submerged in auto-cage of steal
Far from end and near to nowhere
lifting our heads to the light of God:
Spare my family and friends, thou great
keeper of souls
In its direness and darkness
footprints of light, our bodies taken,
our self retaken,
wastelands of ruins heaped with ash

mea culpa, mea culpa

Premium Member Remembering Him Gone

Sometimes life circumstances force us,
To observe a loved one who has drifted away.
I oft reason why the occasion was thus,
And motivation for his impulse to stray.

Was it unforseen things on life's plate,
Or his inability to endure daily stress.
Whatever his rational I'll never berate,
Placing merit on choices or second guess.

For I journeyed not one step in Joe's shoes, 
Or had to experience firsthand his troubles.
Was it the incubus of Viet Nam I oft muse,
Or did losing children leave life as stubble.

I'll acknowledge he's endured a lot in life,
Albeit much by his own hand's fashion.
The sin of alcohol, war, or matrimonial strife,
Has left family with only love and compassion.

Knowing that lost years can ere be retaken,
Leave just memories framing most days sad.
But love and forgiveness will not be shaken,
For he's still our missing brother and dad.

served four tours in Viet Nam and missing since 1984


Wake Up

See, the stars are heading towards mars
The faithfuls are hungry over mass
And the nation's treasury needs a political pass.

Broken pieces of human dignity
Lies scattered on the earth of greed.
Able bodied men strangling themselves to feed,
Still corpse leave messages of futility.

To hell to this life of mischief
Life is sweet but so brief.
Hopes must awaken,
Lost glories must be retaken.
Fallen trees must rise
To this call, so be wise.

It Gorges Upon Itself

Weightless feeling, remembrance of something new
Total disregard for pain receptors, a tangled wire
A recaptured moment in time, a retaken picture
A rescind into misery, but it is okay. It’s normal
Applause for the inner vacuum, devouring entirely
A recap on events that have yet to take place
Some call it seeing into the future. “Prophecies” 
But the truth of the matter is, history repeats itself

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