Refreeze Poems | Examples


Across the Lake

The ice is slowly melting underneath me. 

There is a real danger here.

Now I am frozen and drowning. 

But still on the surface. 

Just paralyzed by fear. 

Thinking that if I stay still…

The lake will refreeze. 

So I will stand here, shivering. 

Afraid to move to safety. 

My family is calling for me. 

I am finally brave enough to take the risk-

To tell them how I’ve been feeling this whole time. 

It’s too bad it took a crisis-

To finally have a catharsis. 

Because now they cannot hug me close. 

But at least I know they care. 

Even if they can only do so from a distance.
Categories: refreeze, extended metaphor, mental illness,
Form: Free verse

What You Mean

Its cold in the morning at 6 am
Its cold to get up
Its cold to sit down
Its cold to look out the window
But then i see you
I am warm
Its warm to smile
Its warm to dance
Its warm to be around you
You are the sun in my cold dark world
if you ever left i would just refreeze
i would be lifeless
Nothing more than a animation of the dark
So please stay and warm my heart
as your heart splashes on my pad to make my art
Inspiration is your greatest gift
Categories: refreeze, art, faith, girlfriend-boyfriend, imagination,
Form: I do not know?


Winter Encounter

It was by chance our paths had crossed
that cold December day;
a love I might have had, but lost,
the one that slipped away.

I reached to kiss a ruddy cheek,
his old endearing smile;
the sight of him had turned me weak,
though only for a while.

The words he spoke I can't recall,
our spark had gone astray;
for in the past we'd said it all,
so much to my dismay.

He claimed, one day, he'd like to meet,
though he would never call;
the weatherman predicted sleet,
but tears began to fall.

Good seeing you again, old friend,
then said he could not stay;
I felt the blister of the wind
and watched him walk away.

A heart that had begun to thaw,
then started to refreeze;
I drew my overcoat in awe
of winter's frigid breeze.
Categories: refreeze, lost loveold, old,
Form: Rhyme
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