Winter Encounter

It was by chance our paths had crossed
that cold December day;
a love I might have had, but lost,
the one that slipped away.

I reached to kiss a ruddy cheek,
his old endearing smile;
the sight of him had turned me weak,
though only for a while.

The words he spoke I can't recall,
our spark had gone astray;
for in the past we'd said it all,
so much to my dismay.

He claimed, one day, he'd like to meet,
though he would never call;
the weatherman predicted sleet,
but tears began to fall.

Good seeing you again, old friend,
then said he could not stay;
I felt the blister of the wind
and watched him walk away.

A heart that had begun to thaw,
then started to refreeze;
I drew my overcoat in awe
of winter's frigid breeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 8/28/2008 9:35:00 PM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to PoertySoup! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/15/2008 9:35:00 AM
This is such a sad piece. The imagery you use to tell the story is clear and vividly perfect for conveying the sentiment. Written very well. Michael
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Date: 8/13/2008 6:40:00 PM
Its so hard when love hurts but your heart will melt into the arms of another. Great flow ! Laura
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Date: 8/13/2008 1:56:00 PM
Ouch. That had to hurt. Sad story well expressed with wonderful rhyme and flow. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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