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Redaction of Treasury Note

A world stabilized by signature
Completed comprehension of letters
Leaving of all accounted
To begin work without support
Endowing the mind of all alive
Without distraction
The treasury note
Bill is paid
I spoke nothing in tongues
Check is written forth
Before failure begins a new
Annuity is gained interest from slovenly designed
Augment of an unhoused mind

Redaction of treasury note

Labor has de fine as wage
Add of time in coursed labor
Constriction of appendage is resignation
Categories: redaction, america,
Form: Free verse

Lines of Erasure

They split the land, but not the pulse. 
Roots remember what maps forget. 
Every severed line still hums 
with breath, with blood, with return.

They drew the map with ash and absence— 
not to guide, but to erase. 
Districts split like broken ribs, 
each line a scalpel, 
each vote a ghost.

We watched the ink dry on democracy’s skin, 
while they called it strategy. 
But we know the truth: 
this is not representation. 
It is redaction.

They called it strategy, 
but we saw the autopsy. 
Each district dissected, 
each breath rerouted.
We do not consent to silence. 
We are the roots beneath the fracture, 
the pulse that refuses to be redacted. 
We rise, not from permission— 
but from memory.
Categories: redaction, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberSolitudes

Crowdy street at cloudy day  
Smiling solitudes in motion 
Can’t discern a word they say
It’s the roar of the ocean
Waves and splashes that repeat
Their eternal symphony
Mute the sounds of the street
Where I’m happening to be
Someone’s left a printed text
On the bench, in this wet weather
I can’t tell what’s coming next
Sheets are damp, they stuck together
Saddest clowns steal my time
Why that famous bell can’t toll   
I would love to hear its chime
Just before I get too old
I won’t get asleep again
When its time to say my part
Never cared about the rain
All my words I know by heart
It can be another version
Just a bit supplied redaction
But I guarantee the ocean
And some solitudes in action.
Categories: redaction, feelings, ocean, old, solitude,
Form: Rhyme

Click

Fake the caress of a loving hand
Felt the pain of lust on demand
Fingertips touch much more than skin 
Awaken thoughts purely filled with sin
Love no longer is an action
Words committed too soon after redaction
Tainted by deceitful ball&chain true interaction
Overhauled hype in our eyes distraction
Endless display of desire on screen never one main attraction
Too little hope in our hearts satisfaction
Getting ahead by thumbs likes and 
reactions
Never living up to high Def photo shop
Only to let ur self-esteem drop
Hard to believe any real emotion
When one click causes a derail from devotion
Categories: redaction, internet, trust,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberForever Young

Forever Young
David J Walker

  	No
I should have said 
I knew you when we
	Were both brand new
And we knew 
nothing of life
And not a single thing 
of each other  
Except the unquestioned attraction
And the sad redaction 
of the entanglement we thought of
	as love

And what I know is 
the resolution stands
	fast in the past
and cannot be
	undone 
locked in the lockets hung
round our necks 
like cherished millstones
	made into clocks 

I know you from another 
Place and time 
When I was yours
	And you were mine
Another century 
another millennium 
Where
	We will both be
Forever young
Categories: redaction, allegory, love,
Form: Free verse


Premium Member3 Neologisms

Circumventing
discombobulation
results in
circumbobulation

Eructing
redaction
is a form of
eraction

Malevolent
people
are truly
maloverted
Categories: redaction, humorous, word play,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberAnd the Worst of These Is

There is a time and place for action
Which should feed into interaction
But that can be betrayed by blind reaction
Ending up with governmental redaction
Categories: redaction, anger, betrayal,
Form: Epigram
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