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Lantern in the Dark Ages - Time Traveler Poem

I step from whirring future gears
To shadowed halls of moss and mire,
Where candles flicker, knowledge fears,
And hope is but a guttering fire.

Cobblestones echo underfoot,
A market square of mud and cries—
Peasants barter, beggars brood,
Monks guard secrets, wary-eyed.

The plague carts rattle down the lane,
A priest’s Latin lost on cold stone,
Superstition thick as rain—
Witch or wise, you die alone.

But look—within the abbey’s walls,
A child’s voice stirs the silent night,
Tracing stars on parchment, small,
Dreaming truths beyond the fright.

If I could change one thread of fate,
Would I bring a book, a spark,
A word of science to translate
The world from brittle dark?

But history’s woven, coarse and tight—
A single tug might fray the seams.
So gently, I leave one lantern light,
And trust the dawn to find their dreams.

Premium Member A Winter Sonnet

Icy diamonds rattle down upon the 
frigid, Discolored ground.
In its sleep, beneath a blanket of whites; 
tubers hibernate, these winter nights.

Blanket of white, though dripping in sunlight, 
outlasts greenery of delight. 
Naked trees will one day see; 
clothes of green soon will be.

Winter’s kiss, for some, brings bliss; 
for others, a challenge; a hit and miss.  
For now, the landscapes a canvas, white; 
ready for paint, in the old north light.  

For new beginnings, all life sees; 
in the greens of newborn leaves.

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