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On This Threshold

Now I hold a key to Solomon's Seal
It fits the Star of David too
Rock climbed the Walls of Wisdom 
Cornerstones well placed towards a
Throne of Love, bloody thorns my rope
Courage dissolved into pebbles of joy
As loneliness became Aloneness

On this threshold my nails oxidised
Into water atoms, fire ashed my carbon
Womb aglow with vacancy, heart an
Open page of becoming you will not 
Know unless you are ready for Grace
Beckoning from fields of dandelions as
Soccer fields shatter into pastures

On this threshold you are observed by
Luminous eyes which dissolve pigment
Hair, feet, bones, marrow, brain cells
Pleasure and pain like autumn leaves
Make compost before pearls and rubies
Body becomes only heart splintering
Into the spacelessness before the hole

Fingerless I stroke the burnished key
Know how to insert it into my given space
I see skylarks in a shimmering silence
Silver serpents twirl around golden orbits
The threshold disappear as I slide 
Into a nothingness of Light at 
Peace


GhairoDanielsPoetry2014
Categories: oxidised, allegory, body, courage, death,
Form: Free verse

When Time Is Broken

The clock’s hands no longer move,
rusted with waiting and heavy with
oxidised breath. Time is no longer

golden but iron turned red with
longing. Ire bubbling below
a patience wearing thin. The

watch’s face is blank, no numerals
guarding its perimeter keeping count.
Under scratched glass, frozen hands 

are circled by invisible sharks with teeth 
two: one fang long, slicing seconds into 
longer minutes; one tooth short, left 

hanging like a child’s arm half raised 
in question. When alone, time is 
corroded by memories that won’t 

exist.
Categories: oxidised, time,
Form: Free verse


Rusting Parts

Red,
Brown,
Gunned down,
A manchine ceased to be

Oxidised
Realised
Brutalised
Catharsis empathised  
Our fate it seemed to be

Hopeful
Fruitless
Helpfull
Useless
Your minds bent eye sees me

I lie here shunned
Yearning
Turned
To dust as you do sleep

But one man sees me
Joyful
Insightful
Ecstatic for my bones

Use is deemed
Beyond whats seemed
From rusted parts and skin
Inside what counts
Is what amounts
To what comes from within
Categories: oxidised, beauty, mental illness, old,
Form: I do not know?

Call Me Ishmael

Call me Ishmael, I am the slave to
desires and dreams of others and
their destinies preclude my own;
the seven seas may inoculate or
infect with depths of drowning dark my
turmoil twisting aimless and alone.

Obsessions of their quests for
peaceful vindication scars my
fraught objectives livid white;
Whilst they can settle down in waves of
salvage, sleep, serenity, all I can
claim is everlasting night.

My treasures sink into the beach, waste
marooned, bare glimpsed receded gaze,
oxidised on salt eroded shores;
with no control of my design, call
me Ishmael by default, do with me what you will
for by default I am, regrettably, yours.
Categories: oxidised, allegory, death, life, philosophy,
Form: Blank verse
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