Mumbled Poems | Examples

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  a pig
  so big

  snoring
  boring

  stop bite
  no right

  rude guy
  blue sky

  mumbled
  grumbled

  shaken
  bacon

  a test
  - suggest

Premium Member A Thousand Watt Smile

Dried land with the shallow mud cracks
Barns remained with the empty sacks
Rolling tyres in the soft soil dust
Stained the leaves with brown coated rust

Scotching waves blowing all over
Unsown plants turned into stover
A curse of God! A few grumbled
Global warming! The learned mumbled

The farmer looked up at the sky
In dejection, he made a sigh
On the eyelid, a pearl drop splashed
At once, a thousand watt smile flashed

Clinical Admiration

the surgeon cut me open,
he took a step back, in awe, frozen
the surgeon mumbled with a astonished look
“wow…this is perfect, i mean…absolutely textbook”
the room filled with doctors nodded in agreement
my spirit watching from above felt seen,
as if it was some kind of achievement
that statement resonated with my soul
it stitched every broken part of me whole
it felt like the kind of love i’ve yearned for
as all eyes were on me like fine art hung carefully in a museum,
and i hovered above weightless filled with freedom,
i finally felt fulfilled, despite the source 
all while looking at my half alive corpse


The Crow

The Crow


His three-times-a-week nightmare voice was scary
until it wasn’t on Halloween morning. 
His voice changed to calm. And, that was scary! 
His scary voice he was mourning.

‘I’m so down because tonight in 
the garden I won’t be able to tell very scary 
stories (in 
my not at all scary 
voice) to my crow friends!’ he mumbled to 
himself on the barbeque.

Premium Member Ah the Season

The turkey’s held up signs
Protesting the Parade
“We were here before the Pilgrims”

They sought back-up from the Pumpkins
“Where were you on Halloween”, they asked

A Deer in a red vest strutted across the meadow

An old Owl shook its head from front to back

It gets worse every year mumbled the hunter
As he loaded his slingshot

An escaped lab monkey
Built a fire in the distance

As a feral cat
Longed for home

Westbury

Westbury where skyscrapers scratch clouds,
And backstreet murmur under glowing hum,
The metro slumbers,but terror thunderous crowds.

Laaities hone okapis where mumbled thugs come,
Each gangway a rabbit warren of cries,
And moms grab the dark,awaiting some.

In kangaroo courts blood thirsty 28s and 27s rise,
A revolver roars,the night asks but none says a prayer
While guiltlessness is sold in whispered lies.

Yet in this war,the lane hides myths rare,
Of youngsters who dodge the deep state,running fast,
Their footprints rebound,shivering through the air.

Westbury your skyscrapers check out the die cast,
Each brick a testifier,every lantern a guide,
The twilight is long,but hope remains at last.

The matriarchs of sections keep life supplied,
Their pleading a vein hope under mortar veins,
Where cowards hide,the soul of Westbury won't die


Processional

Masthead Media Group

Chug Cramproll made his heelstand in Buffalou so the story goes.
He sprinkledd sand on a surface
and made percussion sounds to the amazment of an audeince.
The song "Mumbled" was used as his entrance theme.
It's beleived it was remixed to the standards
of Modern sounds to have
a edgey Urban feel. " Jive Talking" Cat Vamp was said to be his manager.
"Scatt " and Bebop accompanied them to the ring. Off the wire these sounds like 
"oh-be Doo-Bee" with some "ahh-you ahh's"
the debutting sounds of reasons.
So Right" and Yubbia Yubbah"
modern talking swing grooves.
When asked about that debut he said
" I'm a fool to want you: you know
that's life: thats the way it's gotta be!"
Where's that Crooner man; WWhere's that Crooner?"
Zu Du-dum: ooh we!
ahh wee ah!
OOh-wee!

Premium Member Ruby Leaves and Breezes

Written: August 28, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Joseph May 

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building celestial diamond — eolith fog glamor
yet not every flame is meant to last
there were no sacred vows, oaths, or clamor
just the gentle whisper of a love we outgrew

amber breezes carry dancing embers
not every farewell requires a curtain drawn
ruby leaves drift slowly, tracing days' tempers
while breeze sings dulcet songs on the worn trees

kindling leaves mumbled nostalgia’s orchestral pulse 
akin to the gentle blinking of newborn stars
the harvest moon glows with ancestral impulse
casting shadows shaped such as memories

fallen gold blends with ivory joy 
where owls sing hymns in a minor key
hope flickers in the silence of every decoy
as roots hold secrets only the night can view

Premium Member I Shoulda Said That!

In the heat of prior confrontations,

My tongue, well then, was typically tied.

Later, with all the right conjugations,

Well then, my tongue, so easily replied.

CURSES, I Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda said,

But, no one heard, as I softly mumbled.

Cuz, all the right words, dancing in my head,

Tripped out of my mouth, completely jumbled!

Premium Member Those nights had in the sun

The city held its hand out to you and you felt like you’d become.
The flashing lights, drinking and dancing nights is where your adulthood had begun.

The wayward walk and drunken fights where no logic had ever won.
Pride or is it sorrow now fills your mind, to see what you’ve become.

The years fly by and your reflection starts to cry as you realise age has won. 
You still feel young and ache for the careless, never ending fun of those nights you had in the sun.

Now creaks and pains try their hardest to remain as you try to remember lost loves in days now gone. You realise when your mind tries to rationalise how old you have become. 

Where once stood so proud your youth and glory so strong and loud now looks back at you in mumbled confusion for why that strength and confidence cut and run.

Premium Member Thunder Mountain

As I fondled my plunder
A wind from down under 
Got caught on the breeze

It wafted and floated
But still I felt bloated
And dropped to my knees 

As it tore me asunder
I recalled days of thunder
What'd help to appease

My stomach just rumbled
In agony mumbled
Some TUMS if you please 

Took more than two rolls
Prayers read from dead scrolls
To cure this disease 

But then belly now loaded
The wind then exploded...
And blew bark off the trees

Confession of a Serial Killer

they wheeled me in like a busted fridge
metal bolts, the stink of bleach
my hands were calm for once—
you'd think I'd scream,
but I'd already done all my screaming.

a priest mumbled junk at me—
I asked for a cigarette,
he gave me god instead.

the guards were kids
shaking like leaves
they strapped me tight
like I was gonna run.

I looked at the bulb overhead—
thought of the girl in Idaho,
how she laughed
before I broke her neck.
I almost cried.
almost.

they stuffed cotton in my mouth,
clamped that steel cap down
like I was a bad battery.

somebody puked.
someone else prayed.
me? I grinned.

the juice hit—
a million volts of penance.
my spine tried to climb out,
my teeth danced,
my bowels gave up.

and still
it didn’t feel like enough.
not even close.

Premium Member Stranger Things for Strangers

Play staged, they came, 
mostly strangers to the stage,
as first time viewers,
to watch the play -
'Stranger Things: The First Shadow'.
Noisiest crowd I ever heard, 
au naturale, to boot.
They ate popcorn, mumbled throughout,
if bored they left,
if frightened they screamed, 
if spellbound they gasped,
if awestruck they sighed,
if saddened they moaned.
The live stage play 
in Charing Cross Road was
veritably Elizabethan,
with Shakespeare backstage
in the bleachers.

Premium Member What My Inner Voice Told Me Simon Says

My inner voice, is a two-faced bard,
That takes all credit when a win is starred.
But slinks away and hides when the outcome,
Doesn't match what it said, what's to become.

Can I read its doubt in the quiver of its sage?
Or in the mumbled, jumble of its feeble grab to engage?
It can be so assertive when it has brace of winners in the bag.
Who am I, to shun the chance to cheer a winner's brag?

Your inner voice learned to mimic all your plays,
It's like just a ventriloquist in so many ways,
With you pulling the strings for its 'Simon Says' and 'Nays'.
'Tis the script behind the curtain that the prompt obeys.

Simon Says: "Jump", 
Simon Says: "Sit",
"Stand" - Ah Hah!
Gotya! There!

The Story of Goodbye

That one day 
Was it warm?
She couldn't tell
She was furious

That one moment
Everything was unclear
It seemed normal to him
Not really for her

Black is his color
Pink is her color

Waves are coming
They face it together
Yet, he walked away
She was left alone...

Mmm, she couldn't believe it
She kept asking why
He couldn't answer

Guilty? A big NO
Just don't know

Someday you'll see
What she can do
Foolish you are
Don't act innocent
'Cause you started this

"Go away", she mumbled
Then she was quiet

But... be careful
This is his last chance
Not to lose her... 

But that's all... 

It's the ending
Everything turns into a silhouette
Everything vanished
Wrong decision... 

She waved goodbye...
 
"My love.... I can forgive" 

But... 
Forever you'll be forgotten

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