The solitude wing



Still love those wings who cut the air
A freedom to fly 
People adored my beautiful wing pair 
Colour was radiant - like morning sky 

Used to feel like celeb when they chased-still unaware
Those affection were only for wing -where i used to rely 
Used to have bundle of affection and care 
Were a beautiful social butterfly ?? 

Went to a beautiful face 
Thought they love me from the core 
Surprise - they changed the case 
Cried in pain - cause my beautiful wing they tore 

Sitting on a flower - leaving the trace 
Nobody recognised - made my heart sore 
Suddenly strong storm chased 
Mumbled what's more ? 

The black storm made me rest on home 
Days of rest my wings started to come 
Smiled but after min it faded 
Noticed wing - it's now black with the spots of bloody red 

For even solitude my wing still exist 
Everything silent it's their beauty in this 
Learnt to fly inward where peace resides 
Converted a social butterfly to home fly with universe inside


Thanks
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Eslinger Avatar
February 3, 2025 at 8:34 AM
Good to meet you, Shambhavi, thru this touching poem. Hardly believeable, you really managed, IMHO, to express what a butterfly might think, it’s wonderful! Nice you’ve come to PSp! Hope you will share lots of your writing here! This one is quite imagist, sensual, lovely. Blessings, sally
ambasta Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 3:27 AM
Your kind words truly mean a lot to me. I'm glad you connected with my poem , imagining the thoughts of a butterfly was a beautiful experience to express. I’ll definitely share more of my work here.
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