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The solitude wing

Still love those wings who cut the air A freedom to fly People adored my beautiful wing pair Colour was radiant - like morning sky Used to feel like celeb when they chased-still unaware Those affection were only for wing -where i used to rely Used to have bundle of affection and care Were a beautiful social butterfly ?? Went to a beautiful face Thought they love me from the core Surprise - they changed the case Cried in pain - cause my beautiful wing they tore Sitting on a flower - leaving the trace Nobody recognised - made my heart sore Suddenly strong storm chased Mumbled what's more ? The black storm made me rest on home Days of rest my wings started to come Smiled but after min it faded Noticed wing - it's now black with the spots of bloody red For even solitude my wing still exist Everything silent it's their beauty in this Learnt to fly inward where peace resides Converted a social butterfly to home fly with universe inside Thanks

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Date: 2/3/2025 8:34:00 AM
Good to meet you, Shambhavi, thru this touching poem. Hardly believeable, you really managed, IMHO, to express what a butterfly might think, it’s wonderful! Nice you’ve come to PSp! Hope you will share lots of your writing here! This one is quite imagist, sensual, lovely. Blessings, sally
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Shambhavi ambasta
Date: 2/4/2025 3:27:00 AM
Your kind words truly mean a lot to me. I'm glad you connected with my poem , imagining the thoughts of a butterfly was a beautiful experience to express. I’ll definitely share more of my work here.

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