Misdeal Poems | Examples


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Premium Member Neil 'N Lucille

You had to know Lucille 
Every morning nothing but oatmeal
She never skipped a meal
Her favourite colour was teal    
And loved to wear soft chenille
Her pet was a beautiful cockatiel 
And every night drank chamomile 
Out of crystal cut pinwheel   
She believed life had handed her a misdeal 
And stopped pretending to feel
Lucille liked things to be even keel     

How things changed when she met charming Neil 
Propelling his sporty automobile
Until all four tires would squeal 
Somehow it was instant undeniable appeal
They were an item and a big deal
And soon became ‘Neil and Lucille’

They got to know each other piecemeal
Both actively fought to save the endangered seal
(But both love to eat fish, chicken and veal)
Both had been through their own ordeal
But that now seemed somewhat unreal
And much preferred to dawdle in the surreal
With their hearts doing somersaults and cartwheels


AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Premium Member A Misdeal

Some may wonder, “is this guy for real?”
Answer with a question, “how do you feel?”
If you answered “super!”
Today's a “whoop whooper”
If you said “crappy”, today's a misdeal

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