A Misdeal

Some may wonder, “is this guy for real?” Answer with a question, “how do you feel?” If you answered “super!” Today's a “whoop whooper” If you said “crappy”, today's a misdeal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 25, 2017 at 9:07 AM
I say, "What the heck?//You're dealing from the bottom of the deck?"//I'll still whoop//all over the soup//while the girls hug your furry neck. DEAL ON CASINO JACK!!!
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October 25, 2017 at 9:13 AM
You can whoop on the soup while I enjoy the girlies hud my furry neck among my other more interesting parts!!! DREAM ON OLD GEEZER!!!
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October 25, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Fun and true :) xomo!
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October 25, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Attitude, attitude, attitude!!! THE KEY! xxx
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October 25, 2017 at 6:24 AM
I feel awesome today, even my back is agreeing with me today! I loved your delightful little limerick her my friend! You have written a magnificent and hilarious poem! Another one to go into Jackson's hall of fame! Great Work!!
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October 25, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Was wondering how you were recovering... great news!!!
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