MILIEU
this
pleasure
of genius
in
a
lingering
a
stunning
experience
imbided
so
effortlessly
in
far-reaching
insights
oddly
exhilarating
yet
elegant
worthwhile
&
trenscendant
novel
angles
so
bizarre
&
eccentric
frivolous
& superficial
drifting
specks
in
sunlit shafts
glowing
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Sereneness is the ambiance that
Reigns and prevails around you when
You listen to the music
That transports your mind to
A state of blissness
Rapturing the
Five senses
Soothing
Soul
2-3-2016
From the killing fields of pain
Into a steady, melancholy rain
Physically exhausted, mentally drained
Conscience with dross of war stained
Structured existence of automaton gone
Into freelancing world; bland, carefree zone
Shadows of a passing train still linger
Each, vivid image pointing accusing finger
Hypnotized mind still in a time warp wrapped
Conditioned body in a martial time zone trapped
In throbbing mind,
War's cadence still beats at double time
On drawn face,
Morphing masks reveal a callous mime
Once-steeled nerves unravel in quietude
Solid, unwavering backbone lacks certitude
Surrounded by relatives that tenderly share
But dilated eyes emit only a distant glare
rosy nestle flows
succulent pinkish top scoop
mouth's now watering...
pure savory hmm...
melts like puffs of clouds floating
swinging goddess...
woods' delicacy
chocolate brown heaven - ohhh!
"NEAPOLITAN".
Burnished, bronze steeples
Early-Autumn, hoary frost
Blanching, falling leaves
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