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' Mouth-Watering Milieu '

rosy nestle flows succulent pinkish top scoop mouth's now watering... pure savory hmm... melts like puffs of clouds floating swinging goddess... woods' delicacy chocolate brown heaven - ohhh! "NEAPOLITAN".

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Margaret Okubo

Date: 11/30/2011 10:48:00 AM

Great haiku. Mouth watering indeed. You have me licking my lips.

Margaret Okubo

Date: 10/27/2011 1:59:00 PM

Hmm! Mouth watering. Great write Jun-Jun. Thanks for yor kind comment.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2011 8:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2011 12:57:00 AM

Congrats jun-jun on a top ten with with this yummy sweet treat luv...

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/6/2011 10:58:00 PM

Yes.... I'm salivating. Congratulations Lee

Cory Long

Date: 10/6/2011 3:33:00 PM

congrats on your stunning win.. free spirit

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/6/2011 1:56:00 PM

I like the way you incorporated nature into each verse, Jun-Jun. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2011 12:00:00 PM

DEAR JUN-JUN~.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/30/2011 1:37:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Jun-Jun. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2011 9:03:00 AM

Jun_ jun,.. ohhh! brown heaven,,, sneaking on,, how are you?,, have a nice one,..p.d..