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He Brought Us Music
Many times when I would here a song, I would get an almost joyful longing, but I could never pinpoint the moment in my past that I wished for so deeply.

I would feel a certain...

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Categories: rework, devotion, religion, christmas, longing, christmas,
Form: Blank verse



Premium Member Cosmos Configurator
When I gaze far off into the night sky
The chaos is not pleasing to the eye.
Seems there was never an overall plan
When the beginning of time began.

I don’t mean to sound so high and mighty
But...

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Categories: rework, fantasy, space, old, star, old, star, time,
Form: Iambic Pentameter
Time Is On the Other Side Poem Reworked 27 Oct 17
REWORKED     27 OCT 2017

I'm sorry  I'm reposting this, I had to rework it for better meaning continuity and flow of speech.


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Time pulls life by its hand 
and she's gliding along,...

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Categories: rework, age, life, time,
Form: Prose Poetry
Fortune Tellers Know
sitting across from me
you are a hanged man
sacrificing one of his eyes
for a chance at a sacred alphabet
at a chance to gamble to decipher
the blueprint of this life

When will you cheat death
and redefine your life
fortunetellers...

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Categories: rework, introspection
Form: Free verse
Do Not Quit
There is no reason to surrender, no reason at all
No reason to cry or regret after a rough fall
Life may tough as rock and a straight upward wall
Look at what you got, diamond is toughest...

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Categories: rework, inspirational, work, may, work,
Form: Verse



I Plus U Theory
I took advantage to contemplate the equation of I+U
And I thought I +U  = US which always =’s just  2 
At least that’s what I thought to be true
Now, I know for fact...

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Categories: rework, love, love, me,
Form: I do not know?
To Save the World
To watch the dark, and twinkling skies,
Brings joy and love, to my curious eyes.
To think of where we are today,
It sends my interested mind away.

To a place where thoughts and dreams come true,
To a place...

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Categories: rework, betrayal, change, dedication, earth day, planet,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Ye Get This
Yesterday I had a short circuit
So, I just had to go sit back
And just rework it

Been writing for more
Than a week a half

Boy this download did come real fast
Yeah with the music
Man it was blast

I...

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Categories: rework, visionary,
Form: Personification
You Held My Hand When Chips Were Down
Muse, you didn’t offer excuses to hold my hand
To walk and talk to the flagging courage
Weeping and seeping into the stamina gland
Where years of interaction on the educational stage

Yielded fields of unexpected benefits
I accrued from...

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Categories: rework, poems,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Pluto's Dark Abode
"Pluto’s Dark Abode" 

they say you can feel her 
walking through you 
it only happens when 
the frost and mist is about 
where hidden wild things 
watch but make 
themselves heard
in the half light 
they...

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Categories: rework, halloween, muse, mystery,
Form: Narrative
Premium Member A Taste of Things To Come
Could our verity be any unique?
Whenever the twenty-first century is antique,
Links are the best way to deal with everything
When even the pencils will betide self-replicating,

The whole would be vastly improved
And, the fortune of the rich...

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© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, analogy, computer, confusion, creation, culture, future, inspirational,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member As Dawn Weeps Its New Fall
As Dawn Weeps Its New Fall

To the old fallen barn 
where fine horses once stayed
Life spins its never ending yarn
through an old vanishing parade.

Within your rotting boards
termites eat long dead trees
Life existing in massive hordes
busy...

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Categories: rework, art, change, family, farm, imagery, memory, symbolism,
Form: Rhyme
Hearts Retreat
Whenever our worlds collide
                        I nolonger feel so absoleat 
  ...

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Categories: rework, write,
Form: Rhyme
Football Distraction
Magically, the usually late
Is in front of their school’s gate
Ready to a gentle push give it
Or open fling it.

Now, he is commendably trim,
The hand of the lord strongly upon him,
Miraculously, he tries strides  with...

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Categories: rework, adventure, beautiful, career, character,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Prejudice Is Subliminal and Subtle
Prejudice is subliminal.
We all have it, even those of us who think we do not.
Let’s say….
Carl is humiliated and embarrassed in a bedroom with yellow flowers.
From now until he reworks the script, all bedrooms with...

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Categories: rework, america, philosophy,
Form: Free verse
A Talk With Dabber Dance Get Down of Music Fame
He looked beyond those flaws
To gain the needed 
understanding which was
Required to fix those flaws
That made the sound of a
Great song more perfect,
More defined and more
Liked, loved and needed.

His study of natural things
Like animals, streams,...

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Categories: rework, jobs, music, perspective, romantic love, song, sound,
Form: Ballade
A Clean Slate and a Blank Canvas
lately
i have been seeing you in a different light
honestly
you have become even more beautiful throughout the years
unexpectedly
you make me nervous like the very first view of you
actually
that is a good thing

i have not been showing...

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© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, growth, i am, sorry,
Form: Free verse
A Terrible Day At the Office
A Terrible Day at the Office

By Elton Camp

Robert awoke feeling really fine
Soon, at work, he’d toe the line

Traffic was very heavy that day
“You’re late,” the boss did say

In his cubicle Robert took a seat
The office...

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© Elton Camp  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, angst, work, work,
Form: Rhyme
Intent
you can write a billion lines
you can play a million songs
you can film ten-thousand hours
and never right a single wrong

you can feed a ravenous crowd
biscuits with salmon to replete
overflowing cornucopias endowed
and fill silos brimming with...

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© Goode Guy  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, inspiration, introspection, nature,
Form: Quatrain
Previously Rethunk
dont remember where i started
what i was trying to say to myself
something to learn, that i had learned
so could push on
spiral out
taking the time to look back
on my own tragic kingdom of thoughts
how do i...

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Categories: rework, introspection, lifeme, time,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Oh Those Boswell Sisters
Some called the radio station demanding they throw them out of the studio.
Others called to brag about their talents, their arrangements, their sass.
Boswell sisters had been singing together since their Vaudeville days as teens.
Connee played...

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Categories: rework, music,
Form: Free verse
Don'T Shirk :: Lajemme
   
Why I always make mistake in my work
I also irk, irritating mistake;
how can I make error free job to spark
To revise work, once before final take.

Don't have bad feeling; No, don't curse
Not...

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© Pratap Roy  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, work,
Form: Verse
Premium Member Nation Pulling Under
The interactions are electronic, life far from the paper world
Put your word on digital to meet them at the Web gridlock hold
Monitors replace friendly greetings, high in the corporate sky
Assets being insight, capacity to deliver...

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© ... Gigno  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: rework, philosophy, social
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member My Poetry's Not Just the Servant of Pleasure
My poetry's not just the servant of pleasure,
And serving self-interest isn't my treasure,
But serving my muse, I am glad to disclose 
(Though at times I lose track of my spiritual clothes.)

I'm riding a bus and...

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Categories: rework, love, poetry, writing,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Excerpt Number 1
Time is a consumer of
lives and souls and thoughts and love
The world that once turned yesterday
has forever gone away

Was it not good, what used to be?
Was it not sweet for you and me?
Remnants of the...

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Categories: rework, life, memory, nostalgia,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Shattered Sighs