Long Hermit Poems

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Premium Member Old Hermit

High up near the top of the mountain he  stood
surveying all he could see for miles and miles
He watched the hawks wheeling round and round
then folding their wings they plummeted down
striking their prey in full flight taking them to eat
behind him was a cave where he lived and slept 
very comfortably on a bed of bracken and hay
his chair was a lump of stone that naturally
was shaped and the seat was cut into it.

He had lived here a long time making it
just right and with a handy spring 
all the water he could wish for.
He cooked on an open fire at the front
so all smells and smoke were blown away
there was even a hole narrow and deep
that took care of all his bodily needs.
Still most days he stood looking out
over the land  which was his land.

He watched over all. the various animals
the different birds he could hear a wood pecker
busily drilling away making a new nest
and signed with pleasure at the simple things 
which made this place so special to him.
He had been married a few times and had
many children not all in wedlock he'd been 
a bit of a lad ln his time enjoying it all.
Now as he approached his end he had little
regret it was a life well spend and he would
do it the same taking each day as it came

For those that could remember his name
it was    FREEDOM
Form: Epic


Premium Member Sutra 4 from The Holy Science

“The cause of creation is Anu or the Atoms. Enmasse they are called Maya or the Lord's illusory power; each individual Anu is called Avidya, Ignorance.”
~ extract from ‘The Holy Science’


We know not who we are and yet we strive,
pursuing agendas of body-mind 
and with ego cravings on overdrive,
no wonder then we wander like the blind.

Dream indulgence is living in the dark,
whilst silence sets us free from our mind tree,
letting soul ascend on an upward arc,
dwelling then in peace, vibrant and carefree.

Oh hermit, let’s look for soul’s light within,
found in silence in the cave of our heart,
where God Himself dwells, beckoning us in,
that whence entwined bliss ignition may start.

Melding head with heart, presence with God yoke ~
Know this world to be but a wisp of smoke
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Untrampled Sand

Untrampled Sand

Idyllic shorelines tucked away
Are island protected in a tropical bay
Below pastel skies polished by clouds,
Reveal a Shangri-La lathered in gold.

Untrampled sands, white and tanned,
Are cooled by waves and wind-fanned,
Where exotic vegetation creeps unmolested,
Claiming squatters’ rights of fertile deposits.

Mollusk seashells litter the beach
Within the cove’s curvature outreach,
Where hermit crabs upgrade shells
And birds sing throughout the hills.

(Un paraíso tropical de mi corazón
En sueños con la mujer que amo.
Gracias por la memoria
Ese viento llena mi lienzo
Mientras navego por los océanos.)

A tropical paradise of my heart
In dreams with the woman I love.
I thank you for the memory
That wind-fills my canvas
As I sail the oceans.

Premium Member At One With

At One With….

Still!  Perfect stillness
A verbless hermit
Present tense of the divine dawn
Ageless angelus -
No specter of yesterday
Vital youth of the ever eternal daystar
To a priceless creation before Genesis.

Motionless in meditation
The caress of flawless beauty 
In virgin minutes
Essential oil of dim caliginosity’s fragrance 
And a massage of morning’s messenger
Soft wink in a sequester of time
Daylight and midnight equal twins

Seamless solitude - 
A chant of plain song –
Solo symphony - 
Soft chimes of audible words
In wordless alliterations of wisdom
Expressions of the source 
Without a shadow

Tranquil in
The sweet taste of tranquility
In personification of the placid calm
Only cravings of perpetual satisfaction -
On the tongue perfection's noun 
A ban of bitterness
Savory sips - cool flavor on the palate 

Cradle of baptism 
A christening of bliss
A dedication to the infinite  
A hug from the divine edgeless Pi
A suspension of the animate frame
Caress of eternity’s essence in a benediction
No separation of Be into the ageless clarity of Is

7-13-21
1st Place - Trophy Win
Contest: Tat Tvam Asi
Sponsor:  Unseeking Seeker
Inspired by the contest sponsor's prompt - journey without movement - there are no verbs in this poem.

An Uncool Poem about Melting Beers

Red cones on the blacktop
August is a burning blanket.
Dusty crows perch on long dead armadillos.

The Chevys' air-con
chokes up a warm blow.
A Navaho in Ohio has phoned.
he needs to talk about his dead wife.
He will have cold beers.
I have my own beers
but go anyway.

The evening is electric and neon,
city roads growl like wounded samurai.
If I were a hermit crab
I would shuck this scorched world off
my sweating back.

All I really want right now
is to sleep naked on a mortuary slab
as cold Atlantic waves
undress my skin and bones.

Not dead – just revived enough
to be a friend of a friend
to the newly departed
and still cooling.


Premium Member Autumn - Constanza

Autumn leaves falling, makes us sigh
The arid ground is beautified 
Why for then should death be decried

When life force ebbs and death draws nigh
It’s but a time for transition
Gaining in heaven admission 

Dark and lonely, seems the night sky
Motionless, save a shooting star
Wondrous, we look on from afar

In truth there’s no final goodbye
For we’re all in spirit entwined
One light, in many forms confined

Life is eternal, death’s a lie
Know oh hermit, soul’s quintessence
As living light, we’re God’s essence

Autumn leaves falling, makes us sigh
When life force ebbs and death draws nigh
Dark and lonely, seems the night sky
In truth there’s no final goodbye
Life is eternal, death’s a lie

21-September-2022

In Remembrance of Connie -Autumn Theme Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Reclaiming Our Divinity

What is this strange place, we find ourself in 
Conscience deadened, embrace frigid, God hidden 
Trapped in the open, we are yet free within
Love suggestion, compassion but we do not as bidden 

Head and heart misaligned, earth entity suffers
Lower mind reigns, this gift of life in vain
Amiable but cautious, doubting ego flounders
Bound in chains, soul darkened by stains

Piquant our dilemma, from heights we crash
Relentless and remorseless is ego desire onslaught 
Radiant soul tires under vicious whiplash
Deluded consciousness contracts, with fear fraught

Know oh hermit, soulful presence of innocence is luminescence 
Gods grace bountiful awaits us in our heart
Light magnificent, nectar omnipotent, purity quintessence
Bliss ignition renewal, each moment restarts

27-July-2021

Alpha Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member The widow's eyelids of the house gradually close

The widow's eyelids of the house gradually close,
Over the empty rooms, where love once wove the velvet of longing.
My wife has dissolved into the echo of days, my daughter - a fleeting thought,
Books, paper birds loaned to the winds, my clothes,
Silken bones wringing out the last drops of time.
A caricature of a chariot, with wheels freed from roads, I offered it to the void,
In a past already too dim, too detached from the living present.
And the real and the dream, love and the void, they dance away, fragile
As the bitter waving of foam - soon gone, nameless on the lip of the glass.
And my mind is now more a prayer without an altar,
A sanctuary with icons that fade, discolor, lost in time.
Senses catch only the shadows of saints set to leave,
And my soul is an unwritten liturgy, where faith is all that remains when life recedes.
Everything I loved, the wanderings of my soul whitened everywhere,
They have taken flight towards the ashes of tomorrow, I do not retain them, do not stop them.
Like a hermit of oblivion, I end in a chapel of silent gratitude,
In the chamber of the heart, only the empty echo of my wandering steps, proof that I was and that I am, in a world that no longer recognizes, but passes.
© Dan Enache  Create an image from this poem.

Then

A vixen lies down to pant at midday,
the grass takes her shape,
bends for hours to the heat of her body.
Water, trees, forestations of fungi
amid a deeply impression’d earth ---- Frogs
glimmer on clammy pads,
as a loose congress of small mirrors.
I saw a kingfisher dive into the sun,
a golden circle of water.
When it emerged it was an arriving fire,
later the sun perched in a tree
dripping shadows as if shade
ware its kin.
The unseen feet of swimming birds
stir the sky.
A stone rolling over
rolls a river,
the river slips inside a fish,
keeps going inside the drinker.
A hermit crab leaves home,
becomes breakable.
then bursts into traveling music.

Premium Member Independence It

cat man had enough forced isolation

sabbatical dreams after quarantine

entered his hermit cage in seclusion

I need time out from lockdown he promised


they told me of the psycho cat’s demise

but cats have nine lives so I can spend one

and I may use it on my free accord

face my own mask and fearless persona

fantasize about chosen solitude

beat the rat race and feline adventure

the label I hide on the wine bottle

is a wise decal of aspirations

decanting the truth into fine crystal

bodes a farewell from forced captivity


while I look at the ceiling of limits

eerie floorboard creaks near the white sand beach

sanded pine wood pining for ocean’s roar

no more footprints I can walk on my hands

balance harmony and despair for good


when he woke up deluded in night sweat

pyjama purring and soaked wet with delight

claws clenched around fistfuls of withdrawal

clattering teeth grinding out last resolve

he took a swig from his wild genie’s flask

rolled a stone in front of his caveats

crept deep into his cave and growled


untamed will had been abandoned for good

and he dwelled in emotions and chuckled

social distance is not bad after all

I just don’t want to be told what to do


it’s in my genes I’m made for concealment

contagion won’t harm be for I’m myself


26th September 2020

Collaborate With Me contest

Sponsor Kim Rodrigues

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