Untrampled Sand

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Untrampled Sand

Idyllic shorelines tucked away,
Are island protected in a tropical bay;
Below pastel skies polished by clouds,
Reveal a Shangri-La bathed in gold.

Untrampled sands, white and tanned,
Are cooled by waves and wind fanned.
Where exotic vegetation creeps unmolested,
Claiming squatter rights of fertile deposits.

Mollusk seashells litter the beach,
Within the cove’s curvature outreach.
Where hermit crabs upgrade shells,
And birds sing throughout the hills.

Un paraíso tropical de mi corazón.
En sueños con la mujer que amo.
Gracias por la memoria
Ese viento llena mi lienzo.
Mientras navego por los océanos.

A tropical paradise of my heart,
In dreams with the woman I love.
I thank you for the memory
That wind fills my canvas
As I sail the oceans.

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Date: 5/15/2019 12:49:00 PM
I am happy to be led to this beautiful poem today. Well done :)
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/15/2019 3:13:00 PM
Your wonderful remark is sincerely appreciated.
Date: 5/13/2019 9:37:00 AM
I truly enjoyed reading this poem. It is so dreamy.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/14/2019 2:56:00 PM
Pleasant dreams & thank you very much for commenting.
Date: 5/13/2019 5:34:00 AM
'Dennis, Very touching. A great place to visit. David'
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/14/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thank you for reading the poem & leaving a comment.
Date: 5/12/2019 10:24:00 PM
Sweetly written...
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/14/2019 3:09:00 PM
Appreciate your comment, thank you.
Date: 5/12/2019 5:55:00 PM
A beautiful romantic poem
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/14/2019 3:12:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful remark.
Date: 5/12/2019 4:42:00 PM
This poem is beautiful from beginning to end Dennis! I loved your romantic scenic poem and the gorgeous video you have chosen to enhance your poem. This beauty is going into my Faves! It was a pleasure reading your poetry today. A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. It is very nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie xxoo ; )
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/14/2019 2:48:00 PM
I appreciate your gracious & flattering comments. Thank you.
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