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At One With…. Still! Perfect stillness A verbless hermit Present tense of the divine dawn Ageless angelus - No specter of yesterday Vital youth of the ever eternal daystar To a priceless creation before Genesis. Motionless in meditation The caress of flawless beauty In virgin minutes Essential oil of dim caliginosity’s fragrance And a massage of morning’s messenger Soft wink in a sequester of time Daylight and midnight equal twins Seamless solitude - A chant of plain song – Solo symphony - Soft chimes of audible words In wordless alliterations of wisdom Expressions of the source Without a shadow Tranquil in The sweet taste of tranquility In personification of the placid calm Only cravings of perpetual satisfaction - On the tongue perfection's noun A ban of bitterness Savory sips - cool flavor on the palate Cradle of baptism A christening of bliss A dedication to the infinite A hug from the divine edgeless Pi A suspension of the animate frame Caress of eternity’s essence in a benediction No separation of Be into the ageless clarity of Is 7-13-21 1st Place - Trophy Win Contest: Tat Tvam Asi Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Inspired by the contest sponsor's prompt - journey without movement - there are no verbs in this poem.

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Date: 8/2/2021 9:12:00 AM
Sam, Congratulations on your win. Excellent as usual.
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Date: 8/1/2021 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Sam. Superbly done. Have a Blessed Sunday.
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Date: 8/1/2021 6:41:00 AM
Tranquil in The sweet taste of tranquility - Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/1/2021 4:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win. I felt you will make it to top when I read first. Enjoy!
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:58:00 AM
Wonderful entry. I love it. God bless you and Congrats on top placement. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:38:00 AM
Thank you for participating in the contest, Sam and congrats on your win, with this outstanding poem!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/2/2021 10:57:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for your most generous placement and this incredible theme! It was a wonderful theme to explore and I loved the idea of "no movement!" Blessings to you.
Date: 8/1/2021 2:29:00 AM
Sam this is so clever. no movement- no verb. brilliant use of words and phrases!! Congrats on your well deserved top win!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/2/2021 10:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Krish! It took me a while to get into the spirit of this contest. I am so glad you liked it!
Date: 7/14/2021 1:22:00 PM
This is simply divine, I love the play of alliteration like 'morning messenger' and 'personification of placid calm' - very sly wink at the start with 'verbless hermit' too - I am beyond impressed, I don't think I could write something so pristine and meditative as this without any verbs!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/22/2021 9:42:00 AM
Michelle, I am blown away by your lovely, gracious message! Many, many thanks! It took me a while to get my thoughts together. I am so glad you liked it. Your words are an endless source of encouragement for me. Thank you! Sending you blessings!

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