Long Fizzing Poems

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Premium Member On the Other Side of a Peep Hole


They twitch along nerves
still wired to those fever 
induced rooms, memories
of faces pressed against
windows, peering in through
curtains with their red eyes,
screams stuck in throats
suffocating to a groan 
in gaping mouths.

There were places to hide
when day came around,
a dark cave inside 
an iron shed with pale 
constellations of old nail holes
feigning starlight overhead.
The world was kept
on the other side 
of a peep hole
in the wall of the shed.

And yet there were lovely 
flowers blooming
under a bright sun,
the day would carry on
with the ordinary things
that had to be done. 
Terror would wear off
and morph into something
else instead, normalized
by the trick 
of becoming numb, 
or be little more than
a slight disturbance 
fizzing in the wiring 
of the head. 

Besides,
who would understand
when what was there 
has now moved 
way beyond the vocabulary 
of a word weary tongue.


Premium Member Universe of Quantum Foaming

The rain halted, but the breeze didn't cool.
Fiery sunny colors dwindle in the heat.
Cubes of sugar didn't dissolve.
Unappetizing or overgrown tea
It lacks both charm and stillness.
In that, you stated you'd stand back

Breath is a wave-spelling foam.
An array of fresh guides at a helm
Steamy urges lacking restraint
Colleen warbles a soothing tune.
Watery waves in the hair
Slanting eyes like the lustrous sun
A hug will place a froth in the veins.
A blessing from above.

If you omitted my thoughts on you.
Chimes of snow rang out in unison.
Please recognize my yesteryear.
Blazed a flame of regal blue.
When tomorrows are made of foam. 

Staring up into the darkness of the sky.
Loose in waves of the cosmic ocean.
Fizzing, with the onset of quantum foams.
Sending dark energy to faraway galaxies.
Where does zero matter but odyssey?
And are in awe about never grace.
To shrink the size of the cosmos.
to within the reach of my palms.

October 29, 2022
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Intentions and Words

I'll pave the path not yet paved
and lay it out my own way
reflecting how thoughts behave
as I journey this maze of life each day.

Survival will not suffice after my foundation does arise
to serve to steady nerves that surface
as I surge head first in a search to succeed
and I first second and third a thirst to not desert my needs
however bad the hurt at its worst degree
knowing these strong words have no worth to me
if strong words are all these words can be.

Should I fake movement and act out actions like actors
for image improvement when actually being active factors 
and fronting while being inactive will only suck me backwards
and no luck alive will retract me back nor will words. 

Cus these inspiring sounds I write don't sight activity
but do unearth reserves of fight and positivity,
preserved in my core as though separate to this reality,
spares, but once stirred appear to emerge and merge 
with a fresh vitality refreshing this purged willed personality
now bravely portraying the ways of a renegade 
though still a lemon and not yet lemonade 
fizzing with not afraid 
in this littered beaten bitter escapade 
of ignorance and cluelessness verse on how to deliver 
a path I wish to pave. 

Strong willed with the aim of a numpty 
impersonating Humpty Dumpty 
while just now one thought runs free....
I want a path I cannot pave.... 
Have I found the Trump in me?
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Jews Harp - A Reflection On Turmoil

I take my pain to where ragers rage and writhe
in their self-absorbed gluttony on all-winter days
their tea cups are only for them
interspersed with silence and solitude
the streets are buildings without them
  who are the signposts talking too?

I could have been one of them
  I was one of them
and still am if hills facing the sun are cloud covered
and I don’t look out of the window to notice
then, in those un-costumed days, I am

but, and it has taken rotations of earth
backpacking through antonyms, through tropics
I have conquered tinnitus, now a comfort blanket
aiding sleep as a heart monitor line crossing a screen
I have conquered deep wells, now jews harps
jaw harps if you prefer, gewgaws, yes I have conquered
the cave of crawling space days
goblins are only a light switch and their rising finger away
but my rising finger plucks at overtones and distances
between neurons, between stars, between mees 
its sound soothing, rubbing balm on a restive chest
the vibrations are fizzing and feeding me
I take my white noise and float away
  sound, my therapy

A Wine Connoisseur and Life-Not For Contest

A wine connoisseur and Life

Trickling pearls of red and white
The sizzling hot, the fizzing out
Pinot noir, Reisling, Chardonnay
Teroldego, Norton , Carbanet
Deliverance from all the doubts
As he sees, swirls, sniffs, sips, savors
For once he chooses, its best of world
The embroidered sweet drops with finest taste
The embellished pearly drops with blissful tizz
Oenophile's stemware filled with recherche expertise
Like a bagpiper playing best among best of tunes!
Floats our life's canoe over varied wines of emotions
We the connoisseurs  need to take the tasting flight
And drink  from bottles of right emotions
And drink from glasses poured in blends of doses right
To row the canoe through smoothest wines, 
exotic choices we ought to make...
And enjoy the tizz of happiness,
Savor the taste of contentment,
Relish the sparkling journey
of life to cherish a vintage life!

©Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015

( had to drop it for contest as this exceeded 13 lines...)
© Anu Nayak  Create an image from this poem.


At the table of resistance

At the table of resistance.
On which fragile plates rest.
It's like an endless stream of tasty Kaitenzushi.
Hissing and fizzing life way.

Should you over indulge, on one too many plates.
You will end up bloated and stuck in space.
For what you resist, persists.
Thus resisting floating with a medium.

Given the temple of your body.
Adjust the right amount of calibrated meals.
Adding only what you need to the never emptying plates.
That could be processed in one seeing and seating.

If you find yourself in lost Vegas.
You could just enjoy the unique smells.
Or You could chew chew chew through every meal.
Or You could just drop your entire tray.

Too much resistance will make you a dull bulb.
So lessen the load by learning lessons in all seasons.
Yet at table of resistance one might not kneed light.
To say Itadakimasu.
© Ak Adam  Create an image from this poem.

Swooshing above the clouds

Shouting..salient sentient sentiment

Pouting pleasure leisure experiment

No doubting a serious impediment

Flouting the sprouting environment


Touting something really prescient  

Worry routing this treasure

Beyond measure to our detriment


Admit..bit of a predicament

But experiment on a mountain outing

Surmounting the shiny crystal quilt

Sorry no guilt...in my element


Wishing I'm sliding..swooshing

Swishing..gliding..curving

Whizzing...riding...whooshing

Fizzing....whirring...swerving


Brutality of wintry tiding shrouds 

Blue & white fanned duality 

Astonished polarity..polished parity


Planned alternative grand reality

Beautifully bland strands...expands similarity

Understand totality of bright clarity

Wonderland spanned above the clouds


Classes canned..sunglasses on ...getting tanned

Swift lifts shift over drifts like a yo yo tow

Traverse perverse crevasses..skift rifts in a row

Passes scanned..escape the crowds… go tally ho


The lust to move with gusto.. to & fro 

Adjust to the smooth groove...boho

Mojo.. august fears thrust..heave ho


Off mighty cliffs go gung ho.

Dafter go for bust or after

Splif*s just riffs of lets go slow


Depravity of a tight cavity

Leap but too steep..too deep

Land in a cheap heap hilarity


There is an olden golden friend 

On whom you might rightly depend

Helps you bend..wonderfully sweep


Descend...let rip...zoom..slip...nip to the end 

Giddy delight & trip fillip of the legend

That is "Gravity"!
Form: Blitz

Premium Member TO BEING IN LOVE'S LOVE

TO BEING IN LOVE’S LOVE

Being in love is an episodic emotion
Ballooned in exotic expectation
Tested by inflated orgasmic delirium
Often fizzing in diabolical diffusion:-

On the other hand,
Loving and being loved,
Is an eternal comic reality
That God spiritually bonds
To be eternal throughout life:-

How beautiful and exciting it is
To love spiritually, and eternally;
Being in the cosmic reality of
Blessed God sent true love
Ballooning beyond all
Limits and expectations:-

Being forever in love with you
Remains exciting and loving
And being loved by you is  limitless,
And beyond all expectations: Praise God!
Each day I give Him thanks for the gift of you:-
Form: Prose

Dry Canals of the Gathering

Those who crown themselves with miters and croziers 
Are dry and barren canals to which I shall describe 

Boats remain frozen in their abandoned and void place 
The waters being a simulacrum of doctrines 
Only the arid wind gives a sense of forward time 

The bubbling and fizzing spring they cut from themselves 
Those who pass by recognise there is nothing to drink 
Only worms and serpents live within the canals 

Their waters of void do not show heaven’s face above 
No vision of sparkling angels appears anywhere 
Nor can people see their face on the canals 

Behold the crown jewels of those called servants and watchers 




Inspired by this verse "Those people are dry canals." from The Apocalypse of Peter: 
http://www.gnosis.org/naghamm/apopet.html

The Girl Who Cried Death

The Girl Who Cried “Death”

The most special woman
To ever walk this world, 
Well, she’s died quite young, 
This, I am told. 

For the ash in her breath
Echos screams, melts her death. 
And her lover screams out loud, 
But, I am told, she makes no sound. 

For in the cracks between dreams, 
She slips in between. 
And no one can listen,
To her, so it seems. 

Because who wants to be 
With the Girl who Cried “Death?” 
And can friends and family
Get a wide enough breadth? 

Death has been her constant
Since she was a child. 
And the whole village 
Always thought her wicked and wild. 

The clouds o’er head
Echoed her mind’s greatest dread. 
That her single thread
That kept her most sane; 
Death would take her love
Before her brain
Collapsed to the ground.

‘Mong the bees and the flies
And ‘mong the soil, 
Watered fresh from the skies, 
Buried ‘neath it, she lies. 

For their Kings and their Queens
Up there on their thrones, they could tame
The mightiest of paws; 
The most fearsome of game.

So that the winter plague, 
Filled with Death and visions vague; 
Destroyed even King
As he lost his loved Queen. 
Soon winter won the game. 

Now, she joins me in the Tower, 
Watches bells toll the hour; 
I cackle again, she has failed. 

And upon the King’s breath
Fizzing out with the snow, 
She gathers her robes 
And she bent her head low. 
And she screamed her last ails. 

For he would go 
To heaven, you see, 
And she was left 
All alone here with me. 

Well, I guess they learned their lesson,
Because this time they didn’t listen,
To the girl who cried “Death.” 
For she reaps what she sow. 

But I’d never do that to her, do you see??
But Death flitters by, he doesn’t trust me. 
As I join the Queens by and by, 
Into their fresh tea,
They let out a loud cry. 
I wonder if she can hear their last breath. 

But I pray that she can’t
As Death’s curtain closes, 
The Queens join hand, 
As they throw Death’s white roses.
I take my nightly bow. 

But what of that wild girl
Whom Death flits between?
And what of her lover? 
So gentle, so sanguine? 
She is safe from Death for now. 

Well, this is not a story,
For that girl, she is me. 
And her lover, well, she
Will remain a myst’ry. 
But Death has her on his list;
Do you see? 
It’s cemented and written
Just ‘bove her right brow.
Form: Rhyme

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