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Wait Listed

A friend passed on – not someone close
But someone I adored.
A service in her honor
I would never have ignored.

So when I heard, belatedly,
That there had been one planned,
In three days’ time, I reached out
To the person in command.

Explaining in an email
That I wanted to attend,
I thought for sure an invitation
She would thus extend.

Instead, in her reply she wrote
That there was just no room.
She’d add me to the wait list
With some others, I presume.

If she who’s being honored
Were alive, there is no doubt,
There’s no way anybody
Wanting in would be left out.

I understand a wait list
Must be started on occasion,
But not when someone’s death
Is factored into the equation.
Form: Rhyme


The Often Awkward Nature of a Kiss

You will just have to teach yourself
one poor female victim at a time
for kissing is a dangerous occupation
for adolescents and virgins.

Angles and shapes have to be factored in
at lightning speed
before the plunge is undertaken.

The neck must be adjusted to height and
the trajectory of the pursed lips meet
as a natural occurrence
like two butterfly wings
brushing each other in flight.
On first dates
short-sighted rhino clashes
must be avoided at all cost.

Noses and teeth
will always get in the way somehow
just a fact.

In time, with much trial and error
the young will get the hang of it
and it's rather nice
in an often sloppy sort of way.

Eventually tongues are employed
in strange animalistic tasks
that they were never designed for
but in the heat of the moment
eating is often mistaken for kissing.

Go forth confidently then
you young men, but always remember
"though a kiss might be gentle
and oh so elemental
diamonds are a girl's best friend."

Premium Member Brainy Brevity

My fourth concussion
                 and first skull fracture
                            were my known’s destruction.

Was nearly a decade when
             hindsight saw grief factored
	         into the garbled map
                       where I tried to track
                            the me I yesterday knew.

Cognitive skills impaired,
             career derailed, finances
                 math whipped, emotions
                       and thoughts just blurred passes
                            as headaches score and scar.

My acceptance bends and bleeps ~~~
                 how to befriend pain’s trend …..
                            when my life's held in its reign?

It’s hard enough finding my name
behind all an accident changed.
 




... CayCay Jennings
December 27, 2018

Our Brains Not Designed For It

However we came into being,
Commenting on anything and everything,
I am sure was not factored in,
When it came time to give us a brain.

When it became obvious that our brains were about to implode,
Computers appeared on the scene,
And one would have thought the need, to comment on everything,
We know nothing about would be reduced,
And our brains would resume normal service,
But no, we seem to have ramped up the comments,
Which now, carry hate, which is another monkey on our back,
Which in turn gets more Knee jerk reactions from those,
We attempt to destroy with words as sharp as any knife.

For those without the urge to be the fastest on the draw,
To shoot off comments til their brain starts to haemorrhage,
It is your duty to send out messages of Love and Hope,
Before any more brains start imploding.
Form: Didactic

Premium Member Undertow of Nostalgia

UNDERTOW OF NOSTALGIA
the ambiguous
    explored
on an indeterminate
surface

liberating
    the emotional freedom

 a splintered breakaway
  of
    excitement
& expectation
improvement
 emphasised
    by  innovation
effect& consequence
emphasised

 trends in full force
conveying
emotion
 meaning
  suggestion &
heightened sensation

a super reality
in the unconscious
  with enduring influence

maturity
denial
 of instant predictions
&priorities
factored to emergine
as motivations
    I re engage


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Form: Other


Premium Member Please Take Pity

Can anyone fathom a temperature of -40F

That's what we're experiencing today

Must qualify that, it's with the wind chill factored in

It's a balmy -15F, in this winter ballet

What am I doing here, have I lost all my marbles

Insane is a good word to choose

Shouldn't go outside because of the dying factor

Going to stay inside, hit the booze

No, never touch the stuff just like my Daddy

Maybe downed 5 beers in total

Will write more sillies which y'all seems to like

In this age where everything's global

Okay I'm making a request of all you guys

If you live in the sunny south

Can you put me up for two or three months

Maybe in the basement of your house

I'd pay you in kindness, I'd help with the chores

Make your meals and cut your grass

Won't someone take pity on this sad old duffer

To save me from old winter's blast



© Jack Ellison 2015
Form: Narrative

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