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Wait Listed

A friend passed on – not someone close But someone I adored. A service in her honor I would never have ignored. So when I heard, belatedly, That there had been one planned, In three days’ time, I reached out To the person in command. Explaining in an email That I wanted to attend, I thought for sure an invitation She would thus extend. Instead, in her reply she wrote That there was just no room. She’d add me to the wait list With some others, I presume. If she who’s being honored Were alive, there is no doubt, There’s no way anybody Wanting in would be left out. I understand a wait list Must be started on occasion, But not when someone’s death Is factored into the equation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/29/2018 4:54:00 AM
What? I certainly never expected a wait list for a memorial service; I cannot get my mind over it. A nice easy cadance of a rhyme, Ilene.
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:00:00 PM
That's sad indeed, I hope though I get put on a wait list when my time is up!!! :)
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Date: 4/28/2018 7:20:00 PM
Not the most caring way to conduct a memorial service. Wait list seems so impersonal and rude. Nice piece, well constructed, ilene, with great characterization.
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Date: 4/28/2018 7:10:00 PM
oh that is so sad they can't make room for people to pay their respects she must have been a very much loved lady... last year my hubby had to rig a p a system in a church hall on 2 occassions as they knew the attendees would be too many for the small church and overspill into another hall.i hope you get the chance to attend hugs jan xx
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