Please Take Pity

Can anyone fathom a temperature of -40F That's what we're experiencing today Must qualify that, it's with the wind chill factored in It's a balmy -15F, in this winter ballet What am I doing here, have I lost all my marbles Insane is a good word to choose Shouldn't go outside because of the dying factor Going to stay inside, hit the booze No, never touch the stuff just like my Daddy Maybe downed 5 beers in total Will write more sillies which y'all seems to like In this age where everything's global Okay I'm making a request of all you guys If you live in the sunny south Can you put me up for two or three months Maybe in the basement of your house I'd pay you in kindness, I'd help with the chores Make your meals and cut your grass Won't someone take pity on this sad old duffer To save me from old winter's blast © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 2/19/2015 8:49:00 AM
Love the poem Jack, but can't help ya there buddy, we had one degree weather the other day, needless to say I'm freezing my brrrrrr off.
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Date: 2/19/2015 3:19:00 PM
LOL one degree!
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Date: 2/19/2015 3:18:00 PM
Wow! Oe degree... absolutely balmy!!!!!!! LOL xx
Date: 2/16/2015 2:22:00 PM
You said it well Jack, I would take pity on you but Missouri has snow also. Stay warm and stay inside. Janet
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Date: 2/16/2015 3:31:00 PM
"Missouri has snow too" THAT'S JUST NOT RIGHT!!! What is happening?????? Thanks for dropping by Janet... love and huggs xoxox
Date: 2/16/2015 7:33:00 AM
Ah! You're snowy Ice Princess has hit here too. After a winter in St. Louis where all the rain and snow went around us... Well... I shouldn't of said anything cause she's getting even. We have 5 or more inches and high in the teens... But we're WAY better off then the rest of the country. I'm saying a big Thank You God while Dragon is going to help me clean off the Driveway after 2nd breakfast. Take care my friend...
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Date: 2/16/2015 7:43:00 AM
I don't remember in all my years, a wind chill of -40F!!!! That's barbaric! Can Cathie and I come and stay with you for a couple of months... PLEASE! Huggs xox
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