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Chapter 65 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Family Seventeen Xiv 2 : the Family Vacation
It was at this point 11 o'clock
At night. Damian Left Molly and
Checked on the seven. Everybody
Was fine. He returned to
Business. Molly was no longer
Afraid she knew she was in the...
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Categories:
commented, 7th grade, beach, beauty, child, grandmother, parents,
Form:
Alliteration
Chapter 85 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Young Solomons
Damian Stood in the morning sun.
The sun felt good on his face.
Delilah was still sleeping. He
Kissed her face and caressed
Her belly until she awoke.
Hey my Mrs. Me. Come on babe.
We will be leaving today...
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Categories:
commented, adventure, birth, business, father son, women,
Form:
Alliteration
Chapter 21-- Dolly Damian and Molly: Cascades Continued Ii
Dolly was beside herself with thoughts
Of this powerful man, Damian Possessing
Her. She wandered around his
Spacious apartment before
Returning to his bedroom
to sit on his bed.
Damian was ready and dressed...
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Categories:
commented, emotions, feelings, love, lust,
Form:
Alliteration
Memories In the Sand
If ever a moment in real life deserved a romantic, melancholy
backing track, it would have been that one ... we'd spent the
entire afternoon at Ferry Beach, sunning and playing frisbee, I
playing guitar, she practicing her...
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Categories:
commented, memory, missing you, passion, relationship, soulmate, time,
Form:
Dramatic Monologue
Bartender Tales Ii: Changes
Kerris spoke to Damian the junior
Bartender on the phone. "Yeah, it's
8 o'clock now. I'll be there at 9 to
Open. Meet me there at that time."
He smiled happily thinking...
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Categories:
commented, beautiful, blue, engagement, friend, friendship, heart, life,
Form:
Dramatic Verse
Chapter 121 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Family's Grand Gathering and Family Rumors
Date: June 2048
The grills were set everything was
In place. CJ informed "More
than 350 family members
Are expected to be here within
The hour." Damian said, "with 300 plus
Relatives expected today it...
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Categories:
commented, birth, confidence, deep, devotion, granddaughter, loss,
Form:
Alliteration
Chapter 164-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The Eventual EVENT
Date: July 2051
The last day of family gatherings before August. Damian
Had a limo ride with Jackson
Crysteph Julius Adonis Kyon and
CJ to visit the dwellings which housed homeless citizens and economically deprived People....
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Categories:
commented, allusion, august, beautiful, birthday, celebration,
Form:
Free verse
Chapter 138 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: New Triplet ADDITIONS
Date: May 2050
Damian returned home early morning
Back from another visit with Dolly. Still
Early misty May morning another
Dawning. 2050! The newborns triplets were
Sleeping. Damian was peeping. He would
Have to travel the...
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Categories:
commented, beach, child,
Form:
Alliteration
Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 26
“From that point forward Reginn, of the Ibero Clan, along with the Erin Clan
and the Second Ibero Clan slowly stripped more and more control away
from the King. Reversing much of his progressive policies. ...
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Categories:
commented, christmas, fairy,
Form:
Epic
Chapter 105 --Damian Delilah Mallory: Cruel Ball Plans Again
Date: October 2045
Desharah was 16 years old today
October 5, twenty- fourty five. She
Felt grown up and alive. As she
Discussed with Amadeus her mother
And Father. Amadeus Gave her an
Affectionate sloppy...
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Categories:
commented, africa, birth,
Form:
Alliteration
Another Time and Place
Another time and Place
...
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Categories:
commented, appreciation, friend, poets, remember, smile, time,
Form:
Rhyme
Chapter 17-- Molly and Dolly and Polly: Damian
First week of March 2025
Last week of March
Melancholy Molly and her sister
Dolly stopped by for a chat with
Eat some pizza Polly
(nick name due to her Appetite for...
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Categories:
commented, character, confidence, growth, house, identity, imagery, romance,
Form:
Prose
Chapter 152-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Honeymoon soon GROOM?
Next day 2051
Molly Holly were on their honeymoon
With Damian and privately disagreeing at their
Table, about who was who and was
Unknown to them and Dolly broke
The Contention, "Maybe we should
Introduce duce ourselves."...
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Categories:
commented, absence, allusion, birth,
Form:
Prose
Chapter 76 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: Cruel Ball Plans and Birthday Celebrations
Average affluent Almost Afternoon
11:30 morning time. Damian was
Still asleep as were DJ and
Amadeus. Molly and Dolly were
In the kitchen planning Barrington
And Godfrey's birthday party.
"Come sis are we baking this cake...
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Categories:
commented, environment, family, father son, girlfriend, house, july,
Form:
Alliteration
An Eternity I
Stood upright, between two roads,
On a thin metal rail,
A solitary, brown coloured bottle
Of beer, ...
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Categories:
commented, betrayal,
Form:
Rhyme
An Introduction: An Introduction
Considering how many times I set out to pen a small,
Master piece of art, a gem that might underwrite,
The utter liability of being just that stamp,
Or tramp, or whatever other denomination one might reliably take...
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Categories:
commented, humorous,
Form:
Free verse
A Wish Upon A Star - Video Lyrics by Michael Tor - POTD
POTD 24TH Feb 2025
A Wish Upon A Star – Video Lyrics by Michael Tor
DESCRIPTION
A romantic ballad of longing and serendipity, captures the emotions of a lonely soldier in “Wish Upon A Star” as he wanders...
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Categories:
commented, lonely, lost love, new year, romantic, star,
Form:
Ballad
Chapter 140-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Dasheri Hakim
Date: July 2050
Beautiful summer Saturday late
Morning. Pool party full force.
Everybody busy all seemed fine.
Damian stayed close to Molly and
Monitored her. "Feeling good my love?"
He caressed her 9 month pregnant
Belly. "I'm...
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Categories:
commented, child,
Form:
Alliteration
Chapter 93 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Affluent Festive Funeral Family Reunion
There was a twenty minute lull
Before the paramedics arrived to
Remove Greatgrand Dad's
corpse. When the paramedics
Arrived they examed Greatgrand
And confirmed the family's dread.
Damian and CJ accompanied
The body to the Hospital. While
Julius...
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Categories:
commented, birth, life,
Form:
Alliteration
New Year's Resolutions
Jim Daley and Joe McCarthy had something in common. They died at 80 going to the bathroom in the middle of the night. Walt O'Brien, their protege, found this out when he called the homes...
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Categories:
commented, new year,
Form:
Prose
Chapter 152-- same day--DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The reception and These Hawaiian Daze
Date: April 2051
Wondrous water ways Hawaiian Daze
And Daze and Daze. The Hakim
Family wondered how long their
Stay would endure as their return
Home was inevitable. Now as the
Ceremony ended. Everybody
Remained in festive...
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Categories:
commented, allusion, birth,
Form:
Alliteration
Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 68
Joulupukki knocked on the door before entering the room. In the center of one wall was a bed that was large enough for two humans to fit in comfortably. The young elf lying...
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Categories:
commented, christmas, fairy,
Form:
Epic
Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 34
“Yes, well, we will determine that at another time,” was the Lead Councilman's response, “Now we must decide on DynDoeth's charges.”
Cutting him off Rian said,
“I vote to have DynDoeth...
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Categories:
commented, christmas, fairy,
Form:
Epic
A Little Share of the Comments from my Peers!
Hi sharing a few of the comments coming onto my page will post more in later days ---! Love Always from Joyce Faure to your reading space God bless you very well also in...
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Categories:
commented, appreciation, beautiful, care, career, dedication, faith, friend,
Form:
Bio
Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 40
After the meeting, Lumi and Joulupukki walked slowly through the cottage talking,
“I am sorry for bringing up sad memories of your parents,” Joulupukki expressed his condolences.
...
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Categories:
commented, christmas, fairy,
Form:
Epic