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Premium Member Chapter 65 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Family Seventeen Xiv 2 : the Family Vacation
It was at this point 11 o'clock 
At night. Damian Left Molly and 
Checked on the seven. Everybody 
Was fine. He returned to 
Business. Molly was no longer 
Afraid she knew she was in the...

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Categories: commented, 7th grade, beach, beauty, child, grandmother, parents,
Form: Alliteration



Premium Member Chapter 85 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Young Solomons
Damian Stood in the morning sun.
The sun felt good on his face.
Delilah was still sleeping. He
Kissed her face and caressed 
Her belly until she awoke.
Hey my Mrs. Me. Come on babe.
We will be leaving today...

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Categories: commented, adventure, birth, business, father son, women,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Chapter 21-- Dolly Damian and Molly: Cascades Continued Ii
Dolly was beside herself with thoughts 
Of this powerful man,  Damian Possessing 
Her.  She wandered around his
Spacious apartment before 
Returning to his bedroom 
to sit on his bed. 
Damian was ready and dressed...

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Categories: commented, emotions, feelings, love, lust,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Memories In the Sand
If ever a moment in real life deserved a romantic, melancholy
backing track, it would have been that one ... we'd spent the
entire afternoon at Ferry Beach, sunning and playing frisbee, I
playing guitar, she practicing her...

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Categories: commented, memory, missing you, passion, relationship, soulmate, time,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
Premium Member Bartender Tales Ii: Changes
Kerris  spoke to Damian the junior 
Bartender on the phone.  "Yeah, it's 
8 o'clock now.  I'll be there  at 9 to
Open.  Meet me there at that time."
He smiled happily thinking...

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Categories: commented, beautiful, blue, engagement, friend, friendship, heart, life,
Form: Dramatic Verse



Premium Member Chapter 121 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Family's Grand Gathering and Family Rumors
Date:   June  2048
The grills were set everything was 
In place. CJ informed "More
 than 350 family members 
Are expected to be here within
The hour." Damian said, "with 300 plus
Relatives expected today it...

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Categories: commented, birth, confidence, deep, devotion, granddaughter, loss,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Chapter 164-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The Eventual EVENT
Date:  July  2051

The last day of family gatherings before August. Damian 
Had a limo ride with Jackson
Crysteph Julius Adonis Kyon and
CJ to visit the dwellings which housed homeless citizens and economically deprived People....

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Categories: commented, allusion, august, beautiful, birthday, celebration,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Chapter 138 -- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: New Triplet ADDITIONS
Date:   May  2050

Damian returned home early morning 
Back from another visit with Dolly. Still
Early misty May morning another
Dawning. 2050! The newborns triplets were
Sleeping. Damian was peeping. He would 
Have to travel the...

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Categories: commented, beach, child,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 26
“From that point forward Reginn, of the Ibero Clan, along with the Erin Clan
and the Second Ibero Clan slowly stripped more and more control away
from the King.  Reversing much of his progressive policies. ...

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Categories: commented, christmas, fairy,
Form: Epic
Premium Member Chapter 105 --Damian Delilah Mallory: Cruel Ball Plans Again
Date:   October  2045

Desharah was 16 years old today
October 5,  twenty- fourty five. She
Felt grown up  and alive. As she
Discussed with Amadeus her mother 
And Father. Amadeus Gave her an
Affectionate sloppy...

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Categories: commented, africa, birth,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Another Time and Place
Another time and Place
                               ...

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Categories: commented, appreciation, friend, poets, remember, smile, time,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Chapter 17-- Molly and Dolly and Polly: Damian
First week  of March  2025
Last  week of March
Melancholy Molly and her sister 
Dolly stopped by  for a chat with 
Eat  some pizza Polly 
(nick name due to her Appetite for...

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Categories: commented, character, confidence, growth, house, identity, imagery, romance,
Form: Prose
Premium Member Chapter 152-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Honeymoon soon GROOM?
Next day   2051

Molly Holly were on their honeymoon 
With Damian and privately disagreeing at their
Table, about who was who and was
Unknown to them and Dolly broke
The Contention, "Maybe we should 
Introduce duce ourselves."...

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Categories: commented, absence, allusion, birth,
Form: Prose
Premium Member Chapter 76 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: Cruel Ball Plans and Birthday Celebrations
Average affluent Almost Afternoon 
11:30 morning time.  Damian was
Still asleep as were DJ and 
Amadeus. Molly and Dolly were 
In the kitchen planning Barrington 
And Godfrey's birthday party.
"Come sis are we baking this cake...

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Categories: commented, environment, family, father son, girlfriend, house, july,
Form: Alliteration
An Eternity I
Stood upright, between two roads,
On a thin metal rail,
A solitary, brown coloured bottle 
Of beer,                    ...

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Categories: commented, betrayal,
Form: Rhyme
An Introduction: An Introduction
Considering how many times I set out to pen a small,
Master piece of art, a gem that might underwrite,
The utter liability of being just that stamp,
Or tramp, or whatever other denomination one might reliably take...

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Categories: commented, humorous,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member A Wish Upon A Star - Video Lyrics by Michael Tor - POTD
POTD 24TH Feb 2025

A Wish Upon A Star – Video Lyrics by Michael Tor

DESCRIPTION

A romantic ballad of longing and serendipity, captures the emotions of a lonely soldier in “Wish Upon A Star” as he wanders...

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Categories: commented, lonely, lost love, new year, romantic, star,
Form: Ballad
Premium Member Chapter 140-- DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: Dasheri Hakim
Date:  July  2050

Beautiful  summer Saturday late
Morning. Pool party full force. 
Everybody busy all seemed fine.
Damian stayed close to Molly and
Monitored her. "Feeling good my love?"
He caressed her 9 month pregnant 
Belly. "I'm...

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Categories: commented, child,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Chapter 93 -- Damian Delilah Mallory: the Affluent Festive Funeral Family Reunion
There was a twenty minute lull
Before the paramedics arrived to
Remove Greatgrand Dad's 
corpse. When the paramedics 
Arrived they examed Greatgrand 
And confirmed the family's dread.
 Damian and CJ accompanied 
The body to the Hospital. While
Julius...

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Categories: commented, birth, life,
Form: Alliteration
New Year's Resolutions
Jim Daley and Joe McCarthy had something in common. They died at 80 going to the bathroom in the middle of the night. Walt O'Brien, their protege, found this out when he called the homes...

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Categories: commented, new year,
Form: Prose
Premium Member Chapter 152-- same day--DAMIAN DELILAH MALLORY HOLANNYA: The reception and These Hawaiian Daze
Date:  April  2051

Wondrous water ways Hawaiian Daze
And Daze and Daze. The Hakim 
Family wondered how long their
Stay would endure as their return 
Home was inevitable. Now as the
Ceremony ended. Everybody 
Remained in festive...

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Categories: commented, allusion, birth,
Form: Alliteration
Premium Member Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 68
Joulupukki knocked on the door before entering the room.  In the center of one wall was a bed that was large enough for two humans to fit in comfortably.  The young elf lying...

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Categories: commented, christmas, fairy,
Form: Epic
Premium Member Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 34
“Yes, well, we will determine that at another time,” was the Lead Councilman's response, “Now we must decide on DynDoeth's charges.”
Cutting him off Rian said, 
     “I vote to have DynDoeth...

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Categories: commented, christmas, fairy,
Form: Epic
Premium Member A Little Share of the Comments from my Peers!
Hi sharing a few of the comments coming onto my page will post more in later days ---!  Love Always from Joyce Faure to your reading space God bless you very well also in...

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Categories: commented, appreciation, beautiful, care, career, dedication, faith, friend,
Form: Bio
Premium Member Landsbyen -Into the North- An Epic Poem 40
After the meeting, Lumi and Joulupukki walked slowly through the cottage talking,
     “I am sorry for bringing up sad memories of your parents,” Joulupukki expressed his condolences.
    ...

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Categories: commented, christmas, fairy,
Form: Epic

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