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Premium Member Abandoned

“When life traverses the path of agony the birds in the 
yearning sky show the flight course out of the feeling of 
being abandoned” – Quote by Poet


In the garden path, forlorn and entranced you walk,
dawn’s seraphic sky embraces you with silken hue.
I feel my heart fly there high with the dove flock,
you won’t be lonely, for I won’t ever leave you.

In the desert dunes you trail lost and desolate,
follow the melted mirage moving out of your view,
reach the verdant oasis where you will find me wait,
you won’t feel you’re dismal, for I won’t ever desert you.

On the silver sands of the satin beach you pace alone, 
the waves adorn your feet with pearly pattern new.
You feel my heart’s rhythm as I make you my own,
you won’t be adrift, for I won’t ever forsake you.

On the stream of love you sail away from agony,
in the plateau of yearning anchor your life atoned.   
You hear in murmuring ripples my heart’s symphony, 
you won’t be dismayed, for I won’t leave you abandoned.
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member A Visit With My Dad

On hands and knees brown leaves were brushed away
My fingers traced his name engraved in stone
The birds remind me how the years have flown
As tears of shame and guilt fell where he lay

My mind looked in my heart for words to say
"You are the wisest man I've ever known
Before your death our conflicts were atoned
But void inside my heart has not decayed

I taught my children values which we shared
And looked after my mother like you asked
The pain I caused you still makes me feel sad
I just want you to know that I still care

My love for you still lives though you have passed
If you can hear me now, I miss you dad."



  an original poem by Daniel Turner

You

O Lord, You are worthy;
I worship You.
You are in all things;
Every word that sings.

Raised to Your throne
For all that You atoned.
You gave it all up;
You drank the cup.

A way in the wilderness
Paved with love kindness.
You put light on my feet.
A beautiful shore we will meet.

Showing us the way
For us to walk.
As You say.
Is how we talk.
Arms raised,
Wholly praised.
Holy in Your grace.
Falling on my face.

O Lord.

My thoughts are not Yours;
Your thoughts I adore.
Prophecy in my belly;
Pour out for all life.

Worthy is the Lord!

I come and see,
Your love will be,
Where I find You.
Like the morning dew.

(By ScottM during church worship 12/21/25)

(Psalm 130, as heard in The Chosen S5E7)
Out of the depths;
I cry to You.
Hear my voice.
O Lord,
Let your ears be drawn
To my pleas for mercy,
O Lord.
Form: Lyric

The Holy Spirit of Godly Intensity

on the verge of being crucified 
for our sins destined to die 
He asked we keep His communion true 
and never forget all He went through 

Jesus promised to never forsake us
for us He atoned
He gifted us the Holy Spirit 
so we'd never be alone

His presence a gracious entity 
the Holy Spirit of godly intensity 
let it to manifest in its totality 
consume us with a godly propensity 

Jesus promised to never forsake us 
for us He atoned 
He gifted us the Holy Spirit 
so we'd never be alone 

passionate purposeful
focused is our emotions
joy-filled, divinely driven 
our dedicated devotion 
the Holy Spirit of godly intensity
the Holy Spirit of godly sincerity

let it compel us, impel us 
to be like Jesus the Christ 
let it urge us, converge us 
as we walk this Christian life 

let us be like Jesus 
who prayed through adversity 
let the power of the Holy Spirit, 
infuse us with it's intensity 

let it break us to remake us 
let it mold us to now enfold us 
engulfed by its fires 
as it burns away our sins 
immersed in its desires 
as it renews all over again

Jesus promised to never forsake us 
for us He atoned 
He gifted us the Holy Spirit 
so we'd never be alone

the Holy Spirit of godly intensity 
the Holy Spirit of godly sincerity
Form: Ballad

Premium Member Call To Country

Remember our freedoms, lest we forget
The price of liberty and of surrender.

Tyranny cannot trample the people
Lest our future succumb to infamy.

Carried: our flag over our enemies
Our land secure as soldiers we buried.

Pray our allegiances will never bend
As we stand firm for American ways.

Let founding principles be cemented
Cured and secure, and forever be set.

Brave as one loyal to God and country
Live committed and resolved to the grave.

Atoned by the soldiers who gave their all
Their names on white crosses and sacred stones.

Sound your commitment, all citizens pledge
To stand resolute and to country bound.

Dread is no option, allegiance required
Make bravery soar and division: dead.

One nation is ours to love and defend
One life is yours and your obligation.
© Tom Valles  Create an image from this poem.


Time's Grip

Trapped inside a wasteland,
dying inch by inch

Slave inside a rusted heart,
feelings chained then lynched

Later now than yesterday,
earlier than goodbye

Spooled like thread that can’t be sewn,
the needle asking why

But time contorts, reversing,
trumpets call you home

Eyes unspoken, voice untouched,
senses all atoned

Words on fire with freedom stirred,
reasons scorched and bare

A silence brewing louder,
new light burns through the air

Eleven Angels fly as one,
and twelfth, you join their throng

With wings now soaring inward
—time’s grip left dead and gone

(Airplane To Seattle: March 8, 2017)
Form: Rhyme

Overexertion

Perpetual
Intellectual
Mother
Just another
Smother, then cover
“Too weak to recover”
“Be our good maid”
“Just to be betrayed”
“Don’t give her a voice!”
It’s not love if there’s no choice.
To deal with perpetual self-assertion
The old sisterhood of overexertion!

Sarah Baartman
Wu Zetian
Cleopatra
Anne Boleyn
Joan of Arc
Sophie Scholl
Sylvia Plath
Marilyn Monroe
Micaela Bastidas
Yang Guifei

Fate bestowed a bitter gift
A curse more grave than death’s drift
A life where they were lured and torn
Left gasping, alone, forlorn
Once the universe had lost them
Cruel hands never let them astray
Their trials, none atoned
Their weary souls never left alone

Battles fought, voices shorn
Our bodies spent, our spirits worn
No rest, no vindication, no excursion
Just the classic sisterhood of overexertion!
© Reya Suri  Create an image from this poem.

Calvary Made the Resurrection Inevitable

Prophecies spoken, Jesus is the Art of Perfection
History cannot forget the resurrection
The Cross of Resurrection needs close inspection
The Bible reveals that this matter is certainly not inconsequential
Based on our faith, Calvary made the resurrection inevitable
You cannot kill something when the Spoken Word is Alive Forever!

The death of Jesus is unique because of His Resurrection
No other leader came back from the dead and
We live our lives in His Resurrection Power

The tomb was empty
The absence of Jesus’ body
Presented His enemies with a problem!
No corpse could be found
Jesus of Nazareth rose from the Dead

The Resurrection makes all the difference in our lives
Jesus atoned for our sins on the Cross!
Many thought that He would remain in the Tomb
Many thought that His Name would just pass by but
God raised Him from the grave and therefore
History cannot forget the resurrection

We thank God the Father that He will raise up the saints
Because the Resurrection makes all the Difference

Mark Frank

Copyright ©2023 Mark Frank
© Mark Frank  Create an image from this poem.

Time's Grip

Trapped inside a wasteland,
dying inch by inch

Slave inside a rusted heart,
feelings chained then lynched

Later now than yesterday,
earlier than goodbye

Spooled like thread that can’t be sewn,
the needle asking why

But time contorts, reversing,
trumpets call you home

Eyes unspoken, voice untouched,
senses all atoned

Words on fire with freedom stirred,
reasons scorched and bare

A silence brewing louder,
new light burns through the air

Eleven Angels fly as one,
and twelfth, you join their throng

With wings now soaring inward
—time’s grip left dead and gone

(Airplane To Seattle: March 8, 2017)
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Fear the Lord and Turn From Evil - Proverbs 3: 7, 8: 13, 16: 6

Proverbs is full of great wisdom
having complete trust in its word
leads you in the way of righteousness
any other route is totally absurd

Don't trust in your own sight
be sure to display godly reverence
turn yourself away from all evil
fear the Lord your God in His night

You can't do these two things
for fearing God is hating evil
all types of perverted talk you hate
arrogant pride brings your justice date

Your iniquity needs to be atoned for
faithfulness and divine love does this
fear the Lord and turn from evil
brings you to receive your eternal kiss

Having God's fear deep in your heart
enables you to be holy and obey
all that the Lord commands upon yourself
in Christ, you're able to do as He says

(Be not wise in your own eyes;
    fear the Lord, and turn away from evil.
Proverbs 3: 7(ESV)
The fear of the Lord is hatred of evil.
Pride and arrogance and the way of evil
    and perverted speech I hate.
Proverbs 8: 13(ESV)
By steadfast love and faithfulness, iniquity is atoned for,
    and by the fear of the Lord, one turns away from evil.)
 Proverbs 16: 6 (ESV)

(Quote:
" I believe it is impossible to consistently walk in obedience and holiness unless you have the fear of God in your heart." - David Wilkerson (1931-2011) U.S. Evangelist )
Form: Rhyme

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