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August 19, 2023

Contest :Angelic Or Abandoned Words

Sponsored by : Constance La France

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“When life traverses the path of agony the birds in the yearning sky show the flight course out of the feeling of being abandoned” – Quote by Poet In the garden path, forlorn and entranced you walk, dawn’s seraphic sky embraces you with silken hue. I feel my heart fly there high with the dove flock, you won’t be lonely, for I won’t ever leave you. In the desert dunes you trail lost and desolate, follow the melted mirage moving out of your view, reach the verdant oasis where you will find me wait, you won’t feel you’re dismal, for I won’t ever desert you. On the silver sands of the satin beach you pace alone, the waves adorn your feet with pearly pattern new. You feel my heart’s rhythm as I make you my own, you won’t be adrift, for I won’t ever forsake you. On the stream of love you sail away from agony, in the plateau of yearning anchor your life atoned. You hear in murmuring ripples my heart’s symphony, you won’t be dismayed, for I won’t leave you abandoned.

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:34:00 PM
Subimal, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the quote, Constance
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/17/2023 10:54:00 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Date: 8/23/2023 10:48:00 AM
- Congratulations with this moving Abandoned poem ... brilliantly written, Subimal :) - hugs
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/23/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your wonderful comment.
Date: 8/22/2023 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Abandoned" is a wonderful write/story/great ending. "Love It" Have a great day............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/23/2023 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, Paula for liking the poem.
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