Overexertion

Perpetual Intellectual Mother Just another Smother, then cover “Too weak to recover” “Be our good maid” “Just to be betrayed” “Don’t give her a voice!” It’s not love if there’s no choice. To deal with perpetual self-assertion The old sisterhood of overexertion! Sarah Baartman Wu Zetian Cleopatra Anne Boleyn Joan of Arc Sophie Scholl Sylvia Plath Marilyn Monroe Micaela Bastidas Yang Guifei Fate bestowed a bitter gift A curse more grave than death’s drift A life where they were lured and torn Left gasping, alone, forlorn Once the universe had lost them Cruel hands never let them astray Their trials, none atoned Their weary souls never left alone Battles fought, voices shorn Our bodies spent, our spirits worn No rest, no vindication, no excursion Just the classic sisterhood of overexertion!

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Hiba Junaid

Date: 4/2/2025 10:00:00 AM

This poem is a powerful tribute to the resilience and struggles of women throughout history. The rhythm and sharp verbalization give it a sense of urgency, making each line hit with impact. The historical references add weight, reminding us of the voices that were silenced and the strength that endured. ‘The classic sisterhood of overexertion’ is such a poignant and haunting phrase—this piece truly leaves an impression. Beautifully written!

Hiba Junaid
Date: 4/4/2025 12:46:00 PM

You did such a great job, Reya! Thank you for honouring us women by the power of your mighty pen. Be Blessed <3

Reya Suri
Date: 4/2/2025 11:51:00 AM

Thank you so much, Hiba! I’ve been hoping that someone stumble upon this piece. The research and time I spent highlighting the difficulties of women in history and in the current times helped me with the references. I’m glad to leave an impression, though it is quite poignant; besides, history must be learned about to avoid being repeated. Thank you so much for your kind comment, really! I’m so glad you checked this one out. <3