Light Tight Poems | Examples


The Lake

The Lake.....

lies… still,
a glistening sheet of tin foil,
shimmering in a cold-eyed wind.

At night
the lake still... lies… still;
a coffin with lid screwed light-tight.

On occasion, the moon trickles light,
lightly across the lake's pitch-black back;
the knack of making the coffin lid crack!

Today, I challenge myself
to touch-dive the lake’s chilling depths,
halfway down I halt, a dark vault, 
weakens my errant confidence. 
Despite puppet legs and handcuffed arms
I spin frantically to reach a detached surface,
bursting out like some skittish, Scottish salmon
only to be held between the two supremos;
illuminated sky and darksome water.

Tonight, the lake grips my bedroom window
and I watch as watery, inky tentacles 
claw and talon at an unsettled shoreline. 

Later, I wait for sleep to possess me,
sensing surrounding hills clinging closely
while rain falls like pellets of iron.

So I drift…listening  to the lake
whispering dangerous, whispering treacherous secrets
until nature’s seesaw; night tilts into daylight.


Ian Souter
Categories: light tight, fear, water,
Form: Narrative

4th of July Freedom

4TH of JULY
freedom fireworks break
the sky is mine hot
delight sight light tight blue lake
Categories: light tight, holiday,
Form: Haiku


Beauty

WORLD IS BEAUTIFUL
                                     SAY THOSE WHO REALIZE IT
                                           DIFFERENT IN VIEWS
                                             FOR ANGLES DUES

                                   SOME ONE'S EYES LIGHT BRIGHT
                                   SOME ONE'S SENSE LIGHT TIGHT
                              SOME ONE'S IN MANIFESTATION'S  PART
                                            BUT A RARE IS EXPERT

                                             BEAUTY IS GLORIOUS
                                         ALL THE WAY MARVELOUS 
                                      IF CONCLUDED WITH WORDS
                                              GOES OUT AND FAR

                                                 IT LIES IN ALL
                                       JUST INNER SIGHT RECALLS
                                            HOLY LOVE REFLECTS
                                      JUST NEEDS SWEET WORDS
Categories: light tight, introspection, philosophy, light, light,
Form: Light Verse
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