4th of July Freedom

4TH of JULY
freedom fireworks break
the sky is mine hot
delight sight light tight blue lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Hi Charles, you said it all so eloquently in three short beautifully creative lines. Bravo!
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 12:46 PM
- Have a happy July 4th! (a normal day in Norway :) - Well written Haiku, Charles !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Duet Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Wonderful Charles
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