Jackknifed Poems | Examples


Just a Voice

Gridlock on I-75, it's raining heavy. Up ahead somewhere
a truck has jackknifed. We are down to one lane and not moving.

I switch off the engine and wipers watching the world
dissolve inside a waterfall. I'm not alone, there's a voice in the backseat;
only a deep male voice.

"Man I'm tired of travelling this same stretch of highway" It said clearly.

I stiffened; a cold sweat chilling my mind.

"When did it happen" I said, deducing the perhaps obvious.

"Time don't work the same around here," he replied. I'm in a repeating cycle
and I’ve been stuck here watching it all happening again".

I heard myself saying: "by 'it' I assume you’re watching your death?"

"It's time for me to move on, it said quickly, “traffics moving now,
horns are blasting and there's an oncoming 18 wheeler
hydroplaning behind you -
                                        and you're not watching!”
Categories: jackknifed, poetry,
Form: Free verse

The Trucker

Miles of roads while blowing horns 
tiresome bodies their eyes are sore,
Trying to reach a rest stop to avoid 
a jackknifed load.

Hauling the necessities to survive in this world, 
whether it's Gas, Food or Motor oil.

Driving a semi the juggernaut of the road 
maneuvering in all conditions even the blistering cold. 

Away from Friends and Families away from their homes 
Holidays and private events are void they're  all alone.

A hard grip of the wheel avoiding reckless drivers 
swerving in to unforseen  debris blowing out tires.

A grueling shift comes to an end locking up the Trailer, 
Arriving to the sanity of their homes ready to retire.™©

By: Shawn Munoz
Categories: jackknifed, adventure, business, jobs, work,
Form: Narrative


Premium MemberHello There Carrot Top

Because of a jackknifed tractor-trailer up ahead,
vehicles on this highway has been stopped cold dead.
The radio traffic report came on a little late.
That is the reason for my ignominious fate.
I had to use the highway to get to the liquor store.
I ran out of beer, so I had to get some more.
Therefore, I will be stuck here for quite some time.
The way some people drive seems like a big crime.
Wait a minute!  I see a female that is sublime.
She is in a little foreign job a few cars from me.
This attractive redhead appears as cute as can be.
Hello there carrot top!  Yes, I am talking to you!
Why don’t you come over here and have yourself a brew?
Categories: jackknifed, adventure, girlfriend-boyfriend, social, ,
Form: Rhyme
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