CONCENTRATION
startling
visuals
invoking
the
unspoiled
somehow
morph
into passion
&intensity
of feeling
articulated
a
work in progress
courtesy
of
ancestry
impoverished
inobvious
the
obvious
studies the
in
ultimate
freedoms
obviously
&
enshrined
a deeply
personal
response
to community
interests
inspired
by a series
of
scenes
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
Categories:
inobvious, poetry,
Form: Other
I'll take you on a journey ,
That you've never been before,
Close your eyes completely ,
And become the open door...
Suspended with no hinges,
Yet supported by no frame,
The inobvious appendage,
Draws you to another plane...
But once you cross this threshold,
To the realm of what's beyond,
And see the future unfold,
Before the presents even gone...
You gather a perspective,
From a different point of view,
So lifes not so subjective,
As you move between the two...
Come with me on this journey,
And we'll meet somewhere in time,
Relieved of all the hurting,
As we free each others mind...
Categories:
inobvious, adventure
Form: Light Verse