Concentration
CONCENTRATION
startling
visuals
invoking
the
unspoiled
somehow
morph
into passion
&intensity
of feeling
articulated
a
work in progress
courtesy
of
ancestry
impoverished
inobvious
the
obvious
studies the
in
ultimate
freedoms
obviously
&
enshrined
a deeply
personal
response
to community
interests
inspired
by a series
of
scenes
NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand
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