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Concentration

CONCENTRATION
startling
visuals
 invoking
the
unspoiled
 somehow
morph
into passion
&intensity
of feeling
articulated

a
work in progress
 courtesy
of
ancestry
impoverished
inobvious
the
obvious
studies the
in
ultimate
freedoms
obviously
&
enshrined

 a deeply
personal
 response
to community
 interests
inspired
by a series
of
 scenes

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.
Copyright © Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 9/29/2022 10:46:00 AM
...interest-tinggg....consent-rationing in favor of those in need.......stan sand
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