Friable Poems


Surfing Up to November

Deep November,
a shallow time, nonetheless.
The snow is high packed with a cryogenic
amnesia.
Not yet dawn,
a sunken bed
muffles rising thoughts.
An eyelash of cognizance
flits across
thawing synapses.
Then the elastic nature
of sleep and wakefulness
snap alive!
November is howling still,
like a stray dog it scratches at my window -
wanting in.
For a while intelligence is a thorn in my paw.
Outside of the brain, November
is the same,
the darkness is still deep,
and friable as charred bone,
yet by now I am a candle flaring,
a flicker and gleam
within a neuronal time-machine,
and mind-surfing
on an ever-cresting awareness.
Categories: friable, poetry,
Form: Free verse

The Roots of Compassion

The loam of Human Kindness, friable,
Can be compact within a mortal grasp,
Yet loose as needs release and pliable
For the roots of Compassion to enclasp.
Warmer emotions must shine from above
If tender regard is to grow from seed;
The sun of mankind’s garden must be Love
For our good works to produce and succeed.
But the moody darkness of self-concerns
Can pour from our clouds like a deluge flood,
To soak in ruin’s caprice wetness that burns
The bonds people form, severed in the mud.
    So tend your soils well, O you Sons of Man;
    Nurture on Earth, God’s harvest while you can.
Categories: friable, allegory, garden, god, growth,
Form: Sonnet


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essential focus
   self-analysis
 of the
   instinctive urge

 a contrast so stark
explicit
   invisible
as
explosive
  exploits are portrayed

 a mantle
  of a perogative
whipped
 manipulated
yet so delicate
   in self-satisfaction

self-irony
  to the fore
   sensibility
so friable
lacking solidity
as
  fluidity surfaces
the immediacy
  pauses &contrasts
as formal
   tension
is magnified

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Categories: friable, poetry,
Form: Other

Rust

In the stillness of time                                                                                                                                                                         flaky and friable                                                                                                                                                                      Flaking paint exposing a patch under the surface                                                                                                                                  watching iron will turn to dust
Categories: friable, allegory, corruption, death, irony,
Form: Free verse

Morning Fog Memory

Morning Fog Memory

Lamp-eyed frogs on this misty morning croak guttural sounds that break the silence of muffling condensation,
Their ancient amphibian eyes blinking slowly as shutter lenses at a fifth of a second. 
Lenses that once caught photos of us in scintillating amber sunsets permanence beguiles 
Time remakes space  
The frozen moments of love once viable we store in our minds as round full and glossy as dewdrops balanced on the wintry friable leaf 
Those old people of the past entombed in the faded yellow-hues with smiles 
With worn out ideas of an age long vanished… 
We too wear are trousers rolled as we grow old,
 I think of you in this mist.
Categories: friable, lost love, memory,
Form: Free verse


Ghost Orchid

what makes the heart feel for something it can't touch?
his tears caused contractions for his heart to pulse
floundered, looking for loves heartache to clutch
whimsical solace of her essence startles his impulse 

 shouldering the bane of a kiss that foreshadowed trifles
kooky huh? how time unleashes emotions restrained behind pride
 losing his beloved inamorata to an admirer she mollycoddles
his heart became friable to the echo of her suicide

It was the absence of a note that left his worries unverified
what makes the heart feel for something it can't touch?
Now alone and without; a lovers heart is mummified
he will never love another as much

the “ghost orchid” has become her epithet
the rules of this game have changed, misère ouverte.







 I chose Bonnie Raitt “I can't make you love me” because when I listened to it it brought 
back memories of my childhood feeling second to my fathers work. His physical presence was 
always their, but his heart belonged to his work and still is. After listening to the song  5 or 6 
times I thought of the question, what makes the heart feel for something that it can't 
touch----like love, and went from there.
Categories: friable, beauty, betrayal, courage, emotions,
Form: Sonnet
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