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22 Caught

Knowing they were
discreditable
He refused to examine
the motives

Refusing to examine
the motives
He discredited
— himself

(Dreamsleep: June, 2024)

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Chaos

change complete chaos
civic constant craze conflict 
compose courage comes 


Desolation

discreditable
deed did drive desolation
direct damage done


Earth

earthly existence
expose elements enrich
eons enjoyment


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Journey

Beaten, weathered, withered and worn
The hard knocks of life I have sworn
Let my thoughts out through riffs and rhyme
Yet in some places it is a thought crime

I have grown up hard and wise
I have seen through the reapers disguise
From young to old my views only progressed
On this journey friends grew weak and regressed

Stoic, I have stood the test of time
So close waiting  for the 11th hr chime
As I'm facing the wrath of zealot fanatics
Pushing their assumptions  of the dogmatic

Perseverance is what got me through the worse
The future might look grim as death's curse
Nothing discreditable about what I will bring
My eternal hell's  swan song I will sing


My Looking Glass Self

I fear not the unknown
but what I cannot unleash and interpret
stifled emotions blur my vision
leaving my looking glass self – unclear

my insides are in disarray, like 
shredded confetti propelling in the wind
scattered pieces lose their bearing  
leaving my looking glass self -  astray

bewilderment surrounds me now, while
revisiting an exhausted road 
heavy footprints convey a story
leaving my looking glass self - questioning

life’s sophistication is a struggle, akin to a rubix cube
to succeed with no difficulty - cheat
moulding fate to the desired outcome
leaving my looking glass self - discreditable

I excavate buried courage, and
confront the image gazing back at me
suffering has been endured, however
the reflection stands upright and determined 
despite life’s battle, survival has conquered      
leaving my looking glass self – intact 

written by Diana-Marie Bombardieri
January 11, 2012
Originally written in 1998

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