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I buried her deep in the ground
The earth covers her all around
We mark the grave with rounded stone
I’m left standing all alone

The wind beneath my wings is gone
Though she battled long and strong
Now with God she waits for me
Where we will unite for eternity

The fire inside angers me
That too young her soul went free
And upon this Earth I continue to tread
Each future year I approach with dread

Time is like water for the fire inside
My hurt and pain, I learn to hide
My angry fire starts to subside
But my lover’s desire I still abide

In the Earth she lies, having taken my wind
The fire extinguished by water within

Paradoxical Sleep

Random thoughts at arbitrary times
A life once shared quickly demised
Thoughts that swim in water deep
Nightmares come in paradoxical sleep

You watch me flail, in over my head
Drift in and out while I mournfully tread
Choke out the water that’s in my throat
Silently drown or try to stay  afloat 

You were here and now you’re gone
Ash still falling with each new dawn
A life invested extinguished fast
Promise yields to the aftermath

Strength for all so they don't see
A tower that crumbles inwardly
Internal tears that my heart cries
The perfected façade is just a guise

Quazune Remembered

With silver eyes, 
scattered,
reminder to  bygone days,
between mountains and river,
our world,
under children's eyes.

In the garden,
stars from water and earth,
the sweetest fruits,
tempting,
bananas and oranges.

The odor of the forests,
the far drifting honey grass,
in the nearby village,
kunai huts and smoke.
coffee in full flower,
like  morning dew.

The  vast Waghi valley,
Kaukau mounds and Kumu.
Protecting Kunaigrass
separating water and mountains.
Pictures from  memory ,
between  coffee and tea plantations

Quazune, my friend,
where did the sky go?
Where is the warmth of the day?
Lost in the thicket of  forest,
whispering loneliness
And birds of paradise
sing their last tunes.

Those wonderful days,
memory of time, like
falling leaves.
Now silent songs.


Salt Water

Water cleanse the stains away, I seek redemption here today

As I fall into this ocean blue, I ask for death to come from you

Pull me deep beneath your waves, so deep that I may not be saved

As I dive into this storm at sea, I ask that you take hold of me

Salt water of this powerful sea, accept my tears as one with thee

I pray too late that I be found, as into this water I quickly drown

As consciouness begins to fade, onto this ocean bed I'm laid,

Salt water as I drink your wine, I feel my tears with you entwine

I close my eyes and fall asleep, become a part of this Ocean deep

My last request will now come true, as my tears of salt merge with you.

~ Salt water you will ever be, the taste of tears that fell from me.~

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