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Xmas 2016

xmas 2016

its that time
when 
the forest
moves within
spears of green
pierce plastered 
heavens
stars descend
from distant
space 
to grace
the tips
of growing 
things
and the
concretion 
of our desires
are precisely 
wrapped with
delicate designs
frail foil
perfect corners
and invisible tape
glittering comings
soon to be going
destined to be
crumpled
rumpled
and recycled 
for excitement’s 
sake
and in the frenzied
from and to
He watches his
birthday
come
and go
His presents
already
scattered
the message
somewhat tattered
upturned carts
in the temple
of our souls.

Rules

RULES 

In the possibilities that exist in this existence implausible but true confessions 
happen out loud sometimes just to confuse and then astound the ewe the 
sudden materialization of someone never there the cell phone call is ruled by 
rules from Heaven there. In a perfect world no one would talk at all no need to 
share the info no need to make the call everyone would know where everyone 
was from. Coherent concretion of ideas a story and a line not readily available 
not making sense of rhyme. Some people if examined would not pass the 
muster of us all but that man eye say that man he needs to be lined up again the 
wall and shot shoot him if we mustard gas will get them out please toss it 
carefully away into the ditch and let it roll the bread dough boy and fight the 
WorldWarThree is coming to a village near you everytime you point a finger at 
someone in judgement land you point three back at me the rules. 
 
           
 
 
 RULES

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