Close Fitting Poems | Examples


The Noise

The noise started at precisely 9 am
A high pitched buzzing without an end
At first a curiosity of what it was
Over coffee there was discussion of its cause

It went on and on without it stopping
Just continual humming and vibrating 
Eventually it penetrated through ear plugs and muffs
No matter how tight or close fitting enough

It made people sick driving them mad
No matter what treatment was had
Then a message was broadcast on all media types
Surrender and the noise will be wiped.

© Paul Warren Poetry
Form: Ballad

That Old Red Barn

THAT  OLD   RED   BARN

That old red barn, she was well known -
She had  bleached timbers, blue roof half gone,
Baton and board construction,
And a loft with hay  - 
And  with  Emily. 
One Saturday afternoon in May
Was my introduction to barn design  and her design
Was elegant of frame  and line,
Clad very lightly, close-fitting  and fine,
But with revealing shape and tone.
Outside,  well sunbrowned and wind blown,
A thing of nature almost uncivilized, unknown.
She opened easily  to the touch,
Resisting  and squealing but not much.
Inside warm and soft with such
Welcoming recesses where  I loved
Hiding   and   very carefully explored. 
She was designed to receive.  And   
My  experience was broadened through
The barn’s red door and roof of blue  -
And by  Emily  too.
Form: Verse


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