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Premium Member Vermillion Raindrops

Dreams are nocturnal flowers, blooming when the sun has strayed far enough that we can see clearly. ~Terri Guillemets

Vermillion raindrops 
By the millions
Falling around me 
Like a cotillion of lovers 
Vying for a favor,
While the insolent villain,
Oft seen in midnight dreams,
Watches from the shadows,
Flashes his deep Castilian smile,
And beguiled I run to him.


For: ''V'' New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
November 16, 2021

Premium Member A Sonnet On a Could-Have-Been

Iberia, I long to breathe you in
as long ago I did. . . and then exhale
sangria nights with lace against my skin!
Sweet temptress draped in beauty, you unveil
Flamenco’s soul, exhuming history -
impressions left by ancients on your face -
from Roman glory’s remnants by the sea
to Moorish structures’ arcs of ageless grace.
Oh, how could I retreat with more to learn,
to make no sacrifice, nor question why
I had to keep my plans and not return
to your broad plains beneath Castilian sky?
Time stole my youth; I can’t go back again.
You could have been my home, belovèd Spain.

Feb 6, 2020 
for John Hamilton's "Your Best Sonnet 2020" contest 
(my best one that was not at least a previous winner in one of your own sonnet contests this year, John.)

My Lovely

For me it is usually a comforting sight, 

stars of diamonds illuminating the sky, 

it reminds me of thousands of flamencos dancing in the night. 

They twinkled so sadly, as if they knew 

i could find no joy in their beauty 

for tonight he has the flu 

Send to him your shine so brilliant 

oh wonderous ones 

for tonight he's not so resiliant. 

His face will seranade my dreams tonight 



get well soon my lovely Francisco 



My beautiful Castilian knight


Farewell My Castilian Bells

Farewell my Castilian bells
Ring through
These hills and valleys
Ring through the
Depths of my soul
Ring through
These cathedral clouds
Ring out loud
Farewell, my Castilian bells

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