My Lovely

For me it is usually a comforting sight, 

stars of diamonds illuminating the sky, 

it reminds me of thousands of flamencos dancing in the night. 

They twinkled so sadly, as if they knew 

i could find no joy in their beauty 

for tonight he has the flu 

Send to him your shine so brilliant 

oh wonderous ones 

for tonight he's not so resiliant. 

His face will seranade my dreams tonight 



get well soon my lovely Francisco 



My beautiful Castilian knight
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September 23, 2022 at 4:01 AM
Wonderful write Jennifer, best wishes
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