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Across the lakes

Through frozen flakes
 
They come in storm, 

Whose breath be warm 
 
To change a freeze 

Into a tenderness, 

To fall and splatter, 

With applause

To somehow matter; 

Offer cause,

Hard against the clotheslines of 

The earth of every yard.

Spilling a releasing warmth 

To all frozen tongues and 

Flowered root that soon 

From canon stalks will shoot 

The sky with both barrels 

Of new brightness. 

Seizing every eye,

As spring is born. 

Pages torn, windows flung, 

Songs sung and

Sun splashing warm kisses 

Onto cheeks that blush 

With wishes 

For only more.

A day or two of lasting pleasure

Amore’, 

This too, a part of 

Our forever story.

I will sit outside tomorrow 

On a tiled balcony

Have my breakfast, 

Scrambled eggs 

And caviar, 

Portion out a peace

To share with God.

Premium Member Count Your Blessings, Or Just Wait

When you’re counting God’s gifts
Do you use just one hand,
Or are both hands not ever enough?
And does life never goad,
Standing there by the road
As your brain whispers “Things are so rough!”

When a head light finds you,
Do you freeze like a deer?
You could use its occasion to run!
New “life” frozen on wall,
Immortality's yours,
Your “points” trophy of narcissist’s gun!

Think you haven’t a choice?
Weren’t you given a voice?
Did you just stay at home and not vote?
Deer can slay hunters too!
Tell me what you will do?
Why not give him both barrels, just quote!

You could poison the roots
Of the buffoon’s beanstalk,
Watch the giant's neck break in the fall.
Or just throw him in jail,
Putin’s boy toy revealed,
A great outcome, endearing to all.


Long Tooth
February 12, 2017

Ole' Tookie

tookie winfeild was a friend of mine
from way on back down the way
back in my river days
mean old man with a heart of gold
ugly old geezer with a silver tongue
ole tookie could talk a mile a second say nothin at all
ole tookie was as crazy as a jackrabbit in heat and twice as slick

used to see that ole codger strolling on the avenue
with some young honey on his arm
carefree as sin and twice in its debt
yes sir...ole tookie was a friend of mine
back in the day we ran that river
like it was our private playground
mean old man with a heart of gold
ugly old geezer with a silver tongue
both barrels for the lookers
and a bottle of shine for the sippers
yes sir back when i was young that river was ours

they found old tookie winfeild up on the river
frozen to death in the dead of night
took to drinking up there by his lonesome
and shouting at the moon
aint no good ever come from no crazy man
least thats what they say
but old tookie was allright
in his own crazy way
mean old man with a heart of gold
ugly old geezer with a silver tongue
he was a friend to many a poor boy
down the old river way


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