Best Tweak Poems


Tweak

A lady at a window writing, 
measuring her words with strict precision. 
She takes a sip of ginseng tea 
to fuel her imagination. 
Memories go drifting by - a brother 
playing basketball, the softness 
of a springtime rain, the anger 
of an autumn sky, a flash, 
and thunder rumbling. 
Sights, smells and sounds 
are grist to her mill. Nothing spoils 
her view until her best attempt is done, 
but still dissatisfied she tweaks 
and fiddles, substitutes a weak word 
for a stronger one. At last content 
she sets aside her pen.

Premium Member A Tweak From Grandma

An old fountain pen; restored to its former glory.

Parchment awaits its clothing of poetry; my grandmothers words appear; not mine.

Another ancestral visit; she’s tweaking me.

Twain Tweak

King's forest and the Indian turnip like twain a good story never dyes blue                           
I took a bite while it was ripe tom's hen's can a wails prince snipe                                        
I didn't fall off a truck but that was hot trees on their knees while plants surplant                    
Hankering tree eight racoon's hand in the plate teaching in nature to wit to what not              
must find the truth before it's to late watching stag when swan squalks                               
entering in crows talk Eagle harolds is it legal weather unfit for regal                                  
Guide needs a guide in the woulds lost pilgrim hiding in another's woods                             
Humbty took his fall trying to lift spirits from a hill far away tumbles little bird flit                    
wise owl with scowl swoops missing his prowl You would have to go to india                        
For this story to be told proper since colombo didn't go far enough east                              
the west will have to make indian dew                                                                           
turnips deception lies and who's who                                                                           
always bite you in the matlocks                                                                                   
don't turn around now we are over half way through                                                        
the prince and the pauper grows in forest way                                                                    
had it been another they might have been dismayed
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Premium Member I Shall Tweak the Moons Nose

I believe I shall tweak the moon’s nose, she said to us all.
We thought it was hilarious. A toddler, she was a doll.
I will do it in my dreams tonight, she said. I hope I don’t fall.
We laughed at her tale, it was whimsical and tall.

Tweak

he wanted to 
tweak my ashes
just so

i laughed cause
i couldn’t even
do that 

i don’t think that
he really knew
how old they were

so anyway 
i gave in and let
him try

he gathered them
gently 
smoothed them out

found some thorns
old heart breaks
i thought i forgot

he sifted through 
the worry
that hurt my shoulders

the dirty parts
the shame
he didn’t seem to mind

he let them run 
through his fingers
and gathered them up again

he decided to mix
them with his

then we drifted down
our sea 
and the waves 
washed us

clean

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