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Premium Member Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals

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. . . someone like me, sultry and carefree,
          becomes excited in tender moments,
                   simply 
         anticipating spring, the silhouette of summer
    
   warmth leaves me breathless, and
seasons never cease to be expressive and please


   perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
           beyond this sweet ache


  do you understand the feeling of being windswept, 
         how i long to escape and frolic ?

( to linger in days of seagulls and sand, 
 salty air dancing upon luscious lips,
       . . .  sighing as the moonlight twists its fingertips
                  through my dirty blonde hair -
  tangling its glow, softly and slow
             as waves welcome me, in pure ecstasy )


   perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
           beyond this sweet ache

  
- - under a pink umbrella basking,
             absorbing the radiant atmosphere, 
         with creamy coconut lotion on sun-kissed skin, 
while sculpting sandcastles unevenly, as the tide moves in - -

                           *sand in sandals *


           
            even the wind, with its soothing melody,
     moves distant clouds my way, in hopes to soothe me 

                    

   perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
          beyond this sweet ache
          
                     
                 . . . to finally feel, only you
     


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         ~ A Romantic Scribble ~ 
          (Longing for warmth) 

. . .  The season, or your touch ? ? ?
                 Perhaps both
Categories: tangling, longing, romance, seasons, sun,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Autumnal

I remember clinging on to the naked branch,
which had been my home since the season of birth.
In my days of botanical glory,
flourishing and nourishing in nature
I would spread my vibrant wings of luscious green,
blooming alongside a canopy of compatriots,
shading the world from bright sunlight.
At night we would shimmer under moonlight,
sheltering sleeping nests weaved by 'expecting' birds. 

When only baby feathers remained,
and as birdfeeders slowly emptied,
skies altered their aura in hues of grey,
one by one my 'fellow stems' started to fall.
Helpless I watched them decay under trampling feet,
each step sucking the life from them.
Rampant rain arrived soaking the veins of my life,
dripping tear drops upon the ground beneath me.
I wondered if the sun would return to show mercy,
hydrating my crumbling sallowish skin,
but in its goodbye, 
I was left abandoned in the cold.

Wondering 
is this my destiny?
A temporary existence -
why was I not formed in an evergreen shield?

Lost in thought, abruptly,
the winds began blowing stronger,
rain pelted more persistently -
my grip became weaker

so I let go screaming

I remember falling in slow motion,
being blown around,
twisting and twirling, up and down,
as my 

'whole life flashed before me'

Car headlights flashing,
I was defenceless to my upcoming doom.
My end, a predictable fate of fragile vulnerability,
was near, as I prepared for my last sigh.
but before I took my last breath,
I fell upon a brown eyed,
giggling child's face,
tangling in her curly hair -

"Mummy, can I keep it."
she asked

as she placed me carefully in her schoolbag.
in between the pages of her diary..
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tangling, analogy, autumn, innocence, perspective,
Form: Personification

Premium Member Between the Extremes - POTD

In the nighttime hours
As the world deftly creeps by
I summon my powers
Spread my wings and fly
Past cotton clouds,
Snow-capped mountains, white
I am lost and I am found
I am beauty and blight

Past the midnight chimes
A soul searching for home
Tangling myself in rhymes
So as to not feel alone
Catch the updraft of hope
Friendship sun on my face
My place in this world in scope
Loathing, with love replace
© Sam Scott  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tangling, desire, flying, freedom, sunset,
Form: Ekphrasis

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Premium Member Let Your Love Touch Me

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  the sunset kiss along a lullaby moment, holds my being in absolute bliss,
in such a way that i shall never forget, for i can feel my heart whispering this
                           oh yes,
     the soft echo of your name with mine, such love tangling feels divine

      - i love the way your thoughts tassel through my flowing hair
                   like the calling of the falling wind, over and over again - 




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 a romantic scribble
Categories: tangling, simple, words,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member I Never Knew

Some say- a paragraph holds them deeply,
not even the slightest touch can make them fall

                  Words hide from me

    Some say, the melody within takes them there,
          - the loudest noise will never waiver the tune

Words find me soon

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 Some say- moments, emotions are against the wind,
    no one feels me, my mood- the tangling of a Sonnet

                        Words are lost again


Some say, my thoughts are visible, yet they seem hidden from view
       the rhymes, the discovery of it all-  no one really cares

 
                           ---------------------------------
                          Words whisper softly to me


     When the time right, that paragraph will find you
a Sonnet, a melody, the rhyme- a part of your memory
  
   
        Those that wish to see your poetry . . . 


              A sigh gently escapes
                  “I never knew”


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* Dedicated to those that never knew *
- Your Poetry will always Shine, because it is a Part of You -
Categories: tangling, dedication, poetess, poetry, poets,
Form: Rhyme

The Scatheless Soul

Unseen but ubiquitous,
Savage and surreal,
If not curated but contagious,
Annihilative and aerial,

Then lurking, now loose,
You are the silent stone sepulchre,
Tangling, tormenting; transient truce,
An asphyxiating, aggravating and apocalyptic aperture,

You might among countless thriving throng induce fear,
Cause bountiful bouts of darkness and despair,
You might perhaps possess lives of mankind in multitudes,
Cripple economies and ravage revenues.

Say, can you cease the blowing of wildly winds?
Say, can you banish a bridal blush or a child’s caprice?
Say, can you hold the hanker of a koel for its lilting lyrics, while it sings?
Say, can you shackle the Sun, or rob its rays with your bitter malice?

You are nothing but an atomic annihilator, a sombre spree,
In vain you strive to rule over our spirits free,
We would surmount all sufferings and decimate your derisive decree.

Saptarshi Mukherjee
Categories: tangling, courage, death, endurance, hope,
Form: Alliteration


What We Lose

It was a simple night,

she suppressed her own mindset

plunging self-shackled feet into their thoughts,

their eyes,

their thought processes, hoping to retain

some semblance of solace in the familiar cold.



-Reality is an infectious disease-


What she allowed herself to notice,

swimming reluctantly through the back of her mind  

made her breath ice, searing

winter-stains on the autumn-edge of her lip.

Love shook the decent little girl

scraping by her parent’s esteem and

dreaming in the dark reaches of her existence

of a liberty that wouldn’t leave her screaming

on her knees for God to banish all the monsters

from her closet, and the putrescence

of the memories that colored the back of her eyelids.


Love took her by the hollow of her bruised chin

and melted her into an above

where stars lingered like fistfuls of berries in 

explosions of stratosphere, almost tangling with her hair.


She felt the world and all her dreams

slip quietly through her fingers,

so she held his that-much tighter

and left the ocean-echoes in the shell of herself

behind.


-she won’t care if they ever wake up-
Categories: tangling, love
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Road To Anywhere

The house sits locked and bare;
a derelict car sputtering off
with the last of the possessions 
that owned her.

Bellows of dust and sparks
trailing; lingering behind 
as busted tail lights disappear
against a burnt sun horizon.

Sitting tall and square
behind the wheel of her old truck, 
with bare shoulders, essentials,
and a folk rock playlist.

Windows down, volume up,
a long last look,
releasing her breath;
a slight smile twisting.

Hands, ten and two; pedal down,
heading north to anywhere,
the wind tangling her hair; 
stripping away stress; urging on.

No more 40 hour weeks.
No more juggling bills.
No more corporate slavery,
building someone else's dream.

This is the moment
she became free.



*For my dearest friend Anna, who inspires me more than I am able to express.
Categories: tangling, freedom,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member October Moon

Twisting and tangling, 
in this lovers web
clawing and crying to be-- set free
the bait was placed in front of you,
I watched you fall in, so easily

Shadows cascading 
around the October Moon,
a predator with its prey
in the seduction of this web,
watching you wiggle to get away

I curl and tie you up even more,
- under these shimmering stars above
close your eyes and I'll have my way,
in this tight web of love

Under the silhouette of,
the October Moon
a predator with its prey, 
such a succulent sight -
turning, colliding and sighing with you
as I have my way, 
under the October Moon tonight
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~ Something playful, dark and naughty ~
The Magic of the Moon and its Magnetic glow
Categories: tangling, dark, love, moon, night,
Form: Rhyme

Tangling Your Fingers In My Hair

Beautiful one
    its you I adore,
your angelic way,
   the knowledge you store.
Grace resides
    upon your skin,
sparking my heart
    to beat again.

You have brought
   emotions to the surface
changing my cauldron-like body
   into a desire filled furnace,
making me crave
   your healing touch
that which resides
   in no other as much.

Its you
   my beauteous beast
who drives my hunt
   to look for a satisfying feast,
dodging trees
   under the full moon
as I find ways
   to deal with this Boone

Silk black sky 
   speckled with glitter
leaving me
   to write about my critter,
swooping down 
   on gossamer wings
before landing
   encircling me in rings.

And even though
    its true
my body shakes
   waiting to bite you,
forever
   I’ll wander my land
Until next to you
   I can stand.
Categories: tangling, devotion, love, passionme,
Form: Rhyme

Seeking Kindling

Seeking Kindling

The tangling forest was bitterly cold
And we were endlessly lost.

But, I followed his big foot prints
without speaking out of fear.

“Just pick up twigs kid. OK Dad”-
While he collected timber.

I knew he was good at providing, building
while not speaking.

A hammer made a much more profound sound
in my ears than anything he said to me.

So I followed.

But, the snow and ice were to thick and 
the twigs and timber were frozen.

I fell behind and lost his footprints
until I fell asleep and the snow and
bitter wind blew over me.

Unforunateely, he never looked behind.

R. Biffany '09
Categories: tangling, fathersnow, snow,
Form: Free verse

Without Him

The decanter is filled with chicory blooms
(blue, for the sky is her pleasure)
while the snapshot turns nigrescent
marking rain for the evening weather
The ring with which they two had wed
lay gilded 'round her finger
With her eyes closed oboes quarreled
'gainst the scent of him, that lingered.
Her languish comes but once a day
She turns to the mackerel sky
and sits upon her lonely porch
In sight the ibis fly.
She remembers sweet the sparkling mint
his eyes had held in winter
and the rush of tangling wild wars
they waged when he did kiss her.
As evening falls the grass gives up
it's scent from dew to rain
and again her footsteps lead her
to a solitary grave.
Categories: tangling, death, life, loss, lost
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Humanity


 4. Quantum Superposition

. A particle can exist in multiple states or places simultaneously until measured

Are humans waves or particles?
Even an entire human being, under the right conditions, can act like a quantum wave.  If we can define it, we can quantify just how “wave-like” a particle or set of particles is.


I count the magnificent moons
in my stills as I await the phantom voyeur
with stone blue eyes and a fated look, which sets upon me
The one who stirs my soul, measuring me up in coiled silvery spoons

What obsessive observations you must have
not to turn away those piercing eyes 
My world stops, my feelings set on and off
Unseen I meander in other spaces
Your eyes are the “switch” without that which 
forbids my existence, hence looped are my stills in many places

From the center of life’s probabilities
Spaciously lit across the universe, with bits of me in tow
Collapsed in your arms, we’ve launched our rainbow
Revealing our humanity in the flesh,
in language of mathematician’s music
Riding the unscrupulous waves of light 
roaming across all existence, 
reverberating ruthless through you, displacing us  
Composing are the alchemists and their peers ~ 

Splitting into a myriad of mirrors
I bare myself to a random reality,
Totality’s filigree, tangling  dangling
When you’re not here,
when you’re lost in thought
As the haze spins up and down  around me 
my world is unseen and the scale’s unbalanced
Showcasing that I’m equally dead as I am alive
Resuscitate me not—please, it’s here that
monotonous music is unheard in this uncertain trapeze 

Until eyes of azure translucence are upon,
I cease to exist in fervor, in your zeal
Alive and very real   to boot!
I’m gauged like the intrinsic brightness that shines off a star
Until then, am I just a figment of deepest intensity? 
By far, humbled to be, take the bait and consummate my reality
Be the glance exigency
Impenetrable eyes of bluest skies I’ve lost sight of you
As a still, until we meet again
© I Am Anaya  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tangling, humanity, science,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member sea-snake soliloquies

I see beyond the 
   sea-snake crown
of thick-leaved jewels,
as a gossamer veil 
conceals jealous goblins 
 shape-shifting above
 a snow-dappled forest
 of freckled weeds…
there third-eye rests 
 amidst tangerine tentacles
 tearing my cinnamon 
green clemency
glazed with holographic 
lime gold clover….

now I’m torn
 between wicked willows,
  and a weeping angel,
vying for my 
   peridot throne,
embellished with 
   envious emeralds,
piercing passionately 
through sparkling scales 
of mermaid skin,
as peacock oceanic fairies 
within skeleton silence
 flutter mint-teal memoirs
of a narcissistic mantis~ 
tangling starry soliloquies..
there eagle-spotted 
mantas swirl across
 moon-kissed streams 
unfolding marine magnificence 
through mysteriously 
   malevolent musings..

I care not for the 
rustic trinkets you wear 
    on fiery feathers
like cluttered calligraphy~
 screaming in 
high-pitched stillness,
longing to be seen and heard,
 their faded fragrance
glows now within 
tranquil twilight roots
like a forgotten facade,
while I sit secluded~
in my flaming coral garden,
as the modest maiden
of the rosemary sun,
 unmoved and unbothered,
by the wailing wind 
carrying notorious narratives
of eclipsed echoes 
from sorrowful souls, 
where hollow fangs 
caress cruel 
currents of chaos, 
  oblivious to the 
sonatas of jasmine rain,
for I sing not for the spiteful 
tides of tethered turquoise,
rippling with 
salt-soaked souvenirs 
mirroring the 
untamable agony 
of lost ancestors.
Categories: tangling, deep,
Form: Free verse

When It Gets Too Much

Have situations ever got away from you
evade conclusions while dramas protrude
like a chain link fence no time to think
assess why you're tense or reflect to sync
up events with stress to pull the valve on pressure
just endeavour at pace absent of pleasure
naturally adapt to lessen the impact
while facts not exact and the lesson abstract
taking life in just not learnt
quaking within and mentally burnt
then one intense altercation the only
thing in focus expanding slowly
and nothing else gets noticed
optically trained within the scope
and the rest of the world you take no note
suddenly it's draining all your energy
and events around it just let them be
busy searching every angle like a clock hand
around the clock to brain tangling demand
lurking constant and you assert but weary
astounded half shocked continuously nearly
working it out but for doubt in a muddle
evermore dumb founded increasing struggle
shoulder shrugging as your wonder wanders
from blunder to blunder now going under
where there's no sun it's just dark and dreary
you're torn up inside and teary, now hear me,
HAVE A DAY OFF!!
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: tangling, appreciation, humorous, psychological, truth,
Form: Rhyme
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