Best Sacrificial Poems


The Sacrificial Burn

“The Sacrificial Burn”, a very short story of a pyromaniac, who loved the Light too much. 

A writer’s journey. Perhaps it’s about life. Perhaps it’s about death. Perhaps it’s about the end of the world and wanting to take back time again. Perhaps it’s about ghosts. Perhaps it’s about becoming a ghost. Perhaps, as another writer friend of mine advises, it’s up to the reader to interpret for themselves relating the story to themselves. If it doesn’t, then the writing unlike ectoplasm doesn’t stick. Perhaps poetry is just the biggest mind f*** of all, like love, an addiction, that gives great pleasure and the most immense pain and one just has to walk through the walls cutting up their words each time they pass through, like some grand reincarnation. Some ghosts are eternal, remembered, some fade forever and are forgotten. The worst ghosts are best forgotten or jailed up in a Dybbuk box, not to be thrown into the deepest ocean, not to be buried, but to be burned. The sacrificial burn with a few incantations, a bit like poetry. A flaming pyre of poésies sent off in its boat with the ferryman across Styx. Of course, all this is done with Love biting its tale. 


(LadyLabyrinth/2023)






“You arrive, now that I must leave
I'll take one step out of the nice dream
Into, something unknown, something unkind
Somewhere so quiet, gone from your side
Send me to lie here
Forever unseen”


“Why, why would you leave here
Right when I need you
No, I can't see you
Out in the open
Out in the darkness
Here where I knew you
Here in my heart
And on somewhere unseen
The distance is killing me
The distance between
I'm taking the water, taking on time
Does it ever leave
Does it ever leave
Taking on the water, taking on time
Does it ever sleep
Does it sleep at all…”

(excerpts, “The Distance, Emma Ruth Rundle)
Categories: sacrificial, dark, light, love, muse,
Form: Narrative

Premium Member A Sacrificial Lamb

White daisy's in a wicker basket
graced the tiny metal casket
where his lifeless body now lay..
Family and friends wrought with grief
shook their heads in disbelief
as he was only ten years to the day...
His story made the news
with it's all familiar tragic hues
and the politicians had their say...
People gathered on that street
lighting candles, placing wreaths
in remembrance of where he was slayed...
The sun still shines on this space
his spilt blood cleansed to not a trace
but what a price his community has paid...
What kind of world have we created
when young lives can be negated,
falling victim to gun violence every day...
Categories: sacrificial, loss, political, violence,
Form: Prose

Premium Member Sacrificial Lamb

Streaks of pallid moonlight  
wash over blood-stained  
burnt umber leaf blight.  
Glistening stainless steel remains  
within wilting noir roses  
and blistered blades of grass.  
Sickening hands shake my repose,  
heart racing, sure to collapse,  
feeling faint.  
A revolting nausea elevates,  
trying to find restraint,  
as madness deregulates.  
A heart separated  
from a lifeless corpse—  
death awaits.  
Flashbacks play like static reports,  
too hard to get a clear picture.  
Splashes of splattered red fill  
spaces in between scriptures.  
Screaming echoes spill,  
dirty visions getting clearer,  
as the sacrificial lamb  
becomes the predator, evaporating fear.  
Fighting for the blade, fingers clammy,  
spinning out of control.  
How could you bring me to this?  
Steel cuts against palms, foretold—  
splatters of crimson spray, don't resist,  
covering fear-filled eyes.  
One last-ditch effort:  
grab the hilt and arise.  
On this deadening night, collect.  
You became Samhain’s sacrifice,  
a feast for the demonic nether, sanctified.
© Sara Jama  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: sacrificial, dark, gothic, halloween, horror,
Form: Rhyme

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Sacrificial Lamb

Not all news of its existence brings joy – 
a heartbeat is denied the trumpets
instead, news is shared in long drawn 
out breaths with eyes that never dry. 

A vow was broken long before – 
Those nights, when they turn off the light 
a silence is broken amidst long sighs. 

A creature of habit learns in time certain 
vested interest will come to be expected; 
promises are forgotten in the dark. 

But this is unexpected news; now the light 
need no longer be turned off every night. 

The weeping stops when a decision is made; 
she finds that self-sacrifice does not extend 
beyond the sanctity of life. A creature 
of habit learns hypocrisy the hard way. 


After:  Twilight Confidences by Cecilia Beaux 1888


For Debbie Guzzi's Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 7
Kim Patrice Nunez
14 January 2016
© Kp Nunez  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: sacrificial, abortion, anxiety, betrayal, lust,
Form: Ekphrasis

Premium Member Sacrificial Altars

When did business ethics
find roots in science
rather than re-connecting
humane re-ligion?

Thereby exempting,
divorcing,
earning a merely fair
and acceptable free economic pass
to continue extraction
exploitation
to build corporate empires
divorced from religion's incorporated
GoldenRule win/win ethics,

Including
family fair play
of sacrificially co-redemptive moral values
on altars of messianic
bodhisattva sacred smoke
and self/other co-reflective mirrors

Meming little everyday issue miming,
like don't neglect our long-term health care planet,

Like take care of our homes
and local communities
so we, together,
can continue keeping each Other 
healthy and safe.

How alarmingly Old Indigenous School
it feels to interdependently belong
to green matriarchal 
DNA regenerative systemic roots
of habitual healthy instincts

Sensory and sexual
re-connecting
re-ligioning
vocational secularized sacred employments

In cooperative wise gratitude
for MotherEarth's naturally enspirited
enlightened
empowering regenerative
ecofeminist 
green graced bowing attitude

Positive
and cooperative
nonzero-emergent 
polycultural
WinEgo to Win EcoSystemic health/wealth climates
of resilient integrity

Rooted in sacred Right hemispheres
and cooperatively regifted 
in co-empathic secular co-arisings

Heaven's Light uprising brings
and rebrings,
turns
and returns day
and night
Earth's health-powered
ReSalvific ClimateJustice

Which, to my left hemisphere,
is all about careful autonomous control
and scrupulously quantitative best
NonZeroSum cooperatively owned emergence
toward inclusive multicultural planning
for WholeEarth health/wealth 
optimization

To which my right hemisphere responds
looking for healthier four-square lyrical fond
of some things hoping for a miraculous beat,
comfortable with seasonal reasoned rhythms repeat
not quite so hopelessly white patterned arches
resting on male privileged marches

Busyness roots in monetized science
thereby left hemisphere exempting artistic
everyday eco-political experience
from GoldenRule expiring
Win/Win re-connecting
re-ligioning EarthDay 
natural/spiritual cooperative
co-invested polyculturing ethics.
Categories: sacrificial, business, health, integrity, religion,
Form: Political Verse

Sacrificial Love

"Sacraficial Love"

(Verse 1 )
Love is such a strong word 
It's not showed nearly as much as it's heard
Sometime with  love you have to  fight 
Not with  your hands,but with all your might
Love sometimes requires a sacrifice 
Giving up something , the Ultimate price (price)
So that I could have a better life
And could for once get it right 

(Chorus)
You sacrificed for me (me)
You did it out of love (love)
You opened up your heart
Regardless of (of)
You really paid the price 
You paid it with your life 
I'm thanking you  Jesus from above 
For the unconditional sacrificial  love 


(Verse 2)
I fail you daily ,yes (yes)
Inspire of, you still see my  best 
You take away  all of the stress
I never  have to worry 
I can rest
Even when I make mistakes
You still love me 
Even when I've thought less of myself 
You still hug me 
Never met a person who
Would give his all
Just to make sure 
I can be picked up when  I  fall


Chorus)
You sacrificed for me (me)
You did it out of love (love)
You opened up your heart
Regardless of (of)
You really paid the price 
You paid it with your life 
I'm thanking you  Jesus from above 
For the unconditional sacrificial  love 

(Bridge)
You help me see 
Gave me  back my vision
You were there 
To help me with all kind of decisions
Never left my side 
What a wonderful  sacrifice 
You paid it all for my sins
I don't  where to begin 
Your love has always  been  unconditional 
And beyond sacrificial 
(2x)

Chorus)
You sacrificed for me (me)
You did it out of love (love)
You opened up your heart
Regardless of (of)
You really paid the price 
You paid it with your life 
I'm thanking you  Jesus from above 
For the unconditional sacrificial  love 

Repeat until Chorus  fades 
Written by:Concetta Hardnett 
7/19/2016
Categories: sacrificial, best friend,
Form: ABC


Sacrificial Mother

Sacrificial Mother

I gave birth to you,
I sheaded blood and tears for you,
Nearly died trying to keep you from harms reach.
I gave you a warm home,
 on those cold winter nights.
I showed love and sympathy when others wouldn’t,
Don’t you soon forget child, 
Who was always there for you.
Love your Sacrificial Mother.
Categories: sacrificial, family, mother,
Form: ABC

Premium Member My Sacrificial Lord

Little by little God is going to give you everything you need
He will empower you and equip you with gifts that you asked for
And some that you don't ask for
You know that gift that you've been bugging him for? 
Don't be surprised if He gives it to you one day lol
God wants you to be whole
to be fully developed
into the person like He is
So look in the mirror and see if you are like Him yet
If not, be sure that He is working on you
Sometimes we know what our shortcomings are
And sometimes we don't
Sometimes we know what we struggle with
And constantly bug at him for a solution
God - come to the rescue
Hallelujah to the Lamb of God
For His mercy, kindness, and endurance
How does He ever put up with us?
We are so headstrong, so rebellious
pushing mercilessly and crushingly ahead
If it wasn't for Him, we would plow thoughtlessly
- right straight into the path of destruction
Oh Mercy Savior, whatever You need us for
I would never know
But today I know
That your guiding Hand will lead the way
Love you my Lord
Live on
Categories: sacrificial, faith, endurance,
Form: Free verse

Life a Sacrificial Sacrifice

Ferocious, East Asian, Siberian Tigers purposely without a conscience, killing crocodiles to feed their children, cobras spitting a paralyzing, vicious venom, God give it, then take it, Life or Death couldn’t occur without his gorgeous, perspicuous permission, souls spacious, her heart’s vacant, blood is thicker than muddy water, possibly depending on this occasion, love without trust, kills most situations which fuels a grueling frustration, ants eating maggots regurgitation, now we run around Rich on Masta’s plantation, beforehand we got  hung upside down castrated, slave owners watching our women masturbating, raping them on purpose, to lighten this fabricated nation, anacondas sitting on clouds killing, then eating that thundering lightning, while that tiger sits -n- watches for what he sees is enticing, Life is Beautiful, yet ugly with her many faces of sacrifices, in Life we must make sacrifices, for Life, even though we subtract from the value of it, it’s priceless.

Sacrifices
That’s 
What Life is
Categories: sacrificial, abuse, animal, conflict, life,
Form: Free verse

Sacrificial Ritual

All answers want to be given unto you
As swiftly as you can illustrate them
Point to their essence, serenade them
Aboard this passing ship, my view casts not a glare, nor reflection, nor stare,
Roaming freely as the Earth through the timeless air

My outer shell is my greatest inception
Yet as time comes to a crashing halt,
The faintest glimpse of the Strange and the Familiar approach together 
As the rime of my belt

A horticulturist’s dream says I 
The blackened period that wallows alive
Deprived, sanctioned and walking the line
As our guest is herded out
And suddenly the animal turns its other side

Now in your stomach I wait
Leaving a silent trail of breadcrumbs
Leading to the foothills of the gates
Who, discovery alluded, hadn’t a face

I am after all a sarcastic utterance
Which after years fade into the gloaming of dawn,
Reveals itself a mutterance undone

A muse, a choice, a song
A faro stow-away,
A shy allurement enclosed in a darker response
Building expeditiously my patient getaway car
Holding stead readily around the block

and clocks fall off their "ATTENTION!"
to the approaching sound of
 someone else's Hum-drumm
Categories: sacrificial, nature,
Form: Narrative

Sacrificial Rite

Her Fate lies on a
Predestined canvas
Of muted red

Darkness speaks truth
Though gifts are silent 

Blindly, she feels for
The magical key
That will finally unlock
His lonely chamber

Her spirit is gentle
Ready to disclose the one
She has loved 
Forever…

’Drink the blood that patiently
dripped from my heart into
this Sacred Cask, and as you
feel me rushing through
your veins know…I love you’

Can he see beyond
Time’s Regal cloak?
Lift the veil of which separates
logic and emotion?
Sight and touch?

She’s coming for him soon
With the key to his 
Rebirth

‘Meet me at the
Bottom of the Spiral Staircase’

The tears she sheds
Belong to him…
For him…

Reaching
Within the nucleus of an
Isolated cell

Love hurts that much
A seemingly black abyss
She descends
Answering to the Dark
Moon's Call

Discovering
The deepest place
That eats away at her flesh...
She’ll sacrifice her life
For Him…

If one moment
His eyes see…
Categories: sacrificial, love, mystery, passionme,
Form: Prose Poetry

The Little Lord Jesus Sacrificial Lamb

The little lord Jesus
asleep not on the hay 
but in the street 

Like Abraham the little
boy was sacrificed on 
the machine's high holy day
One day after the Winter Solstice

His family lived in a comfortable
home in Brooklyn NY but his father
took the subway to the highest
mountain near The Dakota in Central Park West

The 3 year old named was translated
to Kyrios Christos or the Lord in his father's tongue

He was placed on the high alter
at exactly 12 noon prime meridian

On the day in question
a mother's child was stolen from the womb
unlike the Star of Bethlehem 
Venus went backwards 
Virgo in opposition to the dark side of Pluto and Pisces
and the Uranus square or the Trickster

Like Christ his red blonde hair
was covered in blood
the measure of oil equivalent
30 pieces of gold

In three days times
the three wise men would have been
welcome to Gotham City but the Mayor
went golfing in Bermuda and the shops were out
of Gold  Frankenstein and Myrrh

But what of his message of peace and good will towards men
the sacrificed was paid
and the little Lord Jesus
lay not in the hay but
dead in NY city streets
© Mel Brake  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: sacrificial, death, faith, father, sorrow,
Form: Free verse

The Sacrificial Lamb

His glorious throne He left
for this unruly world of theft
A great sacrifice He offered
for the world He suffered
Into this world He was born
The sewage of sin He had to burn
Gifts they brought
His life Herod sought
The erudites swore
Crown of thorns He wore
Oh!
He died then, though alive
Halleluiah!
He's resurrected, yes He has
The precious lamb of God has
risen to life
Three days in the grave, yet back
to life
The power of death He has
thrown into the eternal sack
The sacrificial lamb
Categories: sacrificial, christian, faith, jesus,
Form: ABC

The Sacrificial Onion

Embryonic  stillness waits its chance. 

 Motion concaves inward rounding the 
circular language of an onion in a 
metal basket. 

 Minutes and seconds seem to over exaggerate.

So I Taste in square cabinents. .. 
salt, vinegar, rice wine. 

 Wrinkled preservation.
 Dehydrated sensation..

Ive got little to look forward to and 
even less to look back.

So i just stand and listen.

A little scripture salt in a cylinder
 sounds out.

 Tiny bones in the back of the ear vibrate.

 maybe an old walnut chopping board
 turns its scarred back.

maybe an onion unapologetically sheds
 the sinues of its skin.

Dry tear ducts and basil leaves hang over 
the stove as  ceremonial witnesses.
Categories: sacrificial, absence,
Form: ABC

A Sacrificial Love

To give unselfishly
Freely, completely
Without reservation
Or restriction
Without limitation
Or inhibition
To give
All you have 
To give
And then
Once more
To bare your soul
Without recrimination
To give your heart
Without expectation
To love
Without doubt
Without fear
This is true love
Pure love
A Sacrificial Love.
Categories: sacrificial, happiness, inspirational, introspection, life,
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