Best Pang Poems


A Pang of Mercy

The curse, the lethargy, 
conceived out of wedlock Dawn and Day, 
the mother-in-law of the race of the Ogres,
the tub filled with toads, vipers and snakes,
the cohabitant who always stays out -
here's a partial list of the problems 
that await the true princesses,
whereas a dreamless sleep is a soteriological ideal of any Buddhist.
Bent over the beautiful princess, 
I feel a pang of mercy,
and, rising from my knees, get out of here -
by little Mopsey, the Princess's spaniel, which is lying on the bed,
by the hypothetical fire upon the hearth,
by the doormen in whose cups wine turned into mold long ago
and beyond, 
through the wayless wood of existence,
which is not a problem for my ladylove anymore.
As Charles Perrault rightly stated:
“Thorns part before a royal blood only”.


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Categories: pang, love,
Form: Free verse

Ilan Pang Tangka Sa Tanka

watching the leaves 
touching damp earth
I walk on, (pondering)—
how graceful they fall
     so unlike me

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                                             feathered silence
                                                folded in paper
                                             tickled—
                                                 with the sound 
                                        of your laughter 


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                                                                 holding the plum bowl
                                                          glass shatters
                                                                 as my fingers slip
                                                                  my heart
                                                                   along with it



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listening 
in entomology class
I yawn….
swallowing
a mosquito


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                                                  creased with silence
                                            letting go
                                                 of that paper boat—
                                                    I write your name
                                                in water 

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a few (ilan) of my attempts (tangka) at writing some tanka some time ago, they 
probably don't even qualify as tanka? these aren't related with each other 
though...

Also me just trying to see if formatting will hold this time? The other day when 
I tried it, it did  (even from Word) now, even from notepad, the formatting is all 
aligned to the left? Lemme see center now if it stays as centered (ok, it actually 
does).  But aligning it to the right doesn't seem to stay though?
Categories: pang, feelings, introspection, write,
Form: Tanka

A Pungent Pang of Proof Or Pooh

A Pungent Pang of Proof or Pooh

I had walked into the woods and sang my song of songs
As the autumn leaves lazily blew them lazily away,
Slowly and cautiously, I walked to the edge of the 
woods as you came one day
I dreamily thought and looked savagely and vaguely for so long,
But in an instant thought I'd better not enter for I did not belong.

I instantly saw you as you shook your pensive head and heard
you say
I'd better not enter it might be too far; you might hear my footsteps stray,
If anyone may even see me, he may be much stronger than I
Fear was not or must not be one of my unknown foes which I'll deny.

From my view, where I stood still and thus saw it all,
All the lowly boughs upon the trees right near outside,
Smelling all the pungent sweet pangs it did will me to call
And tell everyone to which I had viewed and still abide.

For this is not a true tale which I have talked and walked aloof
In the woods, they lay awake and are here for nay they have no proof.
In pure happenstance, there may be a person to tell you, you’re a goof.

Any way I’m nearing the end of my fable of a tale
Can you not see the offensive smell of that elusive wail?
I thought I had seen it all, over many a year I’m still smelling
That gad awful smell, or is it a putrid smell of someone’s pooh.
Oh, oh, now you can see just how fast I can really run away from you.


Written: May 9, 2014
Theresa Marie W-C
© Theresa Cw  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: pang, how i feel, nature,
Form: Rhyme

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Pang

Pang….no  more!!

Pang….suddenly, shocks me!
This unfathomable message
I  didn't  expect would touch me
An  emotional distress..a change
Devastatingly censures  me
With horrifying like ‘an abominable substance
In my heart and soul, naked truth  it  insinuates
Have to act, counteract and dislike
   the note like committing suicide!

Pang….this plea must please
Might dealt me to my knees
Despairing me though to the bone
I know  i’m not remiss but acknowledge
Succombs me seriously extend some
Allayed fears and nuisances
That i must know without expect a mundane 
Seemed doom this waterloo of
      napoleon bonaparte’s.

Pang….would pity humbled  me
I  resolve to finally try absolve
Up to this dying moment i perceive hope
Nonetheless,  more time to intercede
This hay must not go into waste
As my creator on my seemingly side
Eventually, compose myself counting on me
For the last time. Await’s a chance
            to  an oozing love!
            
Pang….these horrors i didn't know where
    it came 
Thus, it beacons me and drowns me
Nauseating   my whole being now  fragile
My military acumen  enough yet fight the nemesis
Much  ready to stand parry with confidence
Though my dwindling and disarrayed star
     still would sense
And the battle has  just begun only to win
    the war sometime
At the right time. No more pangs to bear but a
    sweet revenge.


By: william s. Labtis
Categories: pang, angst,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Look To the Stars

Young and naive, she fell for an Aquarius,
over time he grew nasty and quite nefarious..
A little later came her next heart pang.
He was a fiery Aries man.
With time his habits she just couldn't stand.
A long-term lover and definitely the nicest
was a very sensitive and nurturing Pisces.
Our hearts collide in this universe,
sometimes for better, sometimes for worse.
Look at their planets, and study their stars.
Were they influenced by Jupiter or perhaps Mars?
Consult an astrologer, develop a plan, and look
at the stars whenever you can.
Categories: pang, fate, love, relationship,
Form: Rhyme

Struggle of a Moss Rose Petal

for a fresh fragrance
the tender petal bearing -
pang of her life time.
Categories: pang, flower, life, pain, rose,
Form: Haiku


The Pang of the Middle Class

You look down and see 
There are lot of people with out proper meal
On the street beg children 
Thousands of people without sanitation 
And you take a pang 
In your mind always moves a plan
How to develop  
How to uplift them 
And you live nearer to them,
 Just above their rung 
They look up and see you 
And call you all the bad names 
But the crux of the fun is that 
They all like to be like you middle rich man 
But the opposite happens 
When you look up 
And see those fantastic  men
Who  rides  the uppermost rung
With wonder you find 
For you there is no sympathy  
Rather they look at you frowning down
Categories: pang,
Form: Free verse

Facing My Pang

I won't let
my pang
stay
inside
my door,
I will
throw it
outside
my
doorstep.

For when
it bursts,
like lava
from a
volcano
it's hot,
it burns,
and I can't
stand
the heat.
Categories: pang, anger, pain,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member A Pang of Guilt

Gazing out the window 
    at an angry sky
  I feel a sudden pang of guilt
    although I cannot tell you why

  What is it about gray
    that ruins a perfect day
  It must be something that I did
    though what I cannot say
Categories: pang, anger, me, sky,
Form: Rhyme

Pitt Pang Boom

her term was declimaxation
                     she decribed it as a verb for lacking interest
                  and heightening ones value through finacail need.
                                    which is secret suprises
                                what is known has been revealed
                must we continue thinking we are truest of lovers
                    when my want for you has lacked it's appeal.
                             what is love that we aren't freinds
                                 than might you find away to
                                    have me love you again.
                                   when it seeks need might
                               the effections of than guide our
                                       way through those
                                         times of conflict.
                                love needs to be expressed
                                        it wins in contest
                                     it makes two feel best
                                       causing our labors
                                              to impress
                               lovers often admit being blessed
                                        when love is stressed
                                          it needs vacation
Categories: pang, blessing, encouraging, engagement, guitar,
Form: Rhyme
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