Struggle of a Moss Rose Petal

for a fresh fragrance
the tender petal bearing -
pang of her life time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Carber Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:03 AM
I like the personification--congrats!
Somadas Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Thank you Carber...
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Pang of her lifetime....only you could have dived deep into the emotions of the rose petal. Such a thought provoking flow of words. Congratulations on your win Jenish. Blessings :)
Somadas Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 11:52 PM
Thank you Aditi for your delightful comment.. And congrats on your great win.. Takecare always...
Hawkins Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 6:16 PM
Three lines that say so much, everything that lives struggles until it dies, then we will have everlasting peace. I loved it all especially the first line. So happy to see you are writing Jenish. God Bless you and your family...
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June 6, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Thank you Shirley for you encouragement.. We are all rose petals struggling to blossom.. Once opened, we will spread our wonderful unique fragrance all around.. Stay safe..
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