Best Legalistic Poems


Premium Member The Real Question

Most significant agreements or treaties
Employ important legalistic terms like
  Inspections
  Verifications
  Notifications
  or Null-and-Void immediately

Yet considering, O Pundits,
The withdrawal by the US 
from the agreement 
Over Iran's nuclear pyre:
  Between the Mullahs and President Trump
  ~ Who's the bigger liar?
Categories: legalistic, leadership, trust,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Understanding Reconciliation

Sometimes fundamentalist Christians
Give the expression “to be saved”
All you need to do is “repent”
Meaning to give up your sinful ways

This sentence from the Gospel of St. Mark
May seem to support this perspective
Trouble is
It all depends on what you mean by “repentance”
“Sin”

Some Catholics seem to limit their understanding of sin to a legalistic one
Where disobeying a law, rule
Or Commandment is what sin is all about – period
It maybe more balanced

Spiritually beneficial to understand
As any behavior that breaks or weakens
One’s relationship with Eternal God
Neighbor or oneself

A healthy understanding of the Sacrament of Reconciliation
Based on the insight that reconciliation with Eternal God happens in
Through reconciliation with the faith community that is the Church

Accordingly
One may sin
By either doing something
Or not doing something
Categories: legalistic, christian, devotion, faith, god,
Form: Free verse

Shadowed By Guilt and Shame

Shame must have burned her countenance,
along with fear that gripped her heart;
she’s a woman in the gospel  brought into the open,
by those Pharisees and Sadducees in their attempt –
to entrap Jesus on the horns of a dilemma.

Known as legalistic in their respect for the Law of Moses,
they professed as guardians of moral principles;
they claimed as protectors of the Jewish traditions,
however, in truth, they had a wicked motive to ruin Jesus
to discredit him for all the things he’s doing for his own people.

His growing popularity especially to the Jewish men and women,
becomes a raison d’etre to ruin his good reputation;
oh, such a malady that continues to exist through generations,
the seed of original sin – its consequence to human behavior
reflected its aftermath, the evil tendency that is encrusted deep within.

Jesus’ statement, “let him who is without sin cast the first stone,”
made the religious leaders withdraw from the scene and,
starting from the elders they walked away and talked no more;
a sign of shame, an honest reaction to what is shadowed by guilt.

The entire incident focused on Jesus’ endless forgiveness,
his compassion for the woman being bogged down with disgrace;
like a moral stigma, a scarlet letter etched in the hearts of people,
with Jesus she had her past but she also has a future to look forward to.

Just as the prophet Ezekiel says, “I will give you a new heart –
and put a new spirit in you; I will remove from you your heart of stone
and give you a heart of flesh . . .”  its power and meaning can assure,
God’s love is everlasting; our salvation is his prime concern.
Categories: legalistic, faith, history, hope, life,
Form: Narrative

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Born One Hundred Years Too Late

My co-worker posed a theory to me
That our boss was born one hundred years later than she was supposed to be
Neither of us could exactly put our finger on why, but I had to agree
No makeup, unbrushed hair, bad teeth
As though she just awoke from a long, troubled sleep
Her mannerisms seem out of sync somehow with contemporary company; 
Solitarily sorting books in the back room of the used bookstore she manages each day
to remain distant and dazed, as though unfamiliar with a world that has dramatically changed
Nobody knows how old she is, but I’d guess upper-middle-aged

She never seems relaxed or at home with where she has landed, always looking around as she walks through a room or doorway, ever vigilant
She shows up each day looking like last night was another rough one, but her speech and ways seem oddly quaint and well-bred, 
strangely legalistic and more formal than needed in this squalid environment.

She simply doesn’t seem at home in this place;
She can stand two feet away from me and a co-worker as we’re sorting while joking and, while our hands are busy working, our minds are away playing,
But she is immune to the general contagion of the strange repartee and laughs exchanged, seeming to hear nothing we’re saying.
Never laughing herself nor conversing, guarding her thoughts, observations, and history from judgment, and getting lost in her own world such that the sudden awareness of the presence of another person can induce a violently startled jump the other way.

And I know what that’s like, as I’ve spent many years in that state, 
so it is painful to see it in another neglected appearance 
and another needlessly nervous wreck of a person who is
wishing to just go home or one day somehow escape this place 
where her body has ended up by way of a misdirected fate.  

But today she took my co-worker and I by surprise when, after being shown a book with a cover featuring a picture of Jesus playing golf, she smiled widely and lively, and she replied, 
“That’s ridiculous!  Everyone knows Jesus only played tennis!!” 
It was just a small joke, but it was like seeing a rainbow in the refracted light on a dark sky
It gave me hope that, despite being meant for a time perhaps one hundred years ago, in this day where she was nonetheless sent, she may someday come home.
© Amy Sell  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: legalistic, absence, change, home, humanity,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Don'T Miss Out

Father Christ’s encounter with the Pharisees never fail to entertain.
Almost everywhere He preaches
A few people would show up
Trying to compromise His ministry

To catch Him in violation of custom or law
Mingling with known sinners
As Father Christ did repeatedly
Was clearly acceptable to Pharisees

While obeying the law is important
Father Christ was an observant Jew
He also knew the law
Social structures had their limitations

His message to legalistic sticklers is straightforward
Unadorned
He wants to engage real people on real issues
People with faults, problems, people searching for Eternal God

It means folks like you and me
He is not excluding the arrogantly righteous among us
He’s pretty busy with the rest of humanity
This message if freely offered to any

All who will listen
If youre going to hung up
On the narrow publications of the law
You will be missing a life changing message
Categories: legalistic, black african american, christian,
Form: Light Verse

Origami Legends

She has a brain full of legends.
She has a whole heart full of legends.
Shaped by summer’s yellow collar bones
She caresses a sepia hued image to her breast
And recites memories in her sleep.

Legalistic hellions
Stalk her sharp scent,
And legalistic hellions
Seek to kidnap her ,
And legalistic hellions
Cry illustrious hymns along canyons
Speaking amongst themselves
Into the jagged patterns fashioned by
Her legends.

And the sepia hued image, frozen
Insinuates that her legends were honest legends.
She knows they were never born of classic fiction at all,
But that they had been fostered by her own life.
The sepia hued image lies lifeless
During a subtle, summer evening
Reciting memories.
Categories: legalistic, fear, life, mystery, image,
Form: Verse


Considering Conditions

There are users, abusers
And bitter accusers
In the World of negative thought
There are legalistic, ballistic
And increasingly sadistic
In the World of righting the "not lot"

~On the other side~

There are roses, poses
And delivering Moses
In the World of fanatical dreams
There are hoping, doping
And constantly roping
In the World of sewing seems (seams)

~Still~

There are planners, banners
And worshipping fanners
In the World of Pyramid Power
There are groveling, dissolving
And situational involving
In the World of heightening bowers

~Til~

There are woulders, coulders
And moving shoulders
In the World of Imagination
There are accepting, respecting
And continually perfecting
In the World of growing patience 

~Light Shining on the Darkness

Written by Trudy Schrader on 02-11-2018
Categories: legalistic, growth,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Healthy Ways and Wealthy Means

Educational Competitions:
"You/We are not motivated to learn
how to take care of yourself/ourselves."

And,
We are, together, motivated to learn
how to give and receive
personal and social,
political and economic,
theological and ecological health care,
universally intended,
unitarian motivated and discerned.

Competition for resources:
"We can't change because we are too poor,
have too little health to thrive,
too few nutritional, nurturing resources."

And,
Together, with explicit therapeutic intent,
we are change,
we are healthy resources
sufficient for this day,
healing co-processors for this
and each experienced co-operating
co-arising moment.

Universally commodified competition:
"One size fits all, no exceptions."

And,
Our cooperative health intent and size
flexes to fit our potential therapeutic scale
of authoritative just operations
today,
universally right now.

Competition for power/authority:
"Our aggressive legalistic 
and capital-commodified system
is too big to fail,
or even change directions."

And,
Our eco/theo-logical systems
are just ripe enough opportunity
for WinWin co-operative 
healthy 
co-passionate
empowering networks
evolving polypathic paradigms
to never stop regeneratively changing,
evolving,
pre-volving,
un-volving,
revolving co-passion,
co-arising gravitation.

Competition for health, resilience, resonance:
"Neglect of health care can't be fixed."

And, 
Health care can become unfixed and holistic
but best when co-operatively engaged,
discovered through receiving optimal authoritative co-investment
in responsible
proper
proportional
authentic
transparent
vulnerable 
therapeutic
polypathic
polyphonic
polynomial optimally wealthy climate care,

Internal and external,
yin flow with yang strength,
matriarchal with patriarchal,
compassionately resonant discernment
with co-operative resilient discipline.

Wealthy unitarian ways
toward healthy universal means.
Categories: legalistic, caregiving, change, community, creation,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Healthing Voices

Personal identity,
like politically empowered/disempowered identity,
evolves within EgoSpirited voices

Exchanging feelings
with EcoSoul's outside co-relational serenity,
anima mundi
uncovering ZeroZone bilateral Janus-faces,

Non-verbal language 
noticing co-relational
health and pathology
qualities sensed,
felt,
originally tasted

And

Verbal iconically quantitative patriarchal voices
for either Ego, or Eco
survivalist thinking
how to further colonize
Ironically matriarchal both-and thrivalist
ego/eco-feeling co-relative voices,
healthy serene
and un-easy dissonant

Ambiguously:
Eastern innocent infantile,
Southern sagely adolescent sensual,
Western secular/sacred romantic fool
maturing ego/eco shape-shifting Win/Win climates inside
and out,
Northern maternal/paternal WiseElder
speaking and acting with polypathic compassion,

ReGenerative EarthSoul strains and stresses
hopes and faiths
come to reverse LeftBrain dominant Earth climates,
at last, at last

Yin-understory with Yang-canopy of heaven
upside down
revolutionary turning,
rewinding global wealth
as public healthy change
re-syncing Green New Deals
for 2020 taste and see cooperative multiculturing nutrition
outlasting more recent mechanistic,
competitive,
ballistic,
monoculturing toxins

Of merely legalistic
uniform
apartheid totalitarian
religious Win/Lose un-ecological equanimity
unchanging
fundamentalistic
dualistic
nihilistic
wounded voices

Still actively hoping
to conjoin more healthing choices
than a denatured unchanging
and therefore sadly dead
originally progenitive in-between voices way,
organically interdependent truths,
fully co-passioning life.
Categories: legalistic, health, integrity, nature, peace,
Form: Political Verse

Premium Member Memorial of a Loved One Ct

Memorial of a Loved One

In Memory of My Mother, Irene!

Some memories so terribly painful be, 
and will not leave my memory.
I took care of my bedridden Mom
for five years and then..
On that sunny, dreadful July afternoon
I knew the Grim Reaper was knocking 
on our door far too soon!
I called the paramedics on the
phone right away.
My feelings of fear were allayed.

They arrived, but it seemed not soon
enough.
Four paramedics removed her from the 
bed and laid her on the floor.
But refused to do nothing more.

They, asking hysterical,me...
Do I have signed papers as to to in life 
she wants to be!
I wanted to sock each and all!
I had no such papers, I wept in the hall.

My Mother, on the floor, lay.
All walking about her as if she were less 
than a bale of hay.
They all standing there, would do nothing 
at all.
I had to search for my birth certificate, to 
prove I was her daughter, if I wanted her 
to live at all.

Mother, gasping for breath all the while.
Like a drowning child submerged
in death's waters!

Twenty minutes later and doing nothing for 
her, I demanded she be taken to hospital.
Of course, it was too late!
Death, yes, choked her in its coil!
Death by nonsensical, legalistic turmoil.

This was the most dramatic, heart
rendering,maddening and horrid moment 
of my life.
My Mother, lover of children, filled with love 
for life and all humanity!
Killed by needless paper work demands and legality.

Be sure, be very sure you have signed papers 
as to your choices.
Elst you die too, despite the cries of your families 
tears, and their unheeded voices!



Entered 12/12/2019
Chantelle Ann Cooke's Contest
Memorial of a Loved One
Categories: legalistic, anger, death, how i
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Reavaluated My Spokenword

Anchored stricken;
Home grow religion;
Borrowed freedoms;
Who? Said they had the keys to the kingdoms;

Spiritual warfare Merited Men heaven stormers 
Legalistic?

Arithmetic context;
Virtual biceps, malicious cell texts;
Borrowed freedoms, stolen hearts;
Who? Said they had the keys to the kingdoms, buildings parts;

Spiritual warfare Merited Men heaven stormers 
Legalistic?

Release yourself from the bureaucratic;
Demographic fallacious options schematics;
Master race stolen more than is can chew;
Constipated evil heart intent malice malicious brew;

Intrenched unyielding;
Human’s thoughts selfish;
Can’t be told nothing unbelieving;
Denying the powers there of self-complacent resist?

Spiritual warfare Merited Men heaven stormers 
Legalistic?

My ways are not your ways;
My thoughts not yours also;
What? You talkN bout;
I’m gonna hush my mouth;

This don’t be that;
As a matter of fact;
The fruit doesn’t fall far from the branch to the ground;
Release yourself from the bureaucratic;
Demographic fallacious options schematic;

Master race stolen more than is can chew;
Constipated evil heart intent malice malicious brew;

Passionate about a rebirth life
On this side of the grass
My ways are now align with His ;
My thoughts now holy spiritually hon purposed;
What? You talkN bout;
I’m gonna hush my mouth;
Spiritual warfare Merited Men heaven stormers 
Legalistic?

 Now of the understanding I know longer choose
All things are from Him and In Him God is All things
So when I allow the things of God to free reign
Just and only for His abounding glory, for His blessings
For His honor, again His glory  Hallelujah

12/1/2022
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2022©
Categories: legalistic, analogy, forgiveness, inspirational, meaningful,
Form: Rhyme

Fault Line

I never could have predicted
That I would leave in such a way
Circumstances brought me to a place
Where I could no longer stay

The legalistic rules
All of them, hypocritical fools

In all of their getting
They were too stupid to retain
Any measure of learning
For the mentally insane

Justify, justify, justify
Then they have the nerve to testify

.........of God's deliverance

Who needs that crap
When there is life to be livin'
I'll not give one more moment
To eternal grave diggin'

I'm going to run to boat loads of fun
Until I am filled up, good and done

But don't be lookin' for me
To darken a church house door
I'm  a sippin' saint
Who won't bow to "law" anymore

But, I'll hold on to what God hates
Surely he'll let me in those pearly gates

............WHAT???
..............................Mama's dead

I can't........................breathe


Written by Trudy Schrader on 07-19-2019

Note: This has been the most difficult write of my life, and it is not autobiographical...that's probably why. Anyway, when reading the poem, think about how a fault line works, and hopefully, you will have an earthshaking experience.
Categories: legalistic, growth,
Form: Rhyme

Sympathy For Peace

Zionist
for Israel, but
I don't invest,
in WAR...
I'm a pacifist...
For Arab 
as for any other people
being legalistic
without exclusivist predilection...
for peaceful solution
no arms race
calm conversation
harmonious division
brotherhood in view
without fatal pride, absolutist
sans  rejection, unhealthy, fatalistic
sans cruelty, dominist...
Allah understanding God
After all, they are one...!
Divide territory
and live in peace
and respect Both...!
Abolish parabellum !
PP peace, please...!
Categories: legalistic, extended metaphor, inspirational, peace,
Form: Prose Poetry

Religion

I don't like religion and
All it's legalistic ways.
You can't do this
And you must do that
In order to get God's praise.

It say's I must live a righteous
Life and do my very best,
Then you'll get God's favour,
And then you will be blessed.

I don't like religion and
All it's legalistic ways,
you can't do this
And you must do that,
In order to get God's praise.

It says I must obey the law
Never get out of line,
Keep on doing my very best
Then you will be fine.

I used to be religious
The best that I could be,
And live up to a standard
For God to accept me.

Then one day I met this man
Who came to visit me.
He opened up the Bible
For things for me to see.

He spoke to me about God's Son
And how he died for me,
To take away all my sin,
And to set me free.

Now I know God loves me,
Not for what I've done.
So you can keep all that religion,
My savation's in God's Son.
Categories: legalistic, faithgod, me, god, me,
Form: Rhyme
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