Best Insensate Poems


Premium Member Emptiness

I am full
Of emptiness
I long for longing
Crave contentment

The insensate pain
Of intangible touch
Indecipherable ciphers
Choreographed madness

Craggy comfort
Of blunt condolence
The decorum of anarchy
Deserted crowds, social solitude
Miles given to intercept steps

At the dawn of abundance
I see only
bones of ghosts 
Whose meager admonishment
I forgot to unlearn

Unredeemed
And unrepentant
I am in love
With loneliness.

9/20/19

A Toast To the Naive

To ALL those 
who think 
their thinking 
will understand 
life and love, 
war and peace, 
hate and forgiveness, 
good and evil, 
hell and heaven...

To the intellectuals 
who loudly declare  
hope an illusion, 
belief delusion,
religion refuge 
for fools, and 
science to be 
the only true god...

To the socialists 
and communists and 
all progressive people 
who are certain 
humanity's makeover 
is just within reach, 
perfection awaits
only correct ideology, 
with justice, fairness, 
equality for all...
(as long as it's 
done their way).

To the materialists 
who are bold and brave, 
seeing death as extinction, 
life as meaningless, 
so proud, so very proud 
that they, and only they 
know the truth:
what you see is 
what you get...

A toast to all the naive, 
who see but are blind, 
hear but are deaf, 
feel but are so insensate 
of life's Spirit,
they live like mice 
in a magnificent palace...

Premium Member Crazed By Grief

Nighttime falls shrouded dark and spiritless,
Wavering fire a glaze dying cinder.
In grim silence tears ebb and flow aimless,
Lips quake angry filled breath growing dimmer.

Loneliness devours inch by inch loves amber,
Left raw to feel the flesh stretch. Brittle crust
Steady smoldering embers, numb anger,
Solace grieving soul filled volcanic dust.

It worsens with the tick-tock of the clock.
None can replace time, not a second in
A day hidden beneath insensate lock.
Days overwhelming calamities sin.

Loneliness niggles as the mind wanders
Bound by loves suffering also ponders.





1/14/2020
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member Re: the Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry

It's inauguration day, January 20, 2021.
I could be at home, watching the TV presentation
pomp and pageantry. But old, achy, onerous and 
anxious, bladder full with no toilet near, I wait 
in a chilly car in a VA clinic parking lot, 
entry to warmth and light prohibited by
the COVID pandemic.  
Inside, my life-partner -- afflicted by 
diabetic, infected purple insensate
second toe, left foot -- seeks news
of its possible fate: to be treated
or scheduled to be permanently removed
from its too snug position among 
the other toes. Fidgety, I have settled 
upon re-reading for the umpteenth time
selected pages among my (now) collection
of loose sheets between two crumbling
covers held together by rubber bands:
what's left of my copy of The Vintage Book
of Contemporary American Poetry, edited 
by J. D. McClatchy.  Many of these poems
(all perhaps?) are no longer "contemporary" --
this is a 1990 paper publication with poetry
from the preceding 40 years.  I still treasure
many of the poems. 
My custom, when alone, is to read out loud, and 
to mark or circle poems, selected phrases, lines, 
or passages that I choose, for whatever reason,
and often to think/fantasize how or whether 
I might (or would) have written and then recited 
in my own words, in my own voice, my own altered 
poetic echoes of those lines, those thoughts, those 
rhymes, those carefully or recklessly considered
pronouncements and descriptions. 
And to wonder whether my own contrivances 
would blend well with the originals that fostered 
their appearance.
I conclude: my ersatz poetic products might be 
somewhat like an infected toe that could be 
snipped away -- or treated and tended, nurtured,
cured, made healthy, worthy enough for a place 
crowded among those others. 
As I have  tried (fitfully) here to do.

Insensate Destruction

Rehearsed words tumble from his tongue
capable of vaporizing
feelings; then with his briefest smile
becomes the redresser once more
leaving the object of his words
emotionally traumatized:
Mind raping at its finest form;
Cold-bloodedness runs through his veins
colder than any ectotherm;
Temperament worse than the worst
lacking the slightest compunction;
More like reptilian than human
this controlling creature thriven
on human mental frailties.

Premium Member The Breath of Om

Charcoal cloud clutches the marooned moon
The sky stifles behind the dark shroud
The nubile night breathes the music of breeze
Rippling in the sound of silence.

The ocean wreathes with surging surface waves
The water at cold depth is fathomless serene
Respires the breath of dense darkness
Flowing in the sound of silence.

The tapestry of life torn by torment
Searches deep within for the lattice of quietude
The smothered mind soaks the breath of solace
Drifting in the sound of silence.

The captivating cacophony of materialistic life
Suffocates the consciousness of the absolute being
The secluded soul is suffused with the breath of bliss
Wafting in the sound of silence.

In the endless journey of the insensate essence
Across the seamless landscape of the ultimate reality
As we be breathed, feel the breath of Om
Vibrating in the sound of silence.

(Om is the sound of sacred spiritual symbol in Hinduism, signifying the essence of the ultimate reality, consciousness, or Paramatman. (Wikipedia)

August 19, 2021
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Women Power

Don't you dare look at her
with those dreadful eyes
if you think she'll be frightened
in your dreams you'll hear your own cries

Dont underestimate her strength
her dexterity is more then you
about her corporeal and mental power
hey insensate man-you have no clue

if you think you are supercilious
you better change your thinking
in reality you're vicious
proudness is what with which you're teeming

Your woman is your life
at your every step she will be with you
its your duty to respect her
she'll be always by her husband's side-yes that's true

you harass her, you kill her
you burn her alive
she has to face the consequences
she is the one who always strives

But mind you she wont let a tear flow down
her actions will be dynamic
your truculent behavior wont stop her
from heading towards the tallest peak

If you ever break her heart into pieces
she wont remember you as the one who broke her heart
But rather the one who taught her
to live with a broken heartDon't you dare look at her
with those dreadful eyes
if you think she'll be frightened
in your dreams you'll hear your own cries

Dont underestimate her strength
her dexterity is more then you
about her corporeal and mental power
hey insensate man-you have no clue

if you think you are supercilious
you better change your thinking
in reality you're vicious
proudness is what with which you're teeming

Your woman is your life
at your every step she will be with you
its your duty to respect her
she'll be always by her husband's side-yes that's true

you harass her, you kill her
you burn her alive
she has to face the consequences
she is the one who always strives

But mind you she wont let a tear flow down
her actions will be dynamic
your truculent behavior wont stop her
from heading towards the tallest peak

If you ever break her heart into pieces
she wont remember you as the one who broke her heart
But rather the one who taught her
to live with a broken heart

The Enormity of Existence, Part 2

This world is so heavy upon us, 
we scarcely can know of the Other 
as it impinges on this world 
of flesh and bone, air and water,
sky and mountain, man and woman....

Our bodies are too fine--
instruments of unending sensation 
from birth to death, 
our brains so vast in imagination...
yet so small in comprehension.

We live in fear and longing: 
we sin...repent...sin again.
We pass by our neighbors 
with barely a glance,
while we turn on our beloved 
with blindness, with deafness--
little wonder why we despair.

The great wonder is--
why we are loved...
each of us so difficult,
so repulsive at times...
yet with just a slight 
turn of the magnet
and we are bound 
together once again.

The most magnificent wonder 
of all is why He loves us--
blind little bugs scurrying
about in the dark, sentient 
of the mud but insensate 
of the glory until we are 
transformed by the Light
and can see Heaven cupped 
in our hands and feel, at 
last, the Eternal beating 
deep within our hearts.

Afterglow

Afterglow
by Michael R. Burch
 
for Beth
 
The night is full of stars. Which still exist?
Before time ends, perhaps one day we’ll know.
For now I hold your fingers to my lips
and feel their pulse ... warm, palpable and slow ...
 
once slow to match this reckless spark in me,
this moon in ceaseless orbit I became,
compelled by wilder gravity to flee
night’s universe of suns, for one pale flame ...
 
for one pale flame that seemed to signify
the Zodiac of all, the meaning of
Love’s wandering flight past Neptune. Now to lie
in dawning recognition is enough ...
 
enough each night to bask in you, to know
the face of love ... eyes closed ... its afterglow.



The Insurrection of Sighs
by Michael R. Burch 

She was my Shiloh, my Gethsemane;
she nestled my head to her breast
and breathed upon my insensate lips
the fierce benedictions of her ubiquitous sighs,
the veiled allegations of her disconsolate tears . . .

Many years I abided the agile assaults of her flesh . . .
She loved me the most when I was most sorely pressed;
she undressed with delight for her ministrations
when all I needed was a good night’s rest . . .

She anointed my lips with her soft lips’ dews;
the insurrection of sighs left me fallen, distressed, at her elegant heel.
I felt the hard iron, the cold steel, in her words and I knew:
the terrible arrow showed through my conscripted flesh.

The sun in retreat left her victor and all was Night.
The last peal of surrender went sinking and dying—unheard.



Star Crossed
by Michael R. Burch 

Remember—
night is not like day;
the stars are closer than they seem ...
now, bending near, they seem to say
the morning sun was merely a dream
ember.



The State of the Art (?)
by Michael R. Burch

Has rhyme lost all its reason
and rhythm, renascence?
Are sonnets out of season
and poems but poor pretense?

Are poets lacking fire,
their words too trite and forced?
What happened to desire?
Has passion been coerced?

Shall poetry fade slowly,
like Latin, to past tense?
Are the bards too high and holy,
or their readers merely dense?

His Emma Nance

loving male, natural of pleasure, quintessentially 
rendered suitable to us via way ova our darling daughter.

tis the blessing of this average, contemplative damn 
ejected flotsam globular human impish jokester kooky lamb
misunderstood nonestablishmentarian outlier praises quality ram

rod sterling stately treasured undergraduate, ventures wielding yawping zeal
asper near perfect synchronized 
   ventured capitalone bond to me doth appeal
twas thankful to seminal accomplishment 
   dearest Eden Liat exhibited
   when smart as a whip per snapper abilities did congeal
witnessing passing each grade with flying colors - 
   electrifying mien kempf as if stung from Alaska Bull worm eel 
I ask you to - just take in stride wordy way as sigh guide "sea legs" to feel
along murky medium, how to communicate élan which doth heal

this figurative war torn, self strafed, kamikaze buzz-feeding, 
   eventually fostered grimacing hangdog ilk insensate
blitzkrieg assailed middle aged married male - during his early decades 
   endured passivity, while peers viciously throve on me with hate
tread - pock marked psychological scars perforated 
   positive faith in self, only now I feel great,
whence untrammeled passion presumed murmured between themselves 
   when alone pondering their fate
two vibrant young adults appear especially well suited, 
   as two peas in a pod
   a radiant ionic bond they plainly equate
(one comprising thee "star student" progeny), 
   supremely mature to date
and thee well groomed Emmanuel 
   dust blend harmonious with "Ode to Joy" ye create
such an idyllic sight engendering tears of happiness 
   buffer and shine each alphanumeric byte, NOT phishing for bait
most pleasing sight assuages psychic purposefulness, 
   Anorexia Nervosa once ate.

Emotional Perihelion

EMOTIONAL PERIHELION


Alpha rhythm

Relaxation to angst

Indifference inspired hate

Electrified mutiny. Powerful schism


Scofflaw perplexed;

Sycophantic insensate-

Brutal – inhuman – Trait

Trail of honey to lead the insects-


To altruistic rape.

Drug down into a selfless feudalistic hate.

Sadomasochistic shapes

Shadows crawl back in

And begin to dissect


Honor to inject and action to defend;

With pride, dishonor dies. Says goodbye,

To shame and regret.

The end.

Premium Member Swift Arthur

King Arthur had a lightning rod. Guinevere found him trying.
His vassals though profoundly odd were far more satisfying.
In martial arts he did excel. At other trades his plying
Could never suit his ego well -- one often found him sighing.

Whenever he returned from war, he was the day's sensation;
But evening found him sad and sore, insensate to persuasion.
Sometimes he tried, and tried his best, to rise to the occasion,
But instanter fell back to rest. His queen must feign elation.

The thing that made it all so strange, he thought himself a charmer.
The king, it seems, a bit deranged, was fearful he might harm her.
She tried to be a faithful wife, avoiding page and farmer;
But Arthur would not, on his life, ever remove his armor.







"Swift Arthur" appeared previously in Fantasy & Terror 9, 1986. It will be collected for the first time in my forthcoming collection The Ocean's Tryst and Other Metrical Tales of Heroic Fantasy.

An Unknown Angel

A mushy voice had left me insensate…
My soul grinned & hallowed my fate…

That “Belle” rambled close to me with elegance…
As if she comprehended riddle of my deep Sense…

Words from her rose lips felt like paradise…
It made the fondness for her in my heart rise…

Like a minor she laughs and roves for all to sight…
Becomes an astounding moment like sun bright…

While portraying her stunning beauty, I have inadequate utterance…
Seeing that each imperfect expression for her beauty would be an offence...
© Mr Gautam  Create an image from this poem.

An Imaginary Itinerary

The journey seem to be foretold
And my arrant voice swooned 
By the satire that echoed down
Down, to the plaintive essence of nascence
And they thought my eyes were deserted,
My heart was insensate,
My ires were wretched
And when I was bleeding
They went on saying, that
My blood was unchaste.
They who decided me to be one of them
They foretold my journey
By the shadow of immorality
And moaned me to the path of a broken destiny. 
I stood up alone, and alone I look up
They smiled, they clapped and they reveled
Back of me,
I walked alone, and I met myself
They provoked, they chatted and they brayed
Yet I went on alone.

Poem Not Written

I had hoped to pen a poem today
Before laying myself down to sleep,
But I have to admit with some dismay
That my emotions were not so deep.

The pencil-thin line of flaming red
Drawn so lightly in the morning sky
Announced the sun’s rising overhead
Yet left no impression upon my eye.

The crisp morning air that greeted me -
Rich with the scent of apple wood smoke –
Must have left no mark on my memory,
Nor knew the language my spirit spoke.

My children’s laughter at games and play
Fell on my ears like notes from a bell,
Though I heard those notes so clear and gay
My heart, I fear, did not listen well.

The aromas from the kitchen stove
Promised a meal for which I must wait,
But the smell of cornbread, ham and clove
Soon departed with my empty plate.

The evening stars that gently twinkled
Against the dark of heavenly height
Sent a warm glow that lightly sprinkled
On my too insensate soul tonight.

I had hoped to pen a poem today
Before laying myself down to sleep,
But I have to admit with some dismay
I had no sense of what to keep.

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