Best Hypercritical Poems

****OUR ENEMIES IN DISGUISE***
Norman MacClain wrote, "it is those we live and love, and should know, who loot us"
But whether we like it or not they exist
For some are endowment
And others we got after birth
As some existed long even before we came to earth
But yet,...

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I confess that as a child the ruthless caused me 
crippling pain with deeply wounding words and 
bodily attacks that led me to falter through life.

I confess that various family member’s inflicted
incessant cruel criticisms that wholly damaged 
my character leaving a soul shattered in shame!

I...

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I confess that as a child the ruthless caused me 
crippling pain with deeply wounding words and 
bodily attacks that led me to falter through life.

I confess that various family member’s inflicted
incessant cruel criticisms that wholly damaged 
my character leaving a soul shattered in shame!

I...

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sista you were the person i admired the most

you always came out on top others weren't even close

you took on the pressure of any situation

the role you took was without hesitation

i felt that i would always need you for guidance

i looked at you as my...

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America is Dying Babylon is Falling 

And the spirit took me up
I lost my breathe
all that's left
Is to slip of the cup
Gods holy name I no more defile
I'll walk steadfast upward getting out of the bile
No more abominations 
I am committed to rebirthing this nation
Ungodly...

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Crazy COVID-19 has us all in a tizzy

Too much information making all of us dizzy

Most who’ve been exposed self-quarantine

Running out of toilet paper making us mean

“Social distancing” is the phrase du jour

Scientists scrambling now to find the cure

Hurry!


(Chorus)

COVID-19 apolitical

Proper testing so critical

Slow response hypocritical

Naysayers hypercritical

Division...

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Were living in troubled times elevated by hypercritical self-righteous minds, 
that use the lords name for condoning a number of sin based crimes
Revelation continues to show these signs

forgotten seems is the word; that we are all of one flock, of one herd to fight 
against...

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What an experience?
So monological your 
days were,
so hypercritical was 
your then,
so hypocritical was 
your pains, were 
when,
very analogical  was 
your sorrow went,
in moan and swone 
your definition was 
sent.

your name and your 
fame had no meaning 
but a shame meant,
you had no happiness 
except...

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I was not born into sin,
Neither as a babe in arms was I wicked.
There is no place reserved in a Hell for me as a non believer or in the religious corral you force our people into through fear and threat for their seemly condemned...

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Look what you have done to my shoelaces, Fluffy!
Now that's hardly a  nice thing to do.
There are things in this world, from a twig to a bone,
that are more admirably suited to chew.

I don't wish to be hypercritical, Fluffy.
You might easily have done something...

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Doctors take the Hippocratic Oath
  though many are quite loath
to try to save older folk --
  They view the oath as a joke

Politicians also take an oath
  A 'Hypercritical Hypocritical' Vow
To blast anyone who dares ask why
  He should believe their...

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If I watch you closely dose that make me insecure.
If you're longing for a lover maybe?
My love is to impure.
Impleaded fantasy's
 I'm sick and you're the cure.
Materialistic lament, 
hypercritical that's for sure.
Under a blanket of infidelity, 
obscene and obscured.
hearts are devoured,
blood thirsty, and I want...

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Oh, my, unexpected foe, “when you read my poems 
you wrongly judged me, and in a demeaning tone
shouted, “Do you ever write poems that are not sad?”

Dear disguised friend, you had me defending what
I wrote bringing me back to past sadness I had long
overcome causing...

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