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Fixated

cognitive enhancement
energy Adderall
sideffects depression
solution Ritalin
additive A.D.D.

Note: this is a new style I am working on called a 3 X 2 (three by two), each line has two three-syllable words, any length with no punctuation.

Premium Member Fixated By a Rose

Sometimes our attention will turn toward some of God's special creations that may cause our hearts to skip a beat or take one's breath away.  Such was the case with me when one of God's choicest roses left me speechless and staring.

While chatting with a friend, I looked to our right and saw a mobilized rose bush* moving in our direction. It appears that I was more startled and enchanted by the beauty of the roses than by the animated movement. The roses were much lovelier than any that I had ever seen and were most beautiful, full of color, and downright stunning.

I did not speak to the rose but wanted to, nor it to me, but I heard it well in unutterable tones, and as I stared at it with wonderment, it watched me sheepishly.  I was to some extent spellbound and for a while, I could not look away.  There were also other flowers standing and some coming and going in a most orderly fashion, but none was as noticeable as the roses that came in our direction.

Indeed, for a few seconds, I forgot that my friend was standing there, and lest I be embarrassed, I discontinued staring at the one particular rose that had spell bounded me. I then turned toward the less eye-catching flowers, but that special rose continued moving toward my friend and stood next to him as I walked away.  By then it was clear to me that they knew each other, but it was also clear to me that the rose was not available to me for acquisition, nor was I in a position to acquire that priceless rose.

It's been many a year since first seeing that mesmerizing rose of impeccable purity and refinement, so arresting and captivating of me as no rose, violet, lily, or lilac ever had before.  Never had I encountered a flower so adorable and embracing. 

I tell you, roses are my favorite flower, and many of them have graced my home for more than 22 years.  I must confess that there have been times I have denied them proper care and adequate water supply due to drought conditions, but I love my long-standing roses dearly.  Moreover, for a long season and more, I cannot forget that overwhelming rose that fixated and left me speechless more than 10 years ago.

120219PoSoup, (entry 072820)July NA HM Poetry, Constance La France.     Your Best New Poem, Emile Pinet. NA . *fiction. 2nd contest(7/9/20), Strand Completely New 7, Brian Strand. NA

Premium Member Fixated

Upon
yellow rays-
across the skies,
the helianthus turns
its eyes.


Premium Member Fixated

Fixated on feeling better, braving
          my grief, needing to restore
my faith, uplift dad’s face.

4/29/2021

Fixated on you

I swam through the endless sea
Wondering where you could be.
Looking for the fish I was told about
Almost like trying to leave a cult.
I looked at them all and here's my review.....
Some, are sore to the eyes,
Some smell like poo.
Some, sound like flies,
And some.... Want to share my food.
And I just didn't know what to do.
Bright and was all smiles.

I finally found my fish,
And yes, you were my wish.

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