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Premium Member Star Wars Rebellion Haiku Stream
Star Wars Rebellion:
A galactic game of Risk—
Empire/Alliance.

Alliance Leaders:
Luke Skywalker, Han Solo,
Leia, Mon Mothma.

Young Luke Skywalker
Has to confront Darth Vader,
Becomes Jedi Knight.

Han Solo pilots
The Millenium Falcon
With friend Chewbaca.

Leia Organa:
Very strong diplomat,
Potential Jedi.

President Mothma:
The rebellion’s heart and soul,
Great at recruiting.

Rebel advantage:
They are able to move their
Secret Headquarters.

Imperial...

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Categories: commandos, conflict, evil, games, hero,
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Stan the Man--Stan Lee a Dedication
Stan the Man--Stan Lee a DEDICATION

He who that says that he is I am
I am Stan the man
Stanley Martin Lieber was born on December 28, 1922,
In Manhattan, New York City,
n the apartment of his Romanian-born Jewish 
immigrant parents,
He who that says that he is I...

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Categories: commandos, analogy, appreciation, books, community,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Voluptuous Bullets
"Voluptuous Bullets"



In the game of Love and War
voluptuous bullets
penetrate a mouth of warm words

Lacking defence lines 
boundaries come undone 
in the valleys of a body let loose

Depth charged oceans seduce
and submerge the sensual mind
civility replaced by plundered flight

And soft war cries in ruffled sheets that...

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Categories: commandos, muse, romance, sensual,
Form: Romanticism

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Premium Member Synthetic Telepathy
A dopamine-drenched frontal lobe drowns in an amphetamine's amine receptors,
Exciting the neurotransmission of the cognitive euphoria in its grandiose risen scepter. 

Motivation awakens alongside focus and patience in the stimulated ADHD brain,
Which, without a pill, is a tiring wiring of knotted neurons whose firing is...

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Categories: commandos, addiction, drug, feelings, imagery,
Form: Couplet
Bloody Last Day---Aps Attack
With the Sun's knock they opened their eyes
"wow azure sky and bright sun in the chilly December."

That was a normal day in school
Nothing was wrong with anything 

Students gathered in the main hall
Were taking lessons on First Aid

Suddenly there was bang.... 
And then not one...

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Categories: commandos, day, death, december,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Chickenhawks
I gots to go on down to Applebees.
I gots to watch the big game on TV.
Oh, its much better than January's
Superbowl, March Madness, the history
of boxing or Tiger Woods teeing up.
We'll toss down a couple of brews and eat
our way through the evening hour and...

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Categories: commandos, allegory, parody, political,
Form: Sonnet



Premium Member When I Was Young 1970s
I saw one journey end and another begin
I saw my world changed and in a spin 

I saw another end - the end of the band
I saw John and Yoko hand in hand

I saw commandos in the air armed and ready
I saw hostages freed in...

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Categories: commandos, childhood, history, world,
Form: Couplet
Ceremony of Blood-Bath
CRISES IN THE DESERT


written in the effect of religious crisis in Nigeria


Our heart received the message
And tensions well-positioned themselves in the sky.
Heads sought refuge at army barracks;
A world of agony was about to loom


Who cursed that Friday noon?
When the serpent’s deceit erected citadel
Of hatred in...

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Categories: commandos, deathreligious, religious,
Form: Burlesque
Premium Member Marvel 1960s
MARVEL 1960s

As I journey into mystery
I come across the tower of shadows
Into the chamber of darkness
I'm found tales to astonish
Hulking and giant men
Sub marina
Involved in tales of supense
Iron men and american Captains
Oh! but strange tales
Doctors and one eye patch wearing --
    government...

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Categories: commandos, appreciation, character, dedication, hero,
Form: Heroic Couplet
Flashes of Combat
Flashes of combat
of the rising tally from both camps
in a war that is faintly remembered

Flashes of training with the commandos
flashes of training with the marines
Flashes of action imprinted in memory

Taking out his bottle of pills
swallows three white pills
sleep quickly finds him

Dreams starting but they are...

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Categories: commandos, africa, conflict, dedication, veterans
Form: Narrative
Condo Commando Landings
Condo Commando Landings

They came in shiny silver saucer shaped air ships
With cylindrical flashing red lights in the night
From Planet New Jersey
Alien space crafts…. I mean .… weather balloons, (according to NASA)
From many light years…. I mean… traffic lights away
Landing in Miami first with a thirst...

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Categories: commandos, abuse, anger, bullying, community,
Form: Didactic
Politicians Drop Your Security Cover
Another blast
Few killed, many injured, all innocent
News put 17 nos as killed bodies count 
Who knows how living death hovers when bread winner is lost ?

Politicians are genesis of surge in terror
they are safe, with commandos and bullet proof cars
Common man is King maker on...

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Categories: commandos, loss
Form: Free verse
Fallen Villan Abu Abdullah Osama Muhammad Bin Laden
A fallen villain;
Slayer of the innocent and lover of pain;
A gifted mystic who prostituted the endowments of Nature,
And thus drunk her  cup of fury with mysterious pleasure.

Sharks found a rare meal of flesh and blood
That they would not have had,
Thanks to the seasond American...

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Categories: commandos, sorry
Form: Rhyme
Mario Versus Contra
(Mario)

Here comes the carpenter                                         ...

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Categories: commandos, dedication, children, kids,
Form: Rhyme
One Colored Page At a Time
One colored page at a time 

I touched the field of amber pleadings
with eyes only sure enough to find that hidden light
Long lost in the sea of forgotten grasses,
brown from the sun, parched by a drought,
exhaling diversions as I stand facing time,
expecting faces to appear...

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Categories: commandos, children, environment, hope,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry