Best Breathlessness Poems


Premium Member Hungarian Rhapsody

HUNGARIAN RHAPSODY

Her hand’s swan-like dance,
ivory shadow puppets
romance. Hungarian rhapsody.

The musician sans existence
as emotive fingers move
imaginary marionettes
with splendiferous precision.

Drama drops onto piano keys
occasionally taking a gentle stroll
then in sensuous sway, sashaying
like an exotic dancer. The musician

plucks and plinks as if
with chameleonic charm, like an
angel playing a harp.

Her fingers fast walk the keyboard
then resound tremulous keys.

(The audience swoons, spooned
by a rapturous torrent that enters
the heart, strokes and kisses
the yearning flesh, like the taste
and feel of brandy, burning and
tantalizing in breathlessness)

The musician’s slender fingers
now strum along in gaiety, like
paramours on the streets of Paris,

Springtime in the air. Palms nearly
rest upon silent keys as if two lovers
lay back upon a bed with puffs of smoke.

Dawn’s crescendo, with peaks of happiness
reside upon streets of ebony and ivory.

Life’s serendipitous monologue begins
once more with foreboding or adventure
or both. Is there loneliness upon this crest
for what has happenstance brought,
are they star-crossed? Do we see the sun

and the moon racing through their pulse —
days of birth and mourning?

(The blond marionette in concert black
seems to be mesmerized or hypnotized
by the muse of music. She’s like a dream
on a performance stage. Practiced in

illumination of flame. She releases the arrow
and the audience brightens up like a chandelier
with clinking and brilliant crystal pieces)

Happiness once again but with ferocious fervor
sends the keys to a heavenly place - to ears,
to mind, to soul...a cheer of a great parade,

and then the shivering of climatic peak,
followed by a lullaby of dreams - we imagine
a newborn wrapped up in a life well-lived.

The darling gal still doesn’t give up the ghost
but plays and plays...can you hear the needle
stuck at the vinyl’s end...spending all love gives?

Only the Creator Himself can lift the arm and
carry the musician still incubating all her charm.

3/19/2018
Categories: breathlessness, music, , Lullaby,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member The Abuse

 I AM DEAD BECAUSE I FEEL SO!
I lay wrinkled and knotted, trying to iron my crumpled self...
Vibrating with those ugly, gruesome resonances, I relive those horrors each day.

 I AM DEAD BECAUSE I FEEL SO!
I walk yet I feel crippled...................
I can see my inner self but why do I feel blind.............
I can hear my internal sobs, but deafness seems like myself...................
I am not dumb but where my laughter is lost, I am not sure.................

 I AM DEAD BECAUSE I FEEL SO!
What was it that caused this ABUSE, I try to reason out?
Perhaps my silly heart or my funny face..............
Maybe my ugly hand or my miserable mind..................

 I AM DEAD BECAUSE I FEEL SO!
It was the depth of that ABUSE that set my soul to choke into breathlessness!

 I AM DEAD BECAUSE I FEEL SO!
Categories: breathlessness, abuse, dark, depression,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Split In Half

In the speechlessness 
of your breathlessness,
I breathe vigorously
to arouse your former arising,
too afraid to touch 
a corpse in the making. 
Could another's spare years 
restore your time? 
Could another's breath 
bring back your air?
Could my hyperventilation, 
like our blended heart,
be split in half to share?
Categories: breathlessness, bereavement, death, giving, grief,
Form: Free verse

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Haunted In ITQ

Tree boughs scope me by window glass,
As the long night without stars pass
The moon out like dead rock— the last
Time dark mornings will be so vast.

Around my boughs, raining's ghost wane,  
Falling by frost and Winter drape
On each neck of shaked off leaves' fade—
A gone beauty's heat, spent in pain.

White bough's gloom in the swaying trees
For springtime's parched-for reveries—
On fogged glass, it reflects with me
The old, old, January bleak.

From the window, my breathlessness
For boughs straining in rainy gust.
© Paige Hind  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: breathlessness, angst, dark, introspection, january,
Form: Quatorzain

Premium Member Fear Minichu

Heart silently shivers
when the roaring clouds burst in electrical light
mind quivers

Trembling in tears
breathlessness, as stars wane from sight
kohl fears

Inked sky
faded twilight
sigh

Heart silently shivers
breathlessness, as stars wane from sight
sigh
Categories: breathlessness, angst, anxiety, dark, deep,
Form: Rhyme

Hiatus

I held my breath as long as I could
Until my lungs began to burn
I forgot my Tibetan embodiments
And gave breathing again, a turn

O, I held my breath and waited for you
From October, till Winter’s depth
Yet you could not say
On any day
That your heart held any breadth

For me or my breathlessness or my cares
Or my happy days or my joys

You measured me
By another tree
That splintered
And left you forlorn

And you hoped for naught
So, your ropes were caught
In the tree
Like a kite in a storm.

O, there’s always a reason
Why loving fails
And makes a person go

And your wordlessness
Made me blow out my breath
And prefer a sensible life
To death

And go out to watch the snow.
Categories: breathlessness, depression, girlfriend, longing, love,
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Time

There was a time when I dreamed huge dreams
Felt the presence of a mysterious urgency
To reach beyond the past and into the present
Embrace each moment with a sense of hopefulness
Assured that there will be more joy to treasure
~
The clock was ticking on, endlessly judging me
With a desire to right the wrongs that had been
Whispering echoes of defeat and cheerless fears
Never truly seeing the confidence I had to believe
The poise that I felt within when I looked to heaven
~
There was the assurance of those hopes eternal
Keeping me filled with an elated desire for the future
And those things that are more than here and now
But go beyond today into the infinite faith that is
Alive, dancing across the spirit with a promise of forever
~
With these wise and secure feelings for the imminent
Reveries of anticipation sent me exhaling intimacy
Echoing prayers of breathlessness that helped me see
With God, all things are possible and probable ~ Any dream
Is there to be believed, treasured and realized, trusted to be!





Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: A Dear Heart
June 30, 2020
Categories: breathlessness, dream, encouraging, endurance, fear,
Form: Free verse

Feathered Thoughts

Tranquil thoughts
breathing
of slow kissed sights
comforted 
in expelling this light
languorous trembled gaze

A mask promising nothing
yet yearning to taste 
now pushed aside

Risking this pull 
stakes everything

Claims made 
forever washing
though tears of ecstasy 
now rolling free of 
ducted bliss
trailed warmth of
cored beings
exquisite dripping 
yets

Serenades of wanting 
traveling through blood
as feather breathes
brushed lightness 
thieves strength
floating in 
washes of joyed right

Unaltered and bare 
lured to charm
unhooked to potent need 
she is lost

Silkily softness crushed in satin
drawn to slither tight
set free to embrace
crystal screams
shattered 
in feathers graced might

Masked 
to be nothing
revealed   
in breathlessness
Categories: breathlessness, passion
Form: Free verse

Humor 'Laughter Definations'

Ha Ha Ha - Cartoon- funny

Giggle - Valley Girl- Preppy

LOL - Texting- Hilarious

Snicker- Your worst enemy- Flippant

Snort- Pig- Belly laugh

Chuckle- Manley Man- Sportive

Howl- To much alcohol- Cracked up

Hew Haw- Country Girl- Tickled

Teehee- Sophisticated Women- Amusing

Ho Ho Ho- Santa Clause- Jolly

Horselaugh- Mr. Ed- Smirk

Hoot- Best Buddy- Grin

Died Laughing- Bills are due- Breathlessness

Guffaw- Mother-in-law died- Just kidding

No matter how we laugh or what we laugh at
it's good for the soul. 

4/19/2015 Contest sponsored by: Thomas Martin 'Humorous Poetry'
       T Reams    1st Place
Categories: breathlessness, feelings, funny, humor,
Form: Verse

Thomas Kinkaid

quick figurative brush stroke drawn out character sketch
(serendipitous verisimilitude)

i stand in awe
(with mouth agape) at elegiac, fantastic,
   and graphic idyllic Kinkade magic
   leaving breathlessness from craw

at such artistic talent oozing
   spellbindingly, whatever
   aforementioned noteworthy craftsman
   doth paint or draw,

and chanced to comment
   about sad affairs leaving flaw
in regard to questionable business ethics -
   where press hee haw
contradicting, maligning, undermining, and jaw
boning sans said late talented mortal
   engaging in sketchy traits of south paw

city when contrasted with a dog given gift -
   ooh...such rah...rah...rah
when he first appeared on the scene,
   where most viewers saw
utmost dynamic, fantastic, and harmonic convergence
displaying such prosaic, rhapsodic,
   titanic art show events

hum...and perhaps not surprising
   his illicit in dull gents presents stark contrast,
   staring hypnotized as imagination invents
experiencing peaceful, restful
   and tumblerful joie de vivre espying

   honorable mentioned nonpareil oeuvre
   that placidly rents
craving to disappear into bucolic landscape whence,
splashed upon canvass,

attempting to bat
presumed "FAKE" rumors aside as nonsense - fat
chance prevailed constituting:
   deceitful, immoral, unfaithful sly kat
nocturnal antics, despite scathing attacks

   (cut him down to size), niggardly praises spat
out for me, I maintain cult of personality (his)
   setting Mac Book Pro wallpaper
   with exemplary landscape, either authentic or copy cat.
Categories: breathlessness, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Elegy

White Is the Color of Wanting To Be Stained

This is me raping the red of an apple,
the breathy sweetness of the flesh underneath,
a slab of clean, radiant cold filling my mouth. 
I can feel it under my teeth, 
your skin, 
like the calm of an apple.

This is the tip-toe edge of a knife
slipping through the base of my skull,
and the blooming sickness of blood
curling up in my throat, as cold
and as calm as metal, 
a tide against my tongue, 
the breaking of waves against gritted teeth. 
An untamed, hot wind like wanting. 

I am red like the sun 
snapping the softness of the shadows, the
patience of the moon and her lazy circles, 
dripping white perfume and 
jazz –silver and cold onto the hungry earth.
I am mournful, desperation,
fingers pressed on parted lips
and hollow strings –the soft, clear scent of wood,
the cool reality of it unfolded beneath my palm,
lithe as skin. 

This is me waiting for you
because empty has overtaken
my marrow, scooped out fistfuls of organs
and flung them across the stars.
I have nothing, so I set it on fire, 
and it burns 
and it burns to nothing. 
And this is me reducing myself to ashes, 
wrapping my arms around my chest to 
count the beats, 
  wishing they wouldn’t skip 
      so
        fast. 
notes spilling into 
the white spaces where the shape of you
waits empty.

This is me conducting music in the rain, 
your name beating at the windshield, 
sliding silky down my thighs.
This is me flooding across the floor,
the heaviness of the inhale before syllables –
an ocean staining my reason –

You:  beautiful, intangible, surreal
as I reach for the 
bright spots of the moon,
the unbroken crimson of an apple,
the wet indigo of the sky.
A cold, pregnant emptiness curving, 
the breathlessness of the sea
misted white over my fingertips.
Categories: breathlessness, loveme, me, red,
Form: Dramatic Monologue

Premium Member Balancing the Load

Bills to Pay                                                                       Friday is payday
Homework to do                                                            Finally, I’m through
Dishes to wash                                                              Hubby likes to josh
Winter blues                                                                       Summer muse
Apathy’s Restlessness                                       Enthusiasm’s breathlessness
Night storms				                                  Morning sun warms
Marital disagreements                                                     Nuptial reverence
Expensive mortgage					               Scenic home privilege
Worries and anxieties                                                        God’s reliability


------------------------------ Hope, Faith and Love ---------------------------------
				             Everything sent
				                From above




Written on August 4th, 2014
For the Teeter Totter Poem--Balance the Load - Poetry Contest
Categories: breathlessness, faith, hope, love,
Form: Verse

No One To Tell

Searing love does not fade 
It simply lies in wait in hollow partitions 
Prone to sudden gusts  
of breathlessness 
These come in waves 
Some driving brusque prickles  
Others curling unhinged senses 
into further disorder 
Yet others stirring a cruel blend of  
cupidity  
and reason 

The waves prompt a light-headed 
introspection 
About confidence in a fractured shell 
About love with no one to tell 

They commit to change 
But winds carry a familiar scent 
Songs are about us 
And she’s in every silhouette  

The scent and songs 
swirl around the hollow partition like dreams  
Walls are tested 
to the point of rapture 
And still,
there is no one to tell 

Memories merge with the scent and songs  
Crafting a cogent immunity to time 
Our past is fused 
Changing seasons bear credence 
to the tenet of hope 
But tomorrow hangs on meanings 
crammed into last words  
Laughter ceases 
And searing love seeks deliverance… 
But 
there is no one to tell
Categories: breathlessness, lost, lost love,
Form: Personification

Je Te Veux - - I Want You

Hungered for a taste
  of your essenced elixir, 
drunken inhalations
   of your French poetry
a splendiferous whirl 
 of time & space 'tween
darkly scented moons
    and sun's adoration,
blithe starry nights 
amidst meditative new
dawn's effervesce,
 spirited of the heart, 
gleaned in the soul,
yearnings of another
  chapter's paradise
universal experiences
etched of hourglass sand,
 written upon endlessly 
    chimerical verses 
wildflower gardens drenched 
    of dandelion's plum wine
swooning under a
hypnotic scripted spell,
intoxicating power
of unchained symphonies 
dancing amongst skies' 
released euphoria 
 resonating in a song's 
   reprised melodies, 
breathlessness of delirium's
  celestial pauses 
  in vaporous breezes'
  unfurling undulation,
captivated by rhythmic
  destiny reverberating in
     loins' pleasurable calling
  quenched of sacred 
     offering's quell
transcending earthly 
   persuasions' rhyme,
let me lick the nectar from
   your  poesy's  insatiable  lips, 
sweet mercy's healing 
   captured in rapturous 
   surrender's reawakening ~
© Paloma P   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: breathlessness, beauty, heart, inspiration, longing,
Form: Romanticism

Can'T Decide If I Should Slap Myself Silly Or Have Another Cuppa Decaf

There are days like these when life patently doesn't come easy
like peas and carrots, tea and biscuits, moonshine & sun's resign,
more so resembling ill-assorted poked chocolates' wrongdoing of
dissemblance discombobulating conceivability mid hokey designed
disorderliness, inasmuch mute poetry impatiently awaiting lavishly
gifted muse's breathlessness to transform convoluted unreasonable
fractals pon escaped tauntingly mundane madness, twixt brass-tacks
wracks daunting tribulations throughout intervals of immoderately
spun matter-of-taxing challenges and perplexing puzzle pieces,
sans instructions far-side nonexistent proportions affixed with sticky
hot glue gun drivel or coffee pathetically absent jolting caffeine...
© Paloma P   Create an image from this poem.
Categories: breathlessness, confusion, crazy, humor, hyperbole,
Form: Alliteration
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