Best Abruptness Poems


Premium Member Someone To Care

Standing at the easel of life a portrait of a man so much in love with that to tempt the mood, 
unable to caress his wanton spirit when cohabiting with a spent part of life’s toxic waste, 
his need to step off the world to escape its inhabitants from choking him to death, 
yet somewhere deep within his sunken soul a desire, 
to carve out a memorial in poetry with words now strange to him, 
but words they were of love the sweet scent of flowers, sunshine and simple things like that, 
yet his battle against his poison was arduous and, on the wane.
 
a summer’s walk purged
winter through nonchalant eyes
seasons of despair

Suddenly amongst a throng of internet poets an angel appeared, 
one to care, when magically she began to chase away his need, when painting 
a different picture of the world one he once knew when that he was of a child, 
one he needed to be able to reach out to, when from across the curvature of the earth many 
words of hope, tenderness sincerity, words of understanding and purpose. 
Yet with an abruptness she gave him a choice 
‘Lie down my friend’ She said ‘Defeated and die’ 
Or rise everyday with the perpetual sun and live, give something of yourself, 
antidotes to aid those hankering down the same road you travelled, 
you can build on the positivity, armed with love and care,
and with it your body your mind your soul will be cleansed.

oh will-o’-the -wisp
those that walketh in the dark
reach for the sunlight

© Harry J Horsman 2022


revamp of an old free verse poem.
Categories: abruptness, angst,
Form: Haibun

Premium Member Battling Addiction

Sitting on the easel of life
a portrait of a man
so much in love with that
to tempt the mood,
a need to caress his wanton spirit
when becoming a spent part of life’s toxic waste,
his need to step off the world
to escape its inhabitants
from choking him to death.
Yet somehow somewhere deep within
his sunken soul a desire,
to carve out a memorial in poetry
with words now strange to him,
but words they were of love
words of flowers, sunshine and simple things like that.
Yet his battle against his poison
was arduous and on the wane,
when suddenly amongst a throng of internet poets
an angel appeared,
one to care, when magically she began
to chase away the need,
when painting a different picture of the world
one he once knew when that he was of a child,
one he needed to be able to reach out to,
When across virtual reality many words of love, tenderness
sincerity, words of understanding and purpose.
Yet with an abruptness she gave him a choice
“Lie down my friend” She said “Defeated and die”
Or rise everyday with the perpetual sunrise and live,
give something of yourself, anything to help those
going down the same road, your road to despair,
you can build on that, with your love your understanding
and with it your body your mind your soul will be cleansed!

© Harry J Horsman 2013
Categories: abruptness, angst, hope, love, memorial,
Form: Free verse

Abruptness

She stubbed her toe
And tripped over the edge
But he caught her
And held her tight
Tight enough she shattered
He put her back together three or four times,
But once another little lady tripped over the edge
He dropped her over
So as she fell
She thought to herself,
"That was abrupt."
Categories: abruptness, fate,
Form: Blank verse

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Dark Passage

I took a midnight journey through the darkest night. 
I started traveling before twilight. 
In the beginning I had no destination. 
As I progressed I learned through desperation. 
The shadows I passed kept calling my name. 
I didn't understand the nature of their game. 
The message they sent me seemed cruel and inhumane. 
They spoke about a journey on a sightless train. 
They said if I wanted to reach my goal. 
I'd have to release to them my soul. 
" That was too great a price. " I said. 
They replied, " Its too late, you're already dead. " 
As my screams echo through the darkness. 
My fate was clear with utter abruptness. 
The shadows reached out to take my hand. 
I withdrew and prepared for a stand. 
They told me not to fight or resist. 
It would be easier to relax and assist. 
My mind couldn't believe what my ears were hearing. 
From deep inside I could hear a cheering. 
Somewhere deep in my inner recesses, 
I was relieved there'd be no more guesses. 
My rage clenched fists began to relax. 
Thats when I saw the glint of the ax. 
With one final sound I heard the end. 
It made a sound just like the wind. 
The noise was the passage of my head. 
Leaving me forever doomed in the Halls of the Dead.


Written on 9/30/16
Categories: abruptness, dark, death, fear, horror,
Form: Rhyme

Devil's Backbone

Its as if you were raised on the devils backbone
Strong doesn't begin to cut, especially compared to your knife
You don't care if dead or actually alive
You bring an abruptness into any form of life

You make nothing seem like everything
But it comes with a price
You sure know how to make it look evil
When it comes to playing nice

And like an army vice
Why do you need the help?
Treating no one as you need them, ever
Never as how the sea breathes the kelp

So many take you for granted
But your not even noticing their ignorance
You've even found ways to be okay
Be comforted by it in your own way of bliss

And I wonder if you hold on to anything inside
Has another woman made you remember her with just a kiss?
I wonder why you act so mad yet don't mind if I follow
But your eyes all the same towards me hold this hiss

And ill never take you for granted
Don't even care if I ever get to hold your hand
When it comes to strength and handling loneliness
By someone like you, I'm proud to stand
Categories: abruptness, bible,
Form: Alexandrine

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Pumped

Reams of paper sit upon my desk accordioned untidily, dimpled where the cat stood or sat too long. The wastepaper basket was full of crumbled balls, reflecting the topography of the Nepali  adventure  I am trying to re-count. The heavily grained desk of golden oak supports a range of dictionaries and thesaurus’s, any one of which was heavy enough to use as a doorstop in a windstorm. An old Underwood typewriter sits, holding court, in the midst of all this, enamel black, with chrome edged keys and struts which depress at the tap of a fingertip. The radio blares, God Bless the Child Who’s Got His Own…as I formulate the saga of a heroine seeker, lead by two caramel colored Nepali boys, toward the foothills of the Himalayian Mountains.

The spindles holding the black ribbon snag in the clip-like opening which holds them taunt. Adjusting the tape turns my nails blue-black. I brush the hair from my eyes decorating the tip of my nose. Dirty business this writing. I tear another sheet from the rubber roller and crumple it with a sigh. “Damn, irascible machine don’t you have a soul? Give Mama something! Anything” I whine. 

Scared by the abruptness of my outburst, and the carriage's leap left, the scared-y-cat is propelled to the floor, sending a half-stack of unsullied paper to ground, covering my patent-leather pumps.

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Enjoy...while you read..Billy Holiday
Categories: abruptness, nostalgia, writing,
Form: Prose Poetry


Premium Member Floridians Asking Forgiveness

In a calm storm
the sea is waiting for refreshment.
The calm is a prelude
to more than peace.
Two times the lighthouse blinked,
abrupt in its stillness,
shy in its intention.

There, the ever present water
laps the shore with anticipation,
as if waiting to be born.
The mystery deepens
as the cold deep is mysterious,
peculiar in its abruptness.

The shelf of the sea is sloping,
sloping towards Atlantis.
All about the nets are cast,
waiting for a haul.
The interrupted daylight reels
	with discontent,
and the Floridians who sit comfortably
are one by one asking forgiveness.
© Bill Yates  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: abruptness, sea,
Form: Free verse

Suicide Default

Nothing was wrong with the leap;
It was made according to plan,
but the design was interrupted
by the abruptness of the plunge.
Maybe… there was a change of heart
somewhere in midair.
It is marked by a yelp of despair.
The sound of his pain bounces like a jax ball
from the walls of his cylindrical doom.
His every cry echoes like voices on St. Hilda’s square.
Each feeble movement, in his watery tomb,
vibrates like that old proverbial sound of the bongo.
He lie there; a bundle of pain,
and regret he didn’t measure the depth to his death.
The silence pinched the minute there,
while the little dirty-face angel argued his state elsewhere.
St. Hilda’s Memorial, the place of his death.
Under soft cotton covers he stole his last breath.
Categories: abruptness, deathsound, sound, , memorial,
Form: Free verse

The Perfect Kiss

It is the perfect handedness of endless bliss
the cadence, embrace the double-mirroring kiss,
silence is the most notorious happiness parenthesis.

Even when the dual night vigil blew
All the stretched-out empty days reminded you 
Of promises and tragedy that passion drew.
In the perfect kiss, we once knew.

But time has rendered a big part of this 
their brilliance and space are in abruptness.
Death neither waits for happiness nor success.

Our separation passed on in the brief moments mist
Into the sad, fleeting, strange distance eclipse. 
another starnge bliss paused here to gaze at this 
less lonely existence parenthesis.
Categories: abruptness, destiny, grief, imagery, moving
Form: Sonnet

Face It

Where to start,
these rushing thoughts...
Mindless responses without regard
have left me in fear and guard of my innocence.

I fled to comfort 
wrapping my limbs about familiarity 
causing discouragement to pierce the emptiness in my stomach,
where butterfly's once so gently flew. 

Unsettling words spill from behind tainted lips
pouring disgust on feeble ears of purity
turning me towards everything that is different from you...
wounds from the past poke and mock at my new scars,
now darting across my severely sore heart.

You give one hell of a performance 
and construct one brilliant ballet of self destruction
thanks to the man apart from the rest standing in the shadows of the act
I at least have hope...

**Stimulates from my insecurity and inability to conform in the abruptness of change. Even
when something better stands by masked by the shadows, beckoning me with allusiveness... **
Categories: abruptness, lifeme, me,
Form: Blank verse

Gone Missing

In  the still of the night
When the coldness bite
The northwinds the trees did rustle
As the fires flicker
With the harmonies of the nights bustle
There lies awake
Some instinctive mistake
The laws of the wild
Should bear  in mind

As we listen to our elder
Our healer, sorcerer and befriender
He who speaks the word of wisdom
The history of many generations
All clarity in his explanations

There is a surprise and shock to be
For those who do not hear, or fail to see
We must use our senses
As a standard for our defense

With careless deeds and hasty wishes
Casting whims to tasteless dishes
With carefree vigour and youthful pride
Venture in the unknown
Not noting the story you listen
Rebuking wisdom with a frown
In the abruptness of a storm
You are missing!


The uncertainties of the wild
The only possession you own
Gone,gone, gone, never to return.
Categories: abruptness, adventure, child, death,
Form: Free verse

Leaving For My Own Safety

You are in a rage of huff
Being very strongly gruff
The abruptness in your voice
Is not leaving me a choice
I've been down this road before
Knowing what pain is in store
If i stay with one more chance
You are giving me that glance
Thinking eye contact will be
Weakening me instantly
I have to be strong and not
Let you put pain in my heart
Like you've done time and again
I need my life to begin
Without these torturous days
Your tempers been in the way
Of our happy life together
Thinking back I thought whatever
Came our way we'd work it out
With compassion--you just shout
Screaming words right in my face
That take me to a darker place
Than the brightened one we shared
With love showing we both cared
I have to leave for my own safety
Before all your forcefulness breaks me
Categories: abruptness, abuse, anger, love hurts,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Culture Prison

Culture Prison

freedom
we all seek..
searching for that
which will make us
free..
when not discovered
resignation reigns
and quiet desperation
begins new searching
until an Abruptness
in a moment
sets us free...
Categories: abruptness, anxiety, depression, inspiration, perspective,
Form: Blitz

Premium Member Is Not This the Brevity of Human Life- -

Is not this the brevity of human life?
In my conciseness and exacting mentions
The proper use of words in my writing or speeches, huh
In awe, at naught-what
Is not this the brevity of human life?
While filling my mind of redundant thoughts
Conciseness What, Concision Why, 
Succinctness Yes,
Is not this the brevity of human life?
Economy of the stock market crashes the economy clashes raise more taxes , huh!
Language skill, consciousnesses, shortness IRS you either do or don’t pay your taxes; 
Briefness stills faithful wills, 
Pithiness jaunt, pith, incisiveness skills,
Is not this the brevity of human life?
Crispness words rips truths and lies spills;
And we're all compactness together, 
And we shall compression compactness, compression forever (huh); 
Laconic, terseness, pointlessness, curtness, abruptness;  (what)
"This  verse notable for its clarity and brevity"
Shortness of time, why;
"This verse is or isn’t the brevity of human life"
This verse	shortness, briefness, transience, What
It’s transitiveness, ephemerality What!,
Impermanence Huh??
Is, is not the brevity of human life-Huh
What is not this the brevity of human life?
Is not this the brevity of human life?


9/11/19
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Categories: abruptness, addiction, analogy, confusion, environment,
Form: Free verse

Blind

To truly see the eyes of an onlooker must be opened,
As for so long they are closed shut,
Complications which leave the mind stuck in a repetitive rut,
The blind continue on,
Even though they are unaware their own deception until all hope is gone,
The man or woman like a child crumples to a tortured tear,
Everything stripped from you blackness now your only dear,
All consumed in a searing abruptness,
Now intoxicated with fear the mind slips into deep twisted corruptness,
Done with normality,
Given up on finding reality,
Finally scraping bottom thou is loose from the bind,
With your torture in place no longer are you BLIND.
Categories: abruptness, people
Form: Rhyme
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